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I don’t think just “letting things happen” to a character is enough to combat the Mary Sue disease. A lot of stuff happened to Rey from the current Star Wars trilogy, but that hasn’t prevented her from being good at absolutely everything she does on the first try, which makes it kind of pointless for her to have a story arc. For example, she had no real motivation to seek out Luke Skywalker, because he had nothing to teach her, so that part of the story came off as contrived. Compare that with the story arc of young Luke in the original trilogy, who had to confront not just enemies and hazards but his own flaws before he could become a Jedi. That’s what made his story worth watching.

So, much news. First, chapter 2 of “Delta Delta Delta” is now posted. Lindsey and the other pledges have to show off their dancing skills—alone, and with a partner. Naughtiness ensues. Second, chapter 2 of “Mia: Confessions of a Dickgirl” is now in beta. I now have three chapters in beta simultaneously, which is a personal record. Yay? Third, I unexpectedly made massive progress on chapter 3 of “Little Rose” this week, so that will probably be posted soon. Although if one of those three chapters comes back from beta and needs revisions, that will take priority. Fourth: SWP1, regarding your additional comments on “Hot Yoga”: Thanks! I wanted them to have a different sort of relationship from any of the others in the group. Also, Adyson has always had a bit of a bad-girl vibe, and I’ve always thought Gretchen was the cutest and sweetest of the Fireside Girls (after Isabella, anyway), so it just seemed right for Adyson to be the domme and Gretchen the sweet little submissive. Yes, my whole mother’s duty fetish definitely came through big time in this story, given that two female characters took on the role of sex-teachers to the younger ones. We’ll be seeing more of that from both Vanessa and Dr. Hirano in “The More, the Merrier.”

Re: “Little Rose” Thanks! And thanks for being the first to comment on this story. Next chapter coming soon!

Well, neither chapter has returned from beta yet, but in the meantime, I’ve made a bit of progress on the next chapters of “Auntie’s Home” and “The Little Miss Cutie Patootie Pageant” and major progress on chapter 2 of “Mia: Confessions of a Dickgirl.” This chapter is a flashback to Mia’s teenage years, when she experienced her “second puberty” and the sharp spike in libido that came with it. It’s been hard limiting myself to one chapter’s worth of material, but I really want to get back to present time in the third chapter, so I’m sticking to the porny essentials.

My parents’ memorial service went splendidly. Lots of us got to tell stories about them, and everyone in attendance seemed glad to hear it. Now, 2 quick updates: --Chapter 2 of “The More, the Merrier” should be back from beta any time now. --Chapter 10 of “Multiversity” went off to beta this morning. Thus, one way or the other, I’ll have something posted soon.

Thank you! My foremost goal is always to be true to the characters. Oh, he totally would. And her speech pattern is somewhat based on his. Thank you! I have just sent chapter 10 off to beta, so it should be ready soon!

Now, I didn’t say that...

There are just two chapters left to go, so you’ll find out the answers to all of those questions pretty soon. Stay tuned!

Hey, APW. I wanted to apologize for my long radio silence regarding this fic. The truth is, while I liked the novelty of a story that works in tandem with the episodes, I ultimately like a story to have a plot arc, and a story that is at the whims of what happens week by week in canon can’t have that. But I’m glad some folks are enjoying it.

Hey there. Personally, I’m glad that summer is getting closer to its end, mainly because it’s hot as blazes where I live. Some days, going outside is like going to a crawfish boil – where you’re the crawfish. I hope it’s more comfortable where you are. As for the stories you asked about, progress may slow down for a bit because I’m now in charge of putting together the program for my parents’ memorial service. But that shouldn’t take too long. Anyway, here’s a quick update: Chapter 2 of “The More, the Merrier” is still in beta. I hope to have it back and posted some time in the next week. Chapter 3 of “Little Rose” is off to a good start, but there’s work to be done. Chapter 10 of “Multiversity” is coming along nicely; I'd say it's about three-quarters complete. It's going to be a bit longer than chapter 9. The 6th and final chapter of “The Miss Cutie Patootie Pageant” still has a ways to go. But I’ve got a solid outline of it in my head, and I’m writing bits of the text as they come to me. (This is the way a lot of my writing goes – scenes are written not in the order they happen, but in the order in which each one becomes clear enough in my head to be put into words.)

I had an idea for a fanfic and I thought, “But what would I even do with it if I wrote it?” An internet search brought me to FFN, where I saw just how vast and diverse the fanfic world is.

Hey, weird is what Gravity Falls is all about. Glad you like the story!

One idea (borrowed from the Hollywood playbook) would be to follow the smaller party for a little while and then cliffhang them (ie, leave them in a dangerous situation that there’s a good chance they won’t survive). Then, when they pop up later, it will be a surprise, but not a deus-ex-level surprise.

From DebbieCync on August 07, 2018 Encore! *holds up lighter* Thank you! I can’t take a bow yet, though; there’s still one chapter to go.

Thanks! When I write in first person, it’s usually because I want to show something interesting going on in the main character’s head—in this case, the dad’s unusual libido. Hope you’ll enjoy it. It may not be soon, though, because I’ve got a lot of other stories in progress. Hopefully you’ll like some of those, too.

Thank you! Thanks, Dan! There’s just one chapter to go; hope you’ll find it satisfying.

I’ve been crazy productive in the past couple of days. As a result, some news: --Chapter 2 of “Little Rose” is now posted! Rose is feeling better but still needs some help bathing, so she and daddy have some fun in the tub. --Chapter 2 of “The More, the Merrier” went off to beta yesterday. It’s a pretty long chapter (over 5,700 words), so it could be a little while before it comes back. I also made decent progress on a couple of original one-shot stories. One of them, which is close to completion, is called “The Happiest Place.” It’s about a creative meeting at a Disney-like company in another world where “children’s entertainment” has a whole other side to it. There will be one more chapter. We still have the swimsuit and talent competitions ahead of us—not to mention the crowning of the winner.

Not going to happen in this story, I’m afraid. But have you read “Whoops”?

Thanks for the plug for “Pony Dearest”! More importantly, I’m proud of you for going back to fix “Twinpregnation”’s overpopulation problem. When two or more reviewers point out the same issue, that tends to suggest that it’s worth addressing, and it’s awesome that you are that responsive to feedback.

Chapter 5 of “The Miss Cutie Patootie Pageant” is posted! Next up, chapter 2 of “The More, the Merrier.” This story just got it’s first review, so I have created a review reply thread for it.

This is where I’ll post replies to any reviews of my Phineas and Ferb story, “The More, the Merrier” (sequel to “Hot Yoga”). The orgy of B-list characters continues! More is coming soon! I hope to have chapter 2 off to beta this week.

Re: “Auntie’s Home” Wow. That blows my mind, considering that I have NINETY stories posted. You must be a voracious reader! And, of course, I am deeply flattered. I will have to check out fanfiction360’s work. Thank you for reading and the comment, and I will indeed continue!

If you write it, I’ll read it.

I’m pleased to say that chapter 5 of “The Miss Cutie Patootie Pageant” has just flown off to Betaland. I also made good progress on chapter 2 of “The More, the Merrier” tonight. This is going to be a long chapter—probably 5000 words or so. All of the remaining chapters will probably be about that long. I made the decision to change the “Hot Yoga” formula slightly, in that the perspective-shifts are not quite as frequent. More time is spent with each pair or trio of characters before we move on to the next. I think this will add to the erotic intensity of the story. BTW, for anyone looking for a hot incest story, I recommend JayDee’s “Twinpregnation.” Hot incest sex and romance, with girl-twin getting knocked up...it checks a lot of my boxes. Oh, and SWP1...you’ll just have to wait and see.

Re: “Impulse” Re: “Excuses” Thanks for commenting on these two stories. I’m glad you liked them. These two stories are somewhat different from all of the others I’ve written; whereas most stories take me months or years to write, the bulk of each of these was written in a day. In both cases, I just started writing compulsively and couldn’t stop until I was finished. I haven’t had that happen since, but I suppose you never know when the muse will body-slam you next.