GeorgeGlass

I don’t have any plans for a sequel, although I do plan to write more Loud House stories. I’m not big on aging up characters. My feeling is, if I want to write fanfic about adults, I’ll pick characters who are already adults.

Thanks! And the ending was actually the first part I came up with; the rest of the poem was all about getting to it.

That actually is what inspired me to write it. All four of my cats are foundlings (probably abandoned), and three of the four are black. BTW, if you want to see a whole bunch of adorable pictures, just Google “black kittens.” Thank you!

Thanks!

Title: Black Cat Tags: NoSex, poetry (I think that deserves a tag ) Summary: Life from a black cat’s point of view Halloweeny theme: black cats, superstition

Definitely, many of my stories originate with my feeling that I have a good story to tell. With regard to porn stories, they always begin as fantasies, and I write them up because I feel that they become hotter if they have an existence outside of my own head.

It all depends on which idea you think will make for the best story. But it doesn’t have to be all or nothing; you may decide that there is an element of the reviewer’s suggestion that you want to weave into the story direction that you have in mind.

Glad you didn't mind the lack of, um, payoff. Let's face it, if there's one Loud who would be voted Most Likely to Become a Supervillain, it would be...well, Lisa, but Lola would come in...okay, third after Luan, but still... I'd say it was a mix: Some were freaked out by having done it, and some were freaked out by having liked it. I see Lucy as the most introverted and, therefore, the most self-aware of the Loud kids. I loved writing that bit. My stories are probably predictable in some ways, but I like to at least keep readers guessing about whether there's going to be incestuous snuggling or projectile barfing at the end. Thanks for the beta and the comments!

Here, I’ll respond to reviews of short or obscure fanfics that may not warrant having their own response thread.

The important thing is to establish why Lilo and especially Nani consider snuggling naked together to be normal, acceptable behavior, at least from their own perspective. Maybe their parents were nudists or were otherwise comfortable being nude around the house, in front of the kids. Or maybe the frequent nudity was a habit that Nani fell into after their parents died; maybe there was a heat wave one summer, and Nani couldn't afford to keep the air conditioning running all the time (if they even have A/C at the house), so she started wearing less and less at home. Lilo, free spirit that she is, probably would think this was a dandy idea, to the point that Nani would have to remind her not to go running around outside without her clothes on. As for the snuggling, being each other's only family might draw them closer together. Nani is probably Lilo's only source of physical affection.

I’m so glad you mentioned that line. I’m not always able to come up with a last line for a story that I really like, but I was very happy with that one. Thank you! And no worries, there’s more on the way.

Re: “Snow” Thank you and thank you!

Thanks!

Just giving this another bump. DG must be extremely busy.

Pippychick, if I end up writing a story called “Terms of Service,” it’s gonna be your fault.

Maybe try writing something from a perspective you’ve never used before. I recently wrote a story in the first person plural (“We look down into the hallway and see...”), and it was a very interesting experience.

Hi, Lunarsilver! I have, in fact, thought about doing a gender-bent version of “A Beach Like No Other” – not least because I’m curious about whether it could work. But I’m still letting that idea percolate to see what bubbles up. FYI, just as the Queen of the Beach is an allusion to straight-shota artist Glassfish, whose artwork inspired “A Beach Like No Other,” the King of the Mists (who created a paradise for men and girls) is an allusion to the lolicon artist Fogbank. (He read the story and enjoyed it, including that bit.)

Not sure how you mean that. This isn’t Giffany. Giffany has pink hair that is tied with IDE cable; this character has blue hair that is tied with USB cable.

Thanks! That depends on in what you mean by “similar.” You might check out “May’s Family” or “The Playground.”

That sounds good, BW. Thanks!

I want to rework my story “Eddie Forever” and try to get it published, so I have deleted it from the archive. However, when I Google the story, it still shows up in the “playpen” (http://beta.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600108116&chapter=1). Is there a way to delete the story from that area, as well?

'kay. My friend and co-creator of this story, Eh Steve, came up with Mermadeline, and he and I worked out these bits to explain her accent. Who says exposition can’t be fun? Thanks! Specifically, a yuki-onna (snow woman). I've had a bit of a thing for them ever since I watched Rosario + Vampire. Mizore the snow-girl is hot. I'm going to have to remember “ambiguously-existent.” Nice. We'll see. That's really the only reason. Thanks again! If Ursula were involved, the accent question would be moot. Thanks for the review!

Wendy is dating a burly manotaur with a red beard, and Wendy’s father is a burly man with a red beard, so Squatchie is commenting that Freud was right about girls wanting to marry their fathers.