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Review responses for "Hot Yoga" [Phineas and Ferb]
GeorgeGlass replied to GeorgeGlass's topic in Threesome/Moresome
To answer your questions: I’m planning the same 4-chapter structure as before, although I’ll go to 5 chapters if that’s what it takes to tell the story properly. I’ve picked a couple of background characters that I think will be just right. The girl will be Sally, best known as the little girl from whom Vanessa swiped the Mary McGuffin doll (yes, there’s going to be a bit of confrontation over that), but she’s appeared in other episodes, too. The boy will be Pedro, who has been a background character since the very first episode ("Phineas and Ferb built a rollercoaster! Do you think we get a discount if we bring the flyer?"). Melanie will be spending some quality time with him. Balthazar actually has developed a crush on someone else: Gretchen. Adyson takes particular joy in getting Balthazar and Midas to DP Gretchen, and Balthazar has grown fond of her. He’s not sure what to do about it because Gretchen is Adyson’s girlfriend at this point, but Vanessa gives him some advice about how to make the situation work. In addition to the ideas I’ve mentioned above, here are a few other things I want to include: Monty fucks Jenny in front of Vanessa and Sally (with Vanessa fondling Sally as they watch), because Vanessa wants Sally to see what Monty is going to do with Sally later. Adyson and Gretchen, being young and flexible and having practiced some actual yoga in the preceding weeks, have an anal 69. Roger and Melanie discover that they share a liking for teenage girls and double-team Jenny. That’s all for now. Back to writing I go. -
Review responses for "Splinter" [Steven Universe]
GeorgeGlass replied to GeorgeGlass's topic in Threesome/Moresome
I could, but that wouldn’t be faithful to the character, which is what I’m all about. Luckily, there are plenty of other female characters to play with. -
Review responses for "Splinter" [Steven Universe]
GeorgeGlass replied to GeorgeGlass's topic in Threesome/Moresome
I’ve never seen Soul Eater, so I’m not familiar with the fic. But yeah, “Splinter” is definitely a harem-type story. Thanks! Hope you’ll like it. -
Review responses for "Hot Yoga" [Phineas and Ferb]
GeorgeGlass replied to GeorgeGlass's topic in Threesome/Moresome
I’m not sure yet when I’m going to start writing. With the number of characters involved, figuring out who gets it on with who at what time point is proving very tricky, particularly given that there are several specific things that I want to include at certain time points in the story (eg, I want Coltrane/Ginger to happen in the middle of the story and Coltrane/Dr Hirano to happen after that). Also, I always have a lot of stories in progress at once, and whenever I have time to write, I work on whichever one I feel most inspired to work on at that moment. Although this means that I am always making progress on something, I can’t really commit to a time frame on any particular story. -
Review responses for "Splinter" [Steven Universe]
GeorgeGlass replied to GeorgeGlass's topic in Threesome/Moresome
Not your usual kind of story, eh? Glad you’re liking it anyway. I’m not sure which character you’re talking about. If you mean Mystery Girl (whom fans have nicknamed “Punk Diamond”), then no, I don’t have plans to involve her. Lip piercings are a big turnoff for me. -
George Glass' Review Responses -- Original Fiction
GeorgeGlass replied to GeorgeGlass's topic in General
Re: “Fun in the Oven” Thanks! I do have one other in utero sex story, titled “Father’s Love,” if you want to check it out. -
Review responses for "Hot Yoga" [Phineas and Ferb]
GeorgeGlass replied to GeorgeGlass's topic in Threesome/Moresome
Yes, I will definitely be following up on that exchange between Dr. Hirano and Coltrane. I’ve never written a story that required as much outlining in advance as “Hot Yoga.” But this one will require even more, both because of the additional characters and because there will be even more partner-switching than in the first one (for Jenny, in particular). -
Review responses for "Hot Yoga" [Phineas and Ferb]
GeorgeGlass replied to GeorgeGlass's topic in Threesome/Moresome
So, I honestly wasn't certain whether I really wanted to write a sequel to “Hot Yoga,” because I am somewhat leery of sequels in general. Even when it comes to pornographic cartoon fanfics, I only like to write a sequel if I can think of some interesting way for the situation created in the first story to evolve. (For example, I wrote “Danville, We Have a Problem” to look at the evolution of the relationships that began in “Truth or Dare 2.0” -- particularly to explore what it would be like for Isabella to actually date Phineas instead of merely pining for him in silence.) Then, yesterday, I decided that I am indeed going to write a sequel to “Hot Yoga,” because ideas started coming to me fast and furious. Here are a few highlights: --The “yoga club” has been meeting weekly since it began with Jenny's yoga class. The story takes place during their fifth such meeting. --In this story, three new members will be inducted into the yoga club: 1. Roger Doofenshmirtz. I wanted to add an adult male to the mix because there aren't enough full-size cocks to go around, and I want at least one of the female characters to get well and truly DPed in this story. I picked Roger because (1) he is good looking as male P&F characters go, (2) he has a connection to the group through Melanie, and (3) I'd like to see some incestuous fucking between him and Vanessa. 2. A preteen boy. Although Melanie has some interest in teenage girls, her real passion is preadolescent boys. Balthazar Horowitz is the only such boy in the group, so Melanie is anxious to bring another one into the fold. 3. A preteen girl. Just as Melanie discovered her passion for young boys in “Hot Yoga,” Monty and Vanessa discovered a shared interested in young girls. They have gotten it on with both Gretchen and Adyson during previous sessions, but their access to Ginger has been limited because Dr. Hirano wants Coltrane to be Ginger’s first older boy. So Monty and Vanessa are interested in having another preadolescent girl join the group. I haven't yet decided who the young boy and girl will be, but I want them to be canon characters and not OCs, so I'll be looking through the P&F wiki for B-list characters that might be a good fit. --Adyson and Gretchen now have an established dom-sub relationship (with some mentoring from Vanessa). Adyson uses Gretchen for her own pleasure and also enjoys watching Gretchen being used by other members of the group. Adyson has recently begun making Gretchen wear a dog collar and sometimes a leash during sessions. Gretchen gladly goes along with all of this because it means she can have lots of perverted sex with no guilt (because nothing she does is her idea; Adyson ‘makes’ her do it). --Coltrane is now the Hiranos’ “family boyfriend.” He will have sex with all three Hirano women in this story. --Jenny now describes herself as “omnisexual.” She enjoys sex with males and females, whether child, teen, or adult, and she especially likes group sex. She also loves having sex with Midas and would like to try it with other species besides dogs. Maybe the story opens with her masturbating to one of her parents’ old National Geographics. I have more ideas than these, but these are the highlights. I think this story should be as much fun as the original. -
Review responses for "Hot Yoga" [Phineas and Ferb]
GeorgeGlass replied to GeorgeGlass's topic in Threesome/Moresome
Given that Jenny mentions at the end of the story that she and the others are planning to get together for more group sex, I was thinking that it would be an orgy at someone’s house (probably the Hiranos’, since that whole family is part of the “club” now). Thus, the sexual activities would be more planned and deliberate than those in the first story. -
Review responses for "Splinter" [Steven Universe]
GeorgeGlass replied to GeorgeGlass's topic in Threesome/Moresome
Glad you liked it. More action to come! We shall see... -
Review responses for "Hot Yoga" [Phineas and Ferb]
GeorgeGlass replied to GeorgeGlass's topic in Threesome/Moresome
I would like to talk more about the “Hot Yoga” sequel, but not until I have a few ideas to kick around. I’ll post here when I do. Hope you have a happy new year. -
I do several things to try to avoid “sameness” in my writing. The one I’m engaged in right now is writing a story based on someone else’s idea. I recently got my 300th follower on Inkbunny, and I celebrated with a story raffle: Anyone following me could submit a story idea, and I randomly selected a winner and am now writing a story based on the winner’s idea. I’ve done this a couple of times before, and both times, I’ve been happy with the result, even though the ideas were ones I would never have come up with myself.
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George Glass' Review Responses -- Original Fiction
GeorgeGlass replied to GeorgeGlass's topic in General
Re: “Quiet” Thanks! I’m particularly proud of this story. -
Yeah, I liked some of his stuff rather well. Too bad he imploded like that.
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The wife and I have been taking turns being sick since Thanksgiving weekend. I think we’re finally both past it. But at least I managed to make an awesome Christmas dinner (including my first baked Alaska).
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Review responses for "Hot Yoga" [Phineas and Ferb]
GeorgeGlass replied to GeorgeGlass's topic in Threesome/Moresome
Hey there. Had a nice Christmas; hope you did, too. BTW, since we’re not talking about “Hot Yoga” at this point, perhaps we could communicate via status updates or something instead. -
Review responses for "Hot Yoga" [Phineas and Ferb]
GeorgeGlass replied to GeorgeGlass's topic in Threesome/Moresome
No biggie. Yes, I’ll keep the story idea in the hopper and see if anything shakes out. Hope you’re having a good holiday season. -
Review responses for "Splinter" [Steven Universe]
GeorgeGlass replied to GeorgeGlass's topic in Threesome/Moresome
Thanks, and I shall. -
George Glass' Review Responses -- Original Fiction
GeorgeGlass replied to GeorgeGlass's topic in General
Re: “The AngelPlay Winter Catalog” I have not written a sequel, but it’s certainly possible that I will. I’d probably do a summer catalog next – something with some nice swimsuits for your furry little girl. -
Re: “The Couch Gag” Thanks! It was definitely meant to be funny; I only gave it the “Angst” tag because of the way the characters react in the end.
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Strange Things And Habits You Do While Writing
GeorgeGlass replied to Tcr's topic in Writers' Corner
Actually, I meant between stories, too. I do it because it forces me to be more creative and diverse in naming characters. But in your massive shared universe, unique names are even more important. -
Review responses for "Hot Yoga" [Phineas and Ferb]
GeorgeGlass replied to GeorgeGlass's topic in Threesome/Moresome
Hey there. Yes, I am done with NaNoWriMo. It was intense, but I managed to complete the 50,000 words on time. Regarding a “Hot Yoga” sequel, I think you may have misunderstood what I wrote. As I said, I thought your idea was kind of interesting, but I did not promise to actually write it up. For one thing, as I mentioned, I have a lot of other stories in the works right now. Also, I would want to give some more thought to the idea and see how well it fleshes itself out in my head before I committed to writing it. (This is pretty much how I decide which ideas to go forward with and which ones to leave alone.) In any case, thanks for the note, and I hope all is well with you. Have a great holiday. -
Strange Things And Habits You Do While Writing
GeorgeGlass replied to Tcr's topic in Writers' Corner
I never use the same name twice, at least not for major characters. The closest I’ve come is “Eric” and “Erik.” -
Review responses for "Splinter" [Steven Universe]
GeorgeGlass replied to GeorgeGlass's topic in Threesome/Moresome
More creepy rapey coming up! Thanks for the note.