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Re: “Wishful” From Jomahawk2694 on March 03, 2019 My pleasure! I’m glad it’s living up to your expectations.

Re: “Wishful” From JayDee on March 03, 2019 Why, thank you. I don't do a lot with male exhibitionism in my stories, but it seemed like the thing to use here. Jomahawk, for whom I'm writing this story (as a thank-you for all the beta-reading he's done for me), asked specifically for that to happen in this scene. I figured that King Jace's sexual prowess would have to come from more than just size and stamina. He's the kind of kid who always wants to impress the king. Angelica didn't even get a mention in chapter 1 (except indirectly at the end, when Jace hears someone outside the Queen Mother's chamber door), so I thought I should hurry up and establish her in this chapter. No prob. Thanks for reading and reviewing!

The muse has been generous this week. I made huge progress on chapter 2 of Wishful and will probably post it tomorrow. I also made good headway on chapter 4 of Mia: Confessions of a Dickgirl. Finally, I finished a short story titled “You Get What You Pay For.” This one is not for the faint of heart; it’s a furry story in which an infant boy rapes an infant girl. In other news: I recently made a decision that I think will benefit both readers and my story-writing process. Right now, I have eight chaptered stories that are partially posted. Because I'm working on all of these at once, plus a dozen one-shot stories and as-yet-unposted chaptered stories, it takes literally months for me to finish and post a new chapter for any given story. I think this delay is frustrating for readers, who may have forgotten what happened in the previous chapter by the time the next one is posted. So my plan is to limit the number of chaptered stories that I have going (ie, partially posted) at any given time, and to spend more time working on new chaptered stories before I start posting them. I tend to write in a non-linear fashion anyway -- for example, I'm working on a new Loud House story and have written at least a little material for all eleven chapters of it -- so I'll be able to post new chapters more quickly if each of them is closer to being complete when its “turn” comes. Therefore, I'm going to hold off on posting any new chaptered stories until I finish at least two or three of the ones that are already out there. I'm not sure which ones those will be, but Little Rose, Auntie's Home, and The More, the Merrier are probably closest to finished. Then again, I could have a huge burst of inspiration and finish one of the others first. I'm flighty like that.

Re: “Little Rose” From FlutteringWings on February 26, 2019 After reading your last comment, I predicted you'd like this chapter. I'm glad. You're very welcome. More fun to come!

Hello, all. FYI, chapter 6 of “Little Rose” is up. Not because I did a ton of work on it, but because a lot of it was already written, back when I first started working the story and was writing pieces in no particular order. For the same reason, chapter 7 probably won’t take that long to finish. SWP1, hope you’re feeling better. And I like your idea, except I’m going to make it all night instead of all day. Also, you’ve helped me figure out what the titles of the last 3 chapters will be: Chapter 9: Franny's Birthday, Part 1 Chapter 10: Franny's Birthday, Part 2 Chapter 11: Under the Stars

Re: “The Happiest Place” From Fairy-Slayer on February 14, 2019 Thank you, and thank you. In this universe, Rule 34 states that “If it exists, there might be some non-porn interpretation of it somewhere.” Like Disney, they know better than just about anybody what sells, and to whom. Yeah, me neither. It’s probably for the best. :| The bit about the dog was the first part I thought up, and it inspired all the rest of the story. Rather different situation: Mommy-manager wanting her teenager to be a star versus crappy parents making their kid miserable. Also, I have a tendency to want to subvert the “corporations are evil” trope. Corporations are run by people, and sometimes, those people act like human beings. It was mainly to show that Colquitt’s line about putting smiles on kids’ faces wasn’t just said in the abstract. He’s thinking about an actual kid when he says that. As for the last bit of “Apprentice,” you probably just figured out the twist before most people. You’re welcome. And as always, thanks for another uplifting review!

If anybody here is following “Country Summer,” I have a question for you. I'm thinking that I will wrap it up in another 3 chapters or so. I know what I want to do in the final chapter, but I'm haven’t yet decided what the penultimate chapters should include. So I thought I'd ask y'all for suggestions. Is there anything you'd especially like to see happen in this story before it ends? SWP1, sorry you’re feeling poorly.

This week, when I was driving home on Monday night, I suddenly realized how I wanted chapter 5 of “Auntie’s Home” to end. I banged it out over the next couple of days and, thanks to a quick beta by Jomahawk, got it posted on Friday. Not sure whether there will be 1 more chapter, 2 more, or 1 chapter plus an epilogue. Will just have to see how much material there ends up being. SWP1, haven’t seen Bumblebee yet, but will probably check it out when it makes it to DVD/Blu-Ray/Netflix/Amazon.

Hey, all. Didn’t make a lot of progress on anything last week, as I was a bit distracted by my “legit” writing projects. (I’m trying to publish a novel in RL.) But I continue to plug away; probably the next thing I’ll finish is chapter 5 of “Auntie’s Home.” Thanks! Not this year, but I have written one, if you haven’t yet seen it. It’s a big-brother/little-sister incest story titled “Some Girl.” Thanks! I’ve got another furry one-shot in the works, although it’s quite a bit darker than “First Time.” I didn’t actually mean for the chapters to get progressively longer; that was just how things worked out. Chapter 1 is the shortest because it’s mostly setup. Chapter 2 got into the action but didn’t have everyone participating yet (ie, Ginger hadn’t yet arrived, and Roger was just spectating). So it wasn’t until chapter 3 that the orgy was in full swing. Chapter 4 will be about as long as chapter 3 was, and chapter 5 (the final chapter) will probably be a bit shorter.

Got a new original short story posted this week: “First Time,” a furry, oppai loli story in which a feline-like alien explains his species’ facts of life by describing the sexual initiation of his 2-year-old daughter.

Thanks, Fanbay! I’m an editor in RL, so I’m pretty meticulous about spelling and grammar. And I have good betas.

Howdy, all. Sorry for my lengthy absence. Been a bit busy with various things – including a couple of chapters! Specifically, there are new chapters for Little Rose and Country Summer. Regarding SWP1’s comments: I really appreciate that you consider 3 chapters in a year and a half to be good progress. I’m not being ironic; I think it’s decent progress, too, but a lot of other folks might not. “Truth or Dare 2.0” wasn’t exactly a fan favorite, but I really loved writing it, so I appreciate your mentioning it. One thing Truth or Dare 2.0 and Hot Yoga have in common is that they pull in a lot of 2nd-tier characters from the PnF world. I sometimes like doing that, because a character that hasn’t had a lot of screen time leaves a lot of I do make an effort to make my stories consistent with canon. And now that the show is over, the events of “Hot Yoga” and “The More, the Merrier” could have happened sometime after the finale. Yes, definitely. Thanks for the comments. Hope your 2019 is off to a great start!

Finally got around to reading and reviewing the rest of these. Now the holidays are officially over.

Can you be more specific about what you mean by stories like that one? You mean stories where a shota semi-coerces a loli into sex?

Re: “Quiet” From have_a_little_feith on January 02, 2019 What Quiet has is something like Asperger’s or autism, but not exactly like it. I figured that people living in the paleolithic era, where the environment is completely different (different chemicals, different viruses, and some minor physiological differences from modern humans) wouldn’t necessarily have exactly the same neurologic issues that modern people do. Well, you don’t actually have to sign in to read the forums, but I guess you won’t know that unless you happen to try.

Hey, all. Sorry for the prolonged silence; I’ve been traveling for the holidays and had limited internet access. What’s more, Microsoft went and changed Hotmail so that I can’t access it from my phone anymore; thus, I can only check my Hotmail on my laptop, which I means that I won’t always be getting alerts about new reviews in a timely fashion anymore. Anyway, on to news. As SWP1 observed, chapter 3 of “The More, the Merrier” is posted, and at ~8000 words, it’s packed with orgiastic goodness. Probably the next thing I’ll finish will be chapter 8 of “Country Summer.” I’m also going to try to finish one of my one-shot stories to make room on the List of 20 for – and I’ll preface this with “God help me” – a She-Ra and the Princesses of Power story. SWP1, with regard to your comments about the TMTM chapter: I don’t know about the next chapter, but we’ll probably see it at least once more before the story ends. In the initial draft of the chapter, I kept having Midas think of Gretchen as a “bitch” in the sense of a female dog. But Jomahawk, who is betaing this story, thought the repeated use of “bitch” came across as too crass. I thought he had a point, so I changed “bitch” to “female” in Midas’ thoughts. Adyson still used “bitch” in her dialogue, of course. There are only a couple of other choices besides Stacy, so odds are good that you can guess. Sally is an innocent (up until now, at least), so I wanted to capture that in the story. Believe it or not, that scene was purely the result of Adyson and Dr. Hirano being the only characters left after I decided what to do with everyone else. I was forced to get creative and figure out why those two would pair up, and I had to go through a few drafts of the scene before I was happy with it (because I was refining the nature of their interaction with each draft), but I had fun doing it. Hope you had a great Christmas, and Happy New Year!

From The Evil Fairy on December 26, 2018 Thank you! I wanted somebody who could do the Alfred Hitchcock "Good eeeevening" thing, and there Lucy was. I really wanted to do a "the twins get creepy" thing, and having them gang up on a sibling seemed like a good way to do that. I had plans for pretty much all of the other characters except Luan at that point, so she became their victim-turned-master. Then I became enamored of the idea of showing a bit of what lies beneath Luan's constant joking. I don't always get a chance to go for maximum sensuality in a scene, but I really tried for it there. So glad you liked it. It's pretty twisted, but I loved writing it. "In character" is always high praise to me. When it comes to fanfic, I live for authenticity. Thanks! I thought about making it 2 chapters, but Fairy Slayer (who betaed) and I agreed that it would work better as a oneshot, with nothing to break up the flow. Thank you!

From Nick on December 21, 2018 My apologies for the slowness of this reply. I’ve been travelling for the holidays and just haven’t had a chance. Thank you! (I think.) I hope there's no real-world version of this pageant, but one never knows. I figured Lynn would be okay with it as long as (1) she was able to personally ensure Lola and Lana's safety (which she was), and (2) there was the possibility that Lynn would get to kick someone in the face. Thanks! In writing fics like these, I've had to come up with a lot of ways in which normally unacceptable behavior can become acceptable, and one of them is taking on an alternate persona like Lincoln did. I felt like the story didn't really need that. The periodic revelations about the nature of the contest and Lincoln's responsibilities seemed like twists enough. I wrote this story after finishing two incest-intensive ones -- "Whoops" and "The Loud House After Dark." I wanted to set incest aside this time around. (Of course, there's more of it coming, as in my upcoming story "Enter the Sandboy.") Not planning a sequel at this point, but more Loud House stories are in the works. Thanks for the review!

That’s certainly possible. I tried to make his speech pattern age-appropriate, but he could always be pretending to be younger than he is.

I figured a lot of people here would probably be skipping this one. I appreciate your willingness to read parts of it, at least. Honestly, I mainly wrote "A Visit From Shota Claus" for the holiday story contest on Lolicit. But I was so excited to have finally managed to write something Christmas-themed that I went ahead and posted it here, too, even though I knew it wouldn't be popular.

Finished and posted. Whew! Now I’ll have time to see what the other holiday sickos wrote.

“A Visit From Shota Claus” seems to be coming along nicely; I expect to have it ready by the weekend. When I took a break from that, I unexpectedly finished chapter 7 of “Make It All Better,” a story that has been in progress for three and a half years now. I have to be in a particular frame of mind to work on it because the characters are so complex, and a lot goes on under the surface. Yet, at the same time, the story is relentlessly pornographic. Trying to be deep and shallow at the same time is tricky, but I love making the attempt.

Title: A Visit From Shota Claus Tags: MF, Minor1, not sure what else yet Summary: When Ellen finds herself struggling to assemble her child’s gift on Christmas Eve, she receives some unexpected tech support – and more – from Santa’s young son.

It would be helpful to potential readers if you added the plot summary and the content tags to your post. That will give everyone a better idea of whether your story is their kind of thing.