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Some author notes about “Depravity Falls.” Beware SPOILERS! The story has 11 chapters, which is the same number of chapters in my other Gravity Falls story, “Multiversity.” This is just a coincidence. When Dee tells Mabel about the various things one can use to tie someone up for bondage fun, she mentions pink drapery cord. This came from a post I once saw from a lesbian who asked (facetiously, I think), "It's not bondage if you use pink drapery cord, right?” The expression "bopping the baloney" as a euphemism for male masturbation comes from one of the National Lampoon Vacation movies. I made up "whacking the olive loaf" myself, although it was inspired by a line from a Bloom County comic strip in which Opus confesses to going berserk and beating up a street mime with an olive loaf. The quote "Once is happenstance, twice is coincidence, three times is enemy action" is from Ian Fleming's novel Goldfinger. Auric Goldfinger says this when James Bond claims to have run into him by chance for the third time. The shape of the Choco-Blocko bars – slanted at one end and straight at the other – is meant to resemble the individual stones of a pyramid. Likewise, the box of chocolates that Dee gives Mabel to share with Brenda and Candy resembles the base of a pyramid. These were meant as oblique hints about what Dee really is. Mabel's Rainbow Jumper sweater is a nod to Disney cartoon series The Replacements. Riley Daring, one of the show's main characters, is a big fangirl of the Rainbow Jumper film franchise. Mabel's use of the word "hoo-ha" as slang for vagina in chapter 3 was inspired by a note Gravity Falls creator Alex Hirsch received from Disney's Standards and Practices criticiizing his use of that word on the show (because it is slang for vagina). Hoo-Ha Owl's Pizzamatronic Jamboree is where Soos takes Melody on a date in the episode "Soos and the Real Girl." Dipper’s reference to Standards and Practices in chapter 10 is a reference to another note Alex Hirsch received from Disney’s S&P department. In the episode “Summerween,” we see a flyer for a party that Tambry is putting on, and there was originally a line on the flyer that read, “Bottles will be spun.” S&P didn’t approve this, so Hirsch just wrote “Not approved by S&P” on the flyer instead. I did not invent the word "vagenda." I saw it in a Tumblr post once. Mabel's dream in chapter 10, in which she tells "Hooty" to go away, is a reference to the Disney show The Owl House, on which Alex Hirsch provides the voice of Hooty (among other characters). Regarding the various historical figures Dee claims to have influenced in her diatribe near the end of chapter 11: Marquis de Sade: 18th-century French writer of pornography who depicted sexual acts considered scandalous at the time. The word "sadism" is taken from his name. John Wilmot (2nd Earl of Rochester): A 17-century English satirical poet known for his sexual excesses. He died of venereal disease at age 33. Leopold von Sacher-Masoch: A 19-century Austrian nobleman from whose name the word "masochism" is taken. Anaïs Nin: A 20th-century French writer best known for her journals and erotica, as well as her affair with American author Henry Miller. Lolo Ferrari: The stage name of French performer Eve Valois, who for a time had the largest breasts in the world. Her breast implants were supposedly designed by one of the engineers who developed the Boeing 747. She died by suicide in 2000.

The big news is that, at last, the final chapter of “Depravity Falls” has gone off to beta. Also, regarding catchup posts, I just posted my Loud House oneshot “Royal Wedding” here on AFF.

“Smooshed” is now fully posted, and I’ve also posted the existing chapters of “Out of Hand” (ie, chapters 1 and 2). Just a little catchup posting left to do.

Okay, so I’ve caught up on posting “Secret Sash,” “Into the Third Dimension,” “Depravity Falls,” and “What Counts as Incest?” here on AFF, as well as my Halloween story “Horseman.” But I’ve still got more catching up to do.

From InvidiaRed on February 15, 2023 Re: “Horseman” Thank you! The spinner landed on Happy Ending this year.

From BronxWench on February 15, 2023 Re: “Horseman” I don’t know terribly much about sororities or secret societies myself, but my wife went to an all-women’s college that was a lot like a giant sorority. Her school was used in my mental model of Mount Pleasant College. FYI, the town of Mount Pleasant, NY is the home of the village of Sleepy Hollow. *chuckle* I went with the vegetable motif in part because I figured no one would see it coming. Thank you! You’re a class act, BW.

I kinda like Scratch Versus Itch. But that may put too much emphasis on Scratch, when Molly is really the central character.

Once again, I come to this thread with hat in hand, looking for ideas for a title. The story is a The Ghost and Molly McGee fanfic in which two ghostly siblings convince Molly and Darryl to lend them their bodies for a few hours. This, of course, leads to the ghosts attempting to have sex in Molly and Darryl's bodies. Scratch prevents this by getting the ghosts to switch to two other bodies to do the deed. Nonetheless, the ghosts have awakened a kind of infectious lust in Molly, who proceeds to seduce various other characters in the succeeding chapters. Only gradually does Scratch realize what is going on, leading him to try and find a cure for Molly's contagious nymphomania. Full disclosure: This story was originally going to be a one-shot that was just about the sibling possession part and that I was going to call "Sibling Revelry." That will still work as the title of the first chapter, but not for the story as a whole. Any ideas?

So, it looks like The Big Day has come, and it is possible for authors to post stories and chapters again. I have a LOT of catch-up posting to do, so I won’t try to do it all at once. I think I’ll focus on completing existing stories first, starting with “Secret Sash” and “Into the Third Dimension.” Also, and I really mean it this time, I think the final chapter of “Depravity Falls” will be ready for beta by the weekend.

From Nytefyre on February 10, 2023 >Wow, interesting alternate world. It would\'ve been interesting to see Lawrence and Linda interacting. You'll see a fair amount of Lawrence and Linda in the next chapter. >Would she still have been Lindana at some point? Good question. There's a lot about the Third Dimension that I never fully worked out, like whether there are female celebrities. There probably are, but they would have owners instead of managers. >I don\'t know if there will be more, but the person dressed in black is still a lingering plot thread, as is what happened to this dimension\'s Candace? It would be interesting if they swapped and how she reacted/acclimatized to her new dimension. All will be revealed as soon as I can post again. >Thanks for writing and sharing! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Update: “What Counts as Incest?” is already back from beta. I just posted it on AO3, and I’m about to post it on Hentai Foundry, too. (The characters are “of age,” so HF will allow it.)

From InfamousDX on February 09, 2023 Thanks! Honestly, I’m not really comfortable writing fanfics about live-action shows, even if they’re based on a cartoon.

You probably want the bad news first: I’m STILL not that close to having chapter 11 of Depravity Falls ready for beta. It’s 8400 words and counting, so it’s not like I’m not making progress; it’s just that the top of this particular mountain keeps moving higher. On the good news front, I just sent my original one-shot “What Counts as Incest?” off to beta. So that one may get posted soon.

From Nytefyre on February 08, 2023 Thanks! In a story this long and involved, foreshadowing is a must. Mwahahahaha... Joyous, disastrous, who knows? I mean, besides me. Hmmm... Thanks for reading and reviewing!

From Nytefyre on February 08, 2023 Interesting theory. Thanks! I love writing that kind of thing, which is why so many of my stories feature underage characters. There's a lot of ground still to cover, but don't worry--you'll see Wendy in action again. Stay tuned! All will be revealed in time. Thank you!

Holy cow, Nytefyre, did you actually read and review 4 of my stories in ONE DAY? You are voracious! Now, on to the responses. Re: Big Lincoln, Little Lincoln From Nytefyre on February 08, 2023 You're welcome! Glad you enjoyed it. Also--and this is the first time I've mentioned it to anyone--I'm planning another Loud House story set on Earth 17.2. Working title: "Casino Night." Re: Clydeborg: The Six Million Dollar Ladies’ Man From Nytefyre on February 08, 2023 There's nothing like causing a family-wide disaster to give you some perspective. It was indeed. No plans for a sequel at this point. You're most welcome, and thanks for the review!

Update: Chapter 2 of “Out of Hand” came back from beta this morning, so I’ve posted it on AO3. I’m hoping to be able to post it here soon, too (along with a mess of other backlogged stuff).

Well, it seems I was too optimistic in hoping to have chapter 11 of Depravity Falls finished by this weekend. Not that I haven't made good progress; it's just that there's more left to write than I'd realized. So now I’m hoping to have it beta-ready by this time next week. Progress on the final story of “The Power Arcane” is slow but steady. I can’t say yet when that will be ready, but it WILL be ready eventually. I have a short story that should soon be ready for prime time titled “What Counts as Incest?” Its about two older-teen siblings who use some increasingly questionable logic to talk themselves into having a night of sexy fun together.

Re: “What Counts as Incest?” From LadyFreelove on January 31, 2023 Thank you! I had a lot of fun writing this story from the perspectives of both mother and daughter and trying to give them distinctive voices.

Sorry—Hall of Shame’s description reads “Here be plagiarists, and other nasties,” so I thought it was the right place. I didn’t scroll down further to see that there was also a Plagiarism section of the Report forum.

A couple of updates: --Chapter 2 of “Out of Hand” is in beta. --I’m hoping to have a complete draft of the final chapter of “Depravity Falls” ready for beta by the end of the week.

@Deadman’s recent post brought this question to mind: What do you consider the best way to write an orgy scene? My usual approach is this: After I make a list of the participants and who will be getting it on with whom, I describe the action in round-robin fashion, writing a few paragraphs about what each pair or group is doing and then moving on to the next until I’ve come full circle and then starting at the top again. I feel like this approach provides the reader some sense that the action is all going on simultaneously. However, I’m also concerned that the constant jumps from one group to the next are too disruptive for at least some readers. Thoughts?

In a gangbang, usually one or two people are the center of attention. It's often one or two women being fucked by several men (one, two, or three at a time, with the others waiting their turn), but it could be the other way around, too. In an orgy, in contrast, no one person is the focus; virtually everyone is having sex with someone at any given time.

I think I feel that way. Even though I like watching Big Mouth, I’ve never felt the urge to write fanfic about it, and I think a lot of that is because there’s no pervy thing I could do with those characters that hasn’t already been done in canon.

Thank you! I’ll email them.