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So, a few bits of news: --I hope to have chapter 5 of “Out of Hand” off to beta this week. --I’ve started mulling ideas and outlining a sequel to my Big Hero 6 story, “Augmented.” Like the upcoming movie Twisters, this is a sequel no one asked for , but I just like the idea and am going for it nonetheless. --I have nearly finished an original short story, which I expect to post this week. It’s called “The Worst,” and it’s about a 12-year-old girl who likes to take her younger sister to an isolated beach where boys can take advantage of her. Yes, it’s one of my sick ones. --Even though only a few episodes of the new Disney toon Kiff have come out so far, I already have an idea for a fic that I want to write--a non-porny one, believe it or not.

Yahegai, you are an animal! An extremely literate animal. Here are my responses to your many reviews: Re: "Satisfaction" Thank you! Originally, chapter 1 was going to be the whole story (this is also true of "The Interview"), but then I realized there was a lot more I wanted to do. Re: "Side Effects (COMPLETE)" Especially Greg, who wasn't even under the influence like Melanie was. Re: "The Playground" Thanks! Re: "The AngelPlay Winter Catalog" Glad you liked it. Re: "Keene's Really Good Week" Thanks! Re: "Keene's College Weekend" Isn't he, though? FYI, I've been kicking around ideas for a third and final story in this series, but nothing has really gelled yet. Re: "Daddy's Rules" Yeah, Ianu is a completely bad apple. Re: "The Single Mothers' Support Group" Thanks! It was a fun change of pace to write an all-dialogue story like this. Re: "Snow" Thank you! Re: "Darla" Why, thank you. Re: "Twins: An Incest Poem" Thanks! I'm only rarely inspired to do poetry, so I appreciate your appreciation. Re: "Darla's Dad" Oh, indeed. Re: "Darla's Dad" As an author of both fan fiction and original fiction, I was quite flattered that someone wanted to write a fanfic of my original fics. And I agree that she did a great job. Re: "The Small Hours" Thanks! I'm usually very concerned with plot and setup, but this time I was like, "Dang it, this time I'm going to write a PWP story." Re: "Wish List" Thank you! The trickiest part of writing this story was not making it too similar to the "Wild Side" stories. Re: "Some Days, You Get the Bear" Thanks! I wrote this one for a story contest that had a 500-word limit, and I did not have an easy time making it that short, so I appreciate the compliment. Re: "Backward Glance: A Multi-temporal Romance" Thanks! I'm very happy with how this one turned out. Now, I see that you’ve left another batch of reviews, which I’ll respond to soon.

Yahegai, you are one heck of a voracious reader! (Not to mention a fast reader.) Here are my responses to all of your recent reviews. Re: “Firelight” Thank you! In this story, I was kind of trying to turn the prostitute/john trope on its head by (a) making the man the prostitute and (b) making their interaction respectful instead of degrading. I’m glad you liked the result. Re: "Wild Side" Thanks! This started as a simple one-shot story but, as you’ve seen, it grew into a lot more because I became so fond of the characters. Re: "Everything She Needs" Thank you! Re: "Make It All Better" Thanks! This story was meant to be a character study in addition to being pornographic. I really enjoyed showing the contrast between Dad and Angela’s very normal life together versus Daddy and Angie’s wild one. I felt that the story needed a twist at the end, and Gloria knowing about everything her husband and daughter had been doing seemed like the perfect thing. It also gave credence to Dad/Daddy’s statement at the beginning that his wild sex life with Angie was not about hurting Gloria. Re: "Leilaya's Evening" I’m glad. Like “Firelight,” this was a story in which I tried to subvert the prostitution trope by making the experience about fun instead of money and degradation. Re: "The Last Toy" Re: "The Interview" Thanks for the comment! This story was another effort to turn tropes on their heads: The corporation turns out to be benevolent instead of evil, and life as a human animal is pleasant and not horrific. Re: "Cruel Nature" Glad you liked it, considering that this is one of my nastier ones. Re: "A Day at the Beach" Glad you enjoyed! Once again, this was me taking what seems logical and expected and doing the opposite. My original idea was that the MCs would go to a secluded beach where they could have their incestuous fun alone, but then I decided to put them on a beach full of like-minded people instead. Thanks so much for all the comments!

First off, I also like this new feature of being able to see that people have recommended their story. And yes, I’d be glad to be able to see who recommended my stories. But I think readers would like that, too, because if they can see who recommended a story they like, they can look and see what other stories that reader recommends. Just throwing that out there. I’ll understand if there are reasons why it’s technically difficult or inadvisable security-wise.

I forgot to announce yesterday that the newest chapter of “Out of Hand” is posted! Chapter 4: Faculty Meeting

Re: “Make It All Better” From Brugremawes on March 16, 2023 Yeah, I could see it.

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“Weakness” is posted! Most teenage boys can only dream of having a sure thing, especially in the form of a hot, busty girl. But Jimmy has found a way, and he doesn't mind at all that the girl is his sister—or that her consent is dubious at best.

I’ve been a little slow about getting “Weakness” out there, but that should happen this weekend. Also, I just got chapter 4 of “Out of Hand” off to beta.

I don’t have immediate plans for a sequel to “Can’t Resist Her,” but I would certainly write one if a good enough idea hit me. And I will most certainly be writing more lesbian stories, including incestuous ones.

I’d love to tell you that I always know exactly when and how a story will end. And that’s often the case, but definitely not always, because I sometimes write stories that don’t have a real plot arc. The chapters are more like series of vignettes in chronological order. One of these stories is “Country Summer,” a furry fic about a city girl who goes to the country to spend a month on her aunt and uncle’s farm and has one sexual adventure after another with the far more sexually liberal country folk. I had no plan for how long it would go or what would happen in each chapter; I was just pantsing it. But while I was writing chapter 8, I started thinking, “This story has got to end at some point. What would be a good way to do that?” I ended up writing 3 more chapters—2 for the grand finale (a big birthday party with lots of sexy fun), and 1 for the denouement. And I think that worked pretty well.

Re: “There's a New Seraph in Town” From Yahegai on March 04, 2023 Thank you! I originally wrote this for a Halloween story contest on Hentai Foundry, and I decided at the time that it would be a nice change of pace to do a feel-good piece instead of a horror story. I’ve always been proud of the result.

So, a couple of things: Because of my frenetic approach to working on stories, sometimes I don’t quite realize just how far along I am in writing a given story. So once in a while, I find myself saying, “Wait, did I just finish this?” Such is the case with “Weakness,” a near-PWP story about a brother who knows how to make his sister horny enough to do anything—whether she likes it or not. So now it just needs some proofing; I’ll probably post it early next week. There’s a story I’ve been working on for years, about a mom who secretly wants her son to dominate her and finds a way to get him to do it without him knowing that it was her idea. All this time I’ve been calling it “Untitled mother-son shotadom story,” but today—while I was trying to think of a title for a different story—I thought of a title for this one: “Master Plan.”

Making him an earl will really draw the romance-novel crowd. Wait, what were we talking about?

There are lots of recurring themes and devices in my stories, chiefly because there are only so many ways to plausibly get characters to engage in taboo sexual acts. One device I use a lot is ritual: The characters following some pattern of behavior that puts them in a mental space where they do things they wouldn’t ordinarily do. Like when the sister and brother in my story “Excuses” say and do the same things they’ve done on previous nights when they’ve had sex so as to talk themselves and each other into believing that they HAVE to do it.

The latest chapter of “Out of Hand” is posted! Chapter 3: Let’s Spend the Night Together

Re: “Can’t Resist Her” From lexlogan8 on February 26, 2023 Thank you! Glad you liked the pacing (something I try to get right but don’t always succeed at).

I try not to have more than about 4 different partially posted stories going at the same time, because I don’t want to keep the readers of any given story waiting ages while I work on the others. In fact, the only reason I make the limit as high as 4 is that, with my ADHD writing style, I usually have at least some of every chapter of a story already written by the time I finish and post chapter 1. I also limit myself to having no more than 20 stories in the writing stage at any given time. Only when I finish a story do I allow myself to take a new one out of my Ideas file and start writing it.

Some news: --I'm pleased to report that chapter 3 of "Out of Hand" went off to beta yesterday. --I have now caught up on posting the things I couldn't post during the read-only period. So my Big Hero 6 story "Augmented" is now here on AFF. I also posted my Halloween story from last year, “Night of the Were-Bimbos,” to my “Halloween Treat Bag.” –I got a pleasant surprise today when I ran across the list of the top 50 most recommended authors in the AFF archives and found that I was tied for #3!

Re: “What Counts as Incest?” From lexlogan8 on February 22, 2023 Thanks! Rationalization is fun.

I just looked at my list of stories and saw that for some of them, there is no longer punctuation of any kind in the summary. For example: As Star struggles to find her place in the world a newly formed cult declares Marco kingand tells him that to save his kingdom he must take nine wives and get them with child This was originally As Star struggles to find her place in the world, a newly formed cult declares Marco king, and tells him that to save his kingdom, he must take nine wives and “get them with child.” This hasn’t happened to all of my stories, just some of them. When I tried to fix one by putting the punctuation marks back in, the periods and commas didn’t stick, and the quotation marks were replaced with the number 34: Sequel to 34Rated F A Phineas and Ferb Sex Comedy34 Having enjoyed helping Phineas and Ferb make an adult film the Fireside Girls decide to spend the next day earning more sex-related patches for their 34Secret Sash34 This appears to have happened only to stories that I either posted or added chapters to since the archive was taken out of Read Only mode—but again, only to some of them.

“Depravity Falls” is finished!

Some author notes about “Depravity Falls.” Beware SPOILERS! The story has 11 chapters, which is the same number of chapters in my other Gravity Falls story, “Multiversity.” This is just a coincidence. When Dee tells Mabel about the various things one can use to tie someone up for bondage fun, she mentions pink drapery cord. This came from a post I once saw from a lesbian who asked (facetiously, I think), "It's not bondage if you use pink drapery cord, right?” The expression "bopping the baloney" as a euphemism for male masturbation comes from one of the National Lampoon Vacation movies. I made up "whacking the olive loaf" myself, although it was inspired by a line from a Bloom County comic strip in which Opus confesses to going berserk and beating up a street mime with an olive loaf. The quote "Once is happenstance, twice is coincidence, three times is enemy action" is from Ian Fleming's novel Goldfinger. Auric Goldfinger says this when James Bond claims to have run into him by chance for the third time. The shape of the Choco-Blocko bars – slanted at one end and straight at the other – is meant to resemble the individual stones of a pyramid. Likewise, the box of chocolates that Dee gives Mabel to share with Brenda and Candy resembles the base of a pyramid. These were meant as oblique hints about what Dee really is. Mabel's Rainbow Jumper sweater is a nod to Disney cartoon series The Replacements. Riley Daring, one of the show's main characters, is a big fangirl of the Rainbow Jumper film franchise. Mabel's use of the word "hoo-ha" as slang for vagina in chapter 3 was inspired by a note Gravity Falls creator Alex Hirsch received from Disney's Standards and Practices criticiizing his use of that word on the show (because it is slang for vagina). Hoo-Ha Owl's Pizzamatronic Jamboree is where Soos takes Melody on a date in the episode "Soos and the Real Girl." Dipper’s reference to Standards and Practices in chapter 10 is a reference to another note Alex Hirsch received from Disney’s S&P department. In the episode “Summerween,” we see a flyer for a party that Tambry is putting on, and there was originally a line on the flyer that read, “Bottles will be spun.” S&P didn’t approve this, so Hirsch just wrote “Not approved by S&P” on the flyer instead. I did not invent the word "vagenda." I saw it in a Tumblr post once. Mabel's dream in chapter 10, in which she tells "Hooty" to go away, is a reference to the Disney show The Owl House, on which Alex Hirsch provides the voice of Hooty (among other characters). Regarding the various historical figures Dee claims to have influenced in her diatribe near the end of chapter 11: Marquis de Sade: 18th-century French writer of pornography who depicted sexual acts considered scandalous at the time. The word "sadism" is taken from his name. John Wilmot (2nd Earl of Rochester): A 17-century English satirical poet known for his sexual excesses. He died of venereal disease at age 33. Leopold von Sacher-Masoch: A 19-century Austrian nobleman from whose name the word "masochism" is taken. Anaïs Nin: A 20th-century French writer best known for her journals and erotica, as well as her affair with American author Henry Miller. Lolo Ferrari: The stage name of French performer Eve Valois, who for a time had the largest breasts in the world. Her breast implants were supposedly designed by one of the engineers who developed the Boeing 747. She died by suicide in 2000.

The big news is that, at last, the final chapter of “Depravity Falls” has gone off to beta. Also, regarding catchup posts, I just posted my Loud House oneshot “Royal Wedding” here on AFF.