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I forgot to announce yesterday that the newest chapter of “Out of Hand” is posted! Chapter 4: Faculty Meeting

Re: “Make It All Better” From Brugremawes on March 16, 2023 Yeah, I could see it.

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“Weakness” is posted! Most teenage boys can only dream of having a sure thing, especially in the form of a hot, busty girl. But Jimmy has found a way, and he doesn't mind at all that the girl is his sister—or that her consent is dubious at best.

I’ve been a little slow about getting “Weakness” out there, but that should happen this weekend. Also, I just got chapter 4 of “Out of Hand” off to beta.

I don’t have immediate plans for a sequel to “Can’t Resist Her,” but I would certainly write one if a good enough idea hit me. And I will most certainly be writing more lesbian stories, including incestuous ones.

I’d love to tell you that I always know exactly when and how a story will end. And that’s often the case, but definitely not always, because I sometimes write stories that don’t have a real plot arc. The chapters are more like series of vignettes in chronological order. One of these stories is “Country Summer,” a furry fic about a city girl who goes to the country to spend a month on her aunt and uncle’s farm and has one sexual adventure after another with the far more sexually liberal country folk. I had no plan for how long it would go or what would happen in each chapter; I was just pantsing it. But while I was writing chapter 8, I started thinking, “This story has got to end at some point. What would be a good way to do that?” I ended up writing 3 more chapters—2 for the grand finale (a big birthday party with lots of sexy fun), and 1 for the denouement. And I think that worked pretty well.

Re: “There's a New Seraph in Town” From Yahegai on March 04, 2023 Thank you! I originally wrote this for a Halloween story contest on Hentai Foundry, and I decided at the time that it would be a nice change of pace to do a feel-good piece instead of a horror story. I’ve always been proud of the result.

So, a couple of things: Because of my frenetic approach to working on stories, sometimes I don’t quite realize just how far along I am in writing a given story. So once in a while, I find myself saying, “Wait, did I just finish this?” Such is the case with “Weakness,” a near-PWP story about a brother who knows how to make his sister horny enough to do anything—whether she likes it or not. So now it just needs some proofing; I’ll probably post it early next week. There’s a story I’ve been working on for years, about a mom who secretly wants her son to dominate her and finds a way to get him to do it without him knowing that it was her idea. All this time I’ve been calling it “Untitled mother-son shotadom story,” but today—while I was trying to think of a title for a different story—I thought of a title for this one: “Master Plan.”

Making him an earl will really draw the romance-novel crowd. Wait, what were we talking about?

There are lots of recurring themes and devices in my stories, chiefly because there are only so many ways to plausibly get characters to engage in taboo sexual acts. One device I use a lot is ritual: The characters following some pattern of behavior that puts them in a mental space where they do things they wouldn’t ordinarily do. Like when the sister and brother in my story “Excuses” say and do the same things they’ve done on previous nights when they’ve had sex so as to talk themselves and each other into believing that they HAVE to do it.

The latest chapter of “Out of Hand” is posted! Chapter 3: Let’s Spend the Night Together

Re: “Can’t Resist Her” From lexlogan8 on February 26, 2023 Thank you! Glad you liked the pacing (something I try to get right but don’t always succeed at).

I try not to have more than about 4 different partially posted stories going at the same time, because I don’t want to keep the readers of any given story waiting ages while I work on the others. In fact, the only reason I make the limit as high as 4 is that, with my ADHD writing style, I usually have at least some of every chapter of a story already written by the time I finish and post chapter 1. I also limit myself to having no more than 20 stories in the writing stage at any given time. Only when I finish a story do I allow myself to take a new one out of my Ideas file and start writing it.

Some news: --I'm pleased to report that chapter 3 of "Out of Hand" went off to beta yesterday. --I have now caught up on posting the things I couldn't post during the read-only period. So my Big Hero 6 story "Augmented" is now here on AFF. I also posted my Halloween story from last year, “Night of the Were-Bimbos,” to my “Halloween Treat Bag.” –I got a pleasant surprise today when I ran across the list of the top 50 most recommended authors in the AFF archives and found that I was tied for #3!

Re: “What Counts as Incest?” From lexlogan8 on February 22, 2023 Thanks! Rationalization is fun.

I just looked at my list of stories and saw that for some of them, there is no longer punctuation of any kind in the summary. For example: As Star struggles to find her place in the world a newly formed cult declares Marco kingand tells him that to save his kingdom he must take nine wives and get them with child This was originally As Star struggles to find her place in the world, a newly formed cult declares Marco king, and tells him that to save his kingdom, he must take nine wives and “get them with child.” This hasn’t happened to all of my stories, just some of them. When I tried to fix one by putting the punctuation marks back in, the periods and commas didn’t stick, and the quotation marks were replaced with the number 34: Sequel to 34Rated F A Phineas and Ferb Sex Comedy34 Having enjoyed helping Phineas and Ferb make an adult film the Fireside Girls decide to spend the next day earning more sex-related patches for their 34Secret Sash34 This appears to have happened only to stories that I either posted or added chapters to since the archive was taken out of Read Only mode—but again, only to some of them.

“Depravity Falls” is finished!

Some author notes about “Depravity Falls.” Beware SPOILERS! The story has 11 chapters, which is the same number of chapters in my other Gravity Falls story, “Multiversity.” This is just a coincidence. When Dee tells Mabel about the various things one can use to tie someone up for bondage fun, she mentions pink drapery cord. This came from a post I once saw from a lesbian who asked (facetiously, I think), "It's not bondage if you use pink drapery cord, right?” The expression "bopping the baloney" as a euphemism for male masturbation comes from one of the National Lampoon Vacation movies. I made up "whacking the olive loaf" myself, although it was inspired by a line from a Bloom County comic strip in which Opus confesses to going berserk and beating up a street mime with an olive loaf. The quote "Once is happenstance, twice is coincidence, three times is enemy action" is from Ian Fleming's novel Goldfinger. Auric Goldfinger says this when James Bond claims to have run into him by chance for the third time. The shape of the Choco-Blocko bars – slanted at one end and straight at the other – is meant to resemble the individual stones of a pyramid. Likewise, the box of chocolates that Dee gives Mabel to share with Brenda and Candy resembles the base of a pyramid. These were meant as oblique hints about what Dee really is. Mabel's Rainbow Jumper sweater is a nod to Disney cartoon series The Replacements. Riley Daring, one of the show's main characters, is a big fangirl of the Rainbow Jumper film franchise. Mabel's use of the word "hoo-ha" as slang for vagina in chapter 3 was inspired by a note Gravity Falls creator Alex Hirsch received from Disney's Standards and Practices criticiizing his use of that word on the show (because it is slang for vagina). Hoo-Ha Owl's Pizzamatronic Jamboree is where Soos takes Melody on a date in the episode "Soos and the Real Girl." Dipper’s reference to Standards and Practices in chapter 10 is a reference to another note Alex Hirsch received from Disney’s S&P department. In the episode “Summerween,” we see a flyer for a party that Tambry is putting on, and there was originally a line on the flyer that read, “Bottles will be spun.” S&P didn’t approve this, so Hirsch just wrote “Not approved by S&P” on the flyer instead. I did not invent the word "vagenda." I saw it in a Tumblr post once. Mabel's dream in chapter 10, in which she tells "Hooty" to go away, is a reference to the Disney show The Owl House, on which Alex Hirsch provides the voice of Hooty (among other characters). Regarding the various historical figures Dee claims to have influenced in her diatribe near the end of chapter 11: Marquis de Sade: 18th-century French writer of pornography who depicted sexual acts considered scandalous at the time. The word "sadism" is taken from his name. John Wilmot (2nd Earl of Rochester): A 17-century English satirical poet known for his sexual excesses. He died of venereal disease at age 33. Leopold von Sacher-Masoch: A 19-century Austrian nobleman from whose name the word "masochism" is taken. Anaïs Nin: A 20th-century French writer best known for her journals and erotica, as well as her affair with American author Henry Miller. Lolo Ferrari: The stage name of French performer Eve Valois, who for a time had the largest breasts in the world. Her breast implants were supposedly designed by one of the engineers who developed the Boeing 747. She died by suicide in 2000.

The big news is that, at last, the final chapter of “Depravity Falls” has gone off to beta. Also, regarding catchup posts, I just posted my Loud House oneshot “Royal Wedding” here on AFF.

“Smooshed” is now fully posted, and I’ve also posted the existing chapters of “Out of Hand” (ie, chapters 1 and 2). Just a little catchup posting left to do.

Okay, so I’ve caught up on posting “Secret Sash,” “Into the Third Dimension,” “Depravity Falls,” and “What Counts as Incest?” here on AFF, as well as my Halloween story “Horseman.” But I’ve still got more catching up to do.

From InvidiaRed on February 15, 2023 Re: “Horseman” Thank you! The spinner landed on Happy Ending this year.

From BronxWench on February 15, 2023 Re: “Horseman” I don’t know terribly much about sororities or secret societies myself, but my wife went to an all-women’s college that was a lot like a giant sorority. Her school was used in my mental model of Mount Pleasant College. FYI, the town of Mount Pleasant, NY is the home of the village of Sleepy Hollow. *chuckle* I went with the vegetable motif in part because I figured no one would see it coming. Thank you! You’re a class act, BW.