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I kinda like Scratch Versus Itch. But that may put too much emphasis on Scratch, when Molly is really the central character.

Once again, I come to this thread with hat in hand, looking for ideas for a title. The story is a The Ghost and Molly McGee fanfic in which two ghostly siblings convince Molly and Darryl to lend them their bodies for a few hours. This, of course, leads to the ghosts attempting to have sex in Molly and Darryl's bodies. Scratch prevents this by getting the ghosts to switch to two other bodies to do the deed. Nonetheless, the ghosts have awakened a kind of infectious lust in Molly, who proceeds to seduce various other characters in the succeeding chapters. Only gradually does Scratch realize what is going on, leading him to try and find a cure for Molly's contagious nymphomania. Full disclosure: This story was originally going to be a one-shot that was just about the sibling possession part and that I was going to call "Sibling Revelry." That will still work as the title of the first chapter, but not for the story as a whole. Any ideas?

So, it looks like The Big Day has come, and it is possible for authors to post stories and chapters again. I have a LOT of catch-up posting to do, so I won’t try to do it all at once. I think I’ll focus on completing existing stories first, starting with “Secret Sash” and “Into the Third Dimension.” Also, and I really mean it this time, I think the final chapter of “Depravity Falls” will be ready for beta by the weekend.

From Nytefyre on February 10, 2023 >Wow, interesting alternate world. It would\'ve been interesting to see Lawrence and Linda interacting. You'll see a fair amount of Lawrence and Linda in the next chapter. >Would she still have been Lindana at some point? Good question. There's a lot about the Third Dimension that I never fully worked out, like whether there are female celebrities. There probably are, but they would have owners instead of managers. >I don\'t know if there will be more, but the person dressed in black is still a lingering plot thread, as is what happened to this dimension\'s Candace? It would be interesting if they swapped and how she reacted/acclimatized to her new dimension. All will be revealed as soon as I can post again. >Thanks for writing and sharing! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Update: “What Counts as Incest?” is already back from beta. I just posted it on AO3, and I’m about to post it on Hentai Foundry, too. (The characters are “of age,” so HF will allow it.)

From InfamousDX on February 09, 2023 Thanks! Honestly, I’m not really comfortable writing fanfics about live-action shows, even if they’re based on a cartoon.

You probably want the bad news first: I’m STILL not that close to having chapter 11 of Depravity Falls ready for beta. It’s 8400 words and counting, so it’s not like I’m not making progress; it’s just that the top of this particular mountain keeps moving higher. On the good news front, I just sent my original one-shot “What Counts as Incest?” off to beta. So that one may get posted soon.

From Nytefyre on February 08, 2023 Thanks! In a story this long and involved, foreshadowing is a must. Mwahahahaha... Joyous, disastrous, who knows? I mean, besides me. Hmmm... Thanks for reading and reviewing!

From Nytefyre on February 08, 2023 Interesting theory. Thanks! I love writing that kind of thing, which is why so many of my stories feature underage characters. There's a lot of ground still to cover, but don't worry--you'll see Wendy in action again. Stay tuned! All will be revealed in time. Thank you!

Holy cow, Nytefyre, did you actually read and review 4 of my stories in ONE DAY? You are voracious! Now, on to the responses. Re: Big Lincoln, Little Lincoln From Nytefyre on February 08, 2023 You're welcome! Glad you enjoyed it. Also--and this is the first time I've mentioned it to anyone--I'm planning another Loud House story set on Earth 17.2. Working title: "Casino Night." Re: Clydeborg: The Six Million Dollar Ladies’ Man From Nytefyre on February 08, 2023 There's nothing like causing a family-wide disaster to give you some perspective. It was indeed. No plans for a sequel at this point. You're most welcome, and thanks for the review!

Update: Chapter 2 of “Out of Hand” came back from beta this morning, so I’ve posted it on AO3. I’m hoping to be able to post it here soon, too (along with a mess of other backlogged stuff).

Well, it seems I was too optimistic in hoping to have chapter 11 of Depravity Falls finished by this weekend. Not that I haven't made good progress; it's just that there's more left to write than I'd realized. So now I’m hoping to have it beta-ready by this time next week. Progress on the final story of “The Power Arcane” is slow but steady. I can’t say yet when that will be ready, but it WILL be ready eventually. I have a short story that should soon be ready for prime time titled “What Counts as Incest?” Its about two older-teen siblings who use some increasingly questionable logic to talk themselves into having a night of sexy fun together.

Re: “What Counts as Incest?” From LadyFreelove on January 31, 2023 Thank you! I had a lot of fun writing this story from the perspectives of both mother and daughter and trying to give them distinctive voices.

Sorry—Hall of Shame’s description reads “Here be plagiarists, and other nasties,” so I thought it was the right place. I didn’t scroll down further to see that there was also a Plagiarism section of the Report forum.

A couple of updates: --Chapter 2 of “Out of Hand” is in beta. --I’m hoping to have a complete draft of the final chapter of “Depravity Falls” ready for beta by the end of the week.

@Deadman’s recent post brought this question to mind: What do you consider the best way to write an orgy scene? My usual approach is this: After I make a list of the participants and who will be getting it on with whom, I describe the action in round-robin fashion, writing a few paragraphs about what each pair or group is doing and then moving on to the next until I’ve come full circle and then starting at the top again. I feel like this approach provides the reader some sense that the action is all going on simultaneously. However, I’m also concerned that the constant jumps from one group to the next are too disruptive for at least some readers. Thoughts?

In a gangbang, usually one or two people are the center of attention. It's often one or two women being fucked by several men (one, two, or three at a time, with the others waiting their turn), but it could be the other way around, too. In an orgy, in contrast, no one person is the focus; virtually everyone is having sex with someone at any given time.

I think I feel that way. Even though I like watching Big Mouth, I’ve never felt the urge to write fanfic about it, and I think a lot of that is because there’s no pervy thing I could do with those characters that hasn’t already been done in canon.

Thank you! I’ll email them.

This jerk stole 2 of my stories and a few others from AFF and posted them on Webnovel. Lady Freelove (author of one of the stolen stories) alerted me, and I’ve alerted the other authors. https://www.webnovel.com/profile/4304588891?appId=10

I posted the final chapter of “Smooshed” on AO3 a couple of days ago. The reaction to that and to chapter 1 of “Out of Hand” has been substantial, which is delightful. Less delightful was some news I got the other day: My friend Lady Freelove let me know that my story “The Power Arcane” was plagiarized and published on Webnovel.com under the plagiarist’s name. I created an account there and reported it; we’ll see what, if anything, comes of that. On the writing front, I now have 3 priorities: the final chapter of “Depravity Falls,” chapter 2 of “Out of Hand,” and the final story of “The Power Arcane.” Which doesn’t mean that I’m not also working on a bunch of other stuff.

I don’t think it matters. I tend to go with MFF, but that’s because when I write such stories, the male character tends to be the MC.

Okay, three big pieces of news: Chapter 1 of “Out of Hand” is now posted on AO3. I just send the 18th and final chapter of “Smooshed” off to beta. The great merge-and-purge of AFF’s duplicate accounts is now finished. @BronxWenchdid, like, 90% of it, but I’m glad to have helped a little. This puts AFF a step closer to getting out of read-only mode.

So, updates: --I’ve just sent chapter 1 of “Out of Hand” off to beta. This is the Loud House story that will complete the trilogy with “Enter the Sandboy” and “Just One Rule.” --Probably the next thing that will be beta-ready is the final chapter of “Smooshed.” I hope to have a complete first draft to send by next week.

I now remember that I wrote another story that’s even more similar to your idea, save that the genders are swapped (ie, it’s about a young boy and an adult woman). It’s called “A Visit From Shota Claus,” and I wrote it for the Holiday Party here on AFF in 2018. https://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600109191&chapter=8