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::nods:: So in essence the Naruto in your story, in the story's present day, may come out of this frozen state to find his world radically altered, perhaps beyond recognition... It's bold. Very bold. So much about Naruto's character was shaped by his being an orphan, and having that need to prove that he's not this harbinger of evil that caused his parents' deaths. That alone will make for some interesting changes, I think. The trick will be to think through the various timelines for each action that changes. You might even need to make serious notes to stay on track, and not slip back into canon.

Time travel is incredibly complicated as a concept. But, given your premise, we can eliminate the quantum mechanics, I think. So, there will be a jutsu that will send Naruto back in time, presumably to a time where he also exists. Will the jutsu supersede his consciousness, or will his two selves co-exist? I'd posit that having the future version of Naruto act as sort of a mental voice of reason might be better, and more believable. Then there's the paradox theory, that simply by altering the flow of the future, you change more than you anticipated. The whole things works on the principal of the butterfly's wings: a butterfly's wings flapping can alter air currents, and the change ripples along until you see an upheaval in the weather patterns on the other side of the world. So, Naruto will need to be very careful in how he alters events, or at least should have that concern in the back of his mind. He can't be rash and brash.

Or just make a thread in there, and we'll all see it. But really, Writers' Corner is meant to be a general area, for whatever we as writers want to throw out there for discussion.

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Actually, that goes well in the Writers' Corner. There are world building discussions there, as well as helpful research and ask the other authors threads.

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This story is currently in Originals > Erotica > General, but should be in Books > The Bible: Story Profile

tehuti88 has done a few stories with pregnancy that are very good. A search using the term Preg and Story Summaries as the option yielded a couple dozen choices. You haven't said if there's a genre you prefer, though, so it's hard to make recommendations without a little more information.

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Thank you for that catch, and I've edited that as well. I'm an author as well as a moderator, and I'd be pretty upset if my fiction was hosted someplace without my consent.

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While AFF does not support censorship, we are an adult venue, and based on the laws of the United States, where ownership of the site resides, that minimum age is defined as 18. If you object to the content of a story, you can feel free to click past to another that is more to your taste. However, we will not permit the posting of stories by persons under 18 on this site. We actively moderate, and such accounts will be removed. I have no intention of letting this degenerate into another pointless back and forth as to why we insist on obeying the law. This thread is now locked.

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Folks, just a word of caution. Fictionhunt is one of those sites that trolls the Internet for fiction, and posts them on their site without asking the author of the fiction first. They have no method of contacting them, and no way to file a take-down request. What they do is just another form of plagiarism, and I'd greatly appreciate it if you didn't link to that site.

Save a Horse, Ride a Cowboy by Kalinx

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