BronxWench

Glad to have helped.

The author, Bjoernbaer, has removed the story as far as I can tell. I'm not seeing any record of staff action. I'm sorry I can't be more helpful.

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Glad to help!

Is it Four Way by ThroneofSouls?

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You registered and posted two stories prior to your 18th birthday. Since this site is restricted to members 18 years and older, your registration date was adjusted and all content posted prior to that date was deleted, as we are required to do. You are free to repost those stories now, since you are of age.

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Okay, that should be fixed now. I'm seeing it on the main Games page as SFW.

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Ah, yikes. We had this happen in another subdomain, as noted here. We'll need to look at Games as well. Thanks for the heads up!

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I'm guilty of it to an extent in an RP I'm in. My RP partner is actually studying Japanese, and I'm dabbling for now until I get off my lazy butt and see if I can take a few classes at uni. But I tend to confine myself to endearments and respectful forms of address. I use a conlang version of elven with roots in Tolkien's work, originally developed by Tel'Mithrim for roleplaying purposes. When it comes to my original fiction and fan fiction, however, there's not a word of Japanese. I don't write in an anime fandom, and my original works aren't set anywhere near Japan. I agree that it's utterly silly in so many applications where it's done, and when it's obviously just whatever is spat out of Google Translame... ouch....

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We do not allow the solicitation of commissions on our site, and quite frankly, if the piece was written as a commission, you would need the permission of the person who commissioned it to post it here. The record indicates you were warned for missing the statement that the piece is a work of fiction. I see by your disclaimer that you've added that, along with a small bit of editorializing as to the nature of disclaimers. I'll point out that my published work carries a disclaimer. My publisher insists on it, as do most reputable publishers. You will also need to remove all references to commissions from your profile. You can leave the link to your other website, and it's entirely up to them if they allow solicitations for commissions, but we do not permit it.

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Odd abnormalities is repetitive. If they're abnormalities, it goes without saying that they're odd. It's like saying "the black blackwall tire." It stops a reader dead because it's a "duh" moment. As far as laying on your wife, you were compressing the milk glands located behind the nipples. That's why she leaked. A woman will also leak if she hears her child cry. But unconscious, drugged women are not going to lactate like that. And yes, breasts swell a bit when engorged, but at that point, anyone squeezing them is going to cause extreme pain and provoke a very unpleasant response. But there is still no correlation between cup size and how much milk is produced. A small breasted woman can feed her child as easily as a big breasted woman. Cup size is largely determined by the amount of fatty tissue surrounding the milk glands. The glands themselves are relatively consistent in size.

Okay. Where to begin? Cutting the hospital gowns makes no sense. If you've ever seen the typical hospital johnnie, they're open down the back. The medical personnel could just pull the gowns down off their shoulders. All abnormalities are odd. That's why they're abnormalities. Reproductive cycles aren't going to make panties wet. Only arousal or poor bladder control will do that. Humans don't go into heat, so I'm not sure how they'd jump to that conclusion, unless there was more revealed earlier to warrant that. If not, then maybe there needs to be more information put out there to justify the logic leap. You can't just squeeze a breast to make the milk express. It's a suckling action that stimulates flow, so you have to press on the milk ducts without just tugging or squashing the nipple itself. It's HARD, and that's why most women use pumps. But just squeezing a globe, mound or mountain won't do bugger-all. And just for reference? Breast size has NO bearing on how much milk a woman produces.

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