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Well it depends on what the magical combinants are. Holy for example should just burn bright no matter what and little to no smoke. Hellfire in contrast should be smokier in contrast due to its unholy nature/ Implications of its reactants. Typically hellfire in fantasy is much redder/(I’ve seen purple) WOD uses balefire , https://whitewolf.fandom.com/wiki/Balefire_(WTA) Several characters of mine have died to the rather nasty stuff. Since aggravated damage is something you can’t just shake off you die in a few rounds and you can’t soak aggravated damage. https://dresdenfiles.fandom.com/wiki/Hellfire Hellfire in fantasy is either bright green, green or more sickly colors to denote the hazard its entails. Sure, its more destructive but you’re also dabbling into things that at the minimum puts your self/ the soul at risk. No matter what color you use. Note that hellfire, is essentially highlighting and magnifying the worst aspects of fire itself without the positive ones to mellow it out. Its description should reflect that at the very least. People panic at the smell of smoke, or the first flickers of fire. Hellfire should be magnified 10x Cause the spirit even subconsciously should be hammering that primal part of the brain screaming GTFO NOW! Undead should use more phantasmal fire. Think corpse lights or willow wisps. ghostly fire may not burn as hot as regular fire but it should be just as nasty if you get hit with it. maybe illuminating the person’s bones/spirit while its affecting the body. Maybe, even making the unfortunate person phantasmal themselves as their essence burns.

From JayDee on October 16, 2020 Part 6! SPOILERS IN REVIEW Harry was going slow and steady as possible. He kept his wand at steady as possible Ooof! I’ll fix it. Lines that are the same in porn scenes as non porn scenes Definitely more of a slow and steady chapter for that, no rampaging flesh hungry monsters here – I liked the take on using magic to open the hole, get the seeds, and then close it again. I laughed out loud at the one line “Granted Harry knew Argus was probably into blokes. At least that was what Harry thought. Argus took him to the root of his dick with a fervent gusto that made him reasonably sure.” Harry isn’t dumb but… If you read the stories he’s well… Unobservant, Oblivious and Occasionally foolish. So it’ll all balances out What you’d want to call more than circumstantial evidence there. But what’s this darkness hanging about? Is Argus hiding something devious? Well, gotta have some conflict for stories. Foreshadowing DUN DUN DUH!!! Nice descriptions around the Patronus too!

From DeathLingers on October 14, 2020 i thought this would be alpha harry guess not. concidering he somehow lost control over voldemort on the first ch ive lost interest, refuse to read a possible uke harry. well i can try again later when im not tired and annoyed Thank you for the review. This particular story will probably not be your cup of tea then. This particular dark lord Harry is Versatile/ Leaning towards Powerbottom. He’s slowly coming into his power and all but he’s definitely the one in charge.

You tease you.

Yay!

Just a preview at the moment takes place right after Temporary and the Winter Holiday short Powdered Sugar <3

Tricked Lucifer thought there would be no consequences for his casino fun. TBA

As when would the new thread be posted?

That is an excellent idea. She’s broadcasting on all frequencies in a polite manner. The problem is entire system is an unofficial war-zone and she may or maynot be responsible for grief for all sides involved. “ I don’t want to alarm anyone but Hesperides is gone and my transponder is broadcasting on all frequencies. I am your hostess and inadvertant dj for this evening and the first song of the evening is Rescue Me. Followed by I Need A Hero”

Okay, I’m first up. If a human being in a spacesuit gets too close to a star before rescue. Ala inadvertently vented off into space already in a spacesuit but too late to reach the escape pods from a asteroid collision with the space station and essentially slingshotted towards the sun. I know there should be some thermal/radiation damage. But is there anything else I should be aware of?

Avoid the silver spoon route, If he’s seeking affluence enough to resort to this kind of tactics He’s probably either not affluent himself or from some minor house/lineage. Best route would be if he somehow managed to not only devise his twisted tactics but force his way to the top. He might be a lazy pervert but at the very least he shouldn’t be stupid.

I adored it <3

Yes, Exactly a bad person with a bad special ability.

So bad powers, bad person?