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From GeorgeGlass on October 26, 2021 Re: "Clucking Doom" by InvidiaRed John Madden once said, "Don't do anything great if you can't handle the congratulations." Looks like Berta earned herself the last job she'd ever want. Oh yeah she got boned big time without a doubt. being transformed by an angel into a house sized cockatrice was one thing. She managed to maintain her sanity despite not being human anymore (even if I thought I put too many details to the contrary) Even if she consciously didn’t know. Being adopted by primal and feral monster deities is the second. Hundreds of different perspectives all at once is not healthy. They were the first deities to arise on this world spawning monsters to war amongst themselves until the second weaker generation came. Being weaker the second generation banded together and with their sapient creations and civilization they took the world by force. Yet, the monster deities refused to lose their world and turned back to their monster crafting skills. They aren’t friends but reluctant allies to one another and together they took back islands and eventually a whole continent Now they’re just under half a world. The civilized gods had to fall back to their holdings leaving one last temple a temple the MD’s couldn’t touch but a mortal could… A temple that Berta destroyed and by doing so erased the last outpost of the civilized gods. The fog of war protects boths sides from each other. This half of the world is well far more timeless. There are no civilizations there because the MD’s will not allow civilization or the civilized races any chance to take root excising all invaders with incredible prejudice. Its beauty and its bounty are for the monster deities and their creations to enjoy alone. As the CEO of Recess+ Playtime and Themeparks! Found out to her brutal jungled demise a few days after leaving the safety of Head Quarters. I did almost put in Berta finding her corpse. But had to scrap it because the deity of the island of giant insects did not leave a body. These deities are a different breed from my more common ones. In that population is what contributes and limits their power. So as greater monster population density increases = the more influence, more sight and more power in the mortal world for the monster deities. Conversely, the more people there are, and the more civilization there is the more powerful the civilized gods become. Part of the reason these lesser iterations of angels are so powerful because all the civilized gods collectively pool their power to make their messengers. Quite the imaginitive world you have here: science and magic in what would appear to be a postapocalyptic setting, made all the more amusingly bizarre by Wudy the Wabbit. I will expand upon it but the reason its not postapocalyptic is because this story takes place in the distant past. 10,000+ years to be exact. The CEO’s of the megacorps all have one thing in common. They’re all half-elven siblings. Recess+ Playtime and Themeparks!’s CEO is Cybernetics& Consorts Industries CEO’s little sister the last of seven. She stole various time displacement protoypes from her siblings a few years before the last war and panicking activated them rather than allow her sibling’s agents to take them back or allow her siblings to exploit it. Partially, out of not wanting to be erased from existence and partially because she knew her family would abuse such tech and likely doom everyone. She and her HQ simply vanished and might have very well be the catalyst for the war happening in the first place. She was environmentally friendly, well loved by the public and the voice of reason of the family. Then she was gone, it comes out that assassins from other corps were closing in on her and well the rest you know. Xmas story will expand on this storyline. In Vampire Gynoids From The Future
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From GeorgeGlass on October 26, 2021 Re: "Clucking Doom" by InvidiaRed John Madden once said, "Don't do anything great if you can't handle the congratulations." Looks like Berta earned herself the last job she'd ever want. Berta definitely got the short end of the lollipop. Quite the imaginative world you have here: science and magic in what would appear to be a postapocalyptic setting, made all the more amusingly bizarre by Wudy the Wabbit. Thank you. I’ll go more in depth on my own review thread. Rudy kinda just popped into my head one day. A wholly benevolent theme-park mascot animatronic with a lovingly developed company AI. Much Closer to Delta than say murder ‘nonfunctional inducing’ happy Gestalt Close, but not post-apocalyptic. You know how cutthroat and thieving global corps can be and even subsidiary companies aren’t 100% transparent with the main one when it comes to R&D top-secret prototypes and tech.
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I think I do have enough time to actually write Day of The Himbo full credit to you and all for the werebimbo and the inspiration
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I don't think it uploaded. Just checked
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The answer is Yes. http://www2.adult-fanfiction.org/forum/topic/69679-aff-halloween-2021-revews/?tab=comments#comment-433960
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Now I kinda want to write day of the himbos lul
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http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600109947
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Kk <3
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Woo! <3 Even if you don’t I say it counts cause you posted here <3
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Only if you want to. I mean you did just reach 1million on your story why not kick back and celebrate it?
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Okay, posted The first story.
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A place where the reviews go =p crazy I know!
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Clucking Doom An Angel’s Visitation is not always welcome. TF, Angst, Violence No Sex
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Hello! Hello! Hello! Fellow Ghosts and Ghouls Come one, Come all to the annual fall festival Halloween 2021! Where the rites are devilish and the autumn rituals celebrate the harvest…. All things are subject to rules the sun, the moon, me and you! Cast the die and make your fate! Conduct your offering or live eternally in regret wondering why you didn’t =p I kid, I kid. So procure your pencils, pens, quills and or writing implement of choice! Now then dearies. We All Float Down here! It’s been one heck of a crazy ride this year. Sit back, Relax and enjoy this year’s selection as we celebrate in gratitude as the year finally starts winding down! So I bid thee aidou and by the pricking of thy thumbs. Something wicked this way comes! Original fiction Halloween or Horror theme Include all appropriate tags at the beginning of the story Oneshots of under 50k words So pick up your red balloon
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I’ll give it a few days. But if no one else will I shall the rules haven’t really changed all that much right?
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I got a story for Halloween/ harvest festival. @GeorgeGlass do I post it here or wait for Halloween 2021? Clucking Doom An Angel’s Visitation is not always welcome.
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Woo!
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Almost October
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Fun fact: Alexa is responsible for 95% of werewolf attacks in the last 5 years
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I like the keyword density feature. That’s useful if it highlights it as you go along, rather than having to wait for your editor to point out how well you’ve abused certain words.
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The ability to find overused words is invaluable. Now i’m trying my hand at finding filter words
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Update: Another checkmark down.
part of me is happy as that finish line grows ever nearer… And the other part of me is screaming that everybody is going to hate it forever and until eternity.
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Tentacles are easy, they can go pretty much anywhere…
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Yeah but if I ever did it I’d want a happy ending for everyone.
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Tentacles are good for gripping, whatever needs to be gripped. The suction can be applied as needed. One or two per office. So, yeah, any human involved could certainly get a happy ending. Though, not sure how the tentacle monster would get a happy ending too. Now, my smutty short (as a dream for the MC) implied that urine of adolescent teenage boys was an addictive substance to the alien kind (ie a hallucinogenic or an opioid etc) so “drinking” it was its own reward for the service.
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Writer Question
How would you best convey that the story you’re writing is a dark fantasy geared towards adults and as such contains adult themes. I’m a little anxious as I approach the finish line.
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True, But the fact remains evil exists. I would probably put at least a watch team on those who do evil for evil’s sake. Always a few who confuse mystery with the banality of what they espouse. Which I will always profess to be one of the great tragedies.
The true threats have always been those willing and able to ignore all moral and ethical boundaries to get what they want no matter the cost.
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There are psychopaths with no remorse or sense of guilt, always trying to get away. Some become harden criminals, others become CEOs and/or politicians. Still, even they’re not doing evil for the sake of evil, they’re doing it for some reason. Anyways, your story, write them as serving evil gods if you want
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Here’s a secret I know from RPing Evil characters.
There’s always a reason to serve outright evil demons and or gods. Not a good reason, but a reason be it vengence, spite. Its even possible to serve an evil god out of nothing but genuine thanks because when you were at rock bottom, they were the only ones that listened.
You have to get something out of it. influence, power, wealth and or a fully stocked harem of your choice. All of the above etc… Even if it is nothing more than a reprieve from the eternal torture they promise.
The evil deities know very well how duplicitous and self-serving you are. They’re using you just as you are using them. They know very well well the moment you get a chance to taste great power. You’ll try to usurp them, and they’re counting on it. But in the mean time you poor dupe, there’s a nunnery in need of pillaging,that orphanage is oppressing you and the goody two shoes high priest isn’t going to ritually sacrifice himself in a rhapsody of torturous ecstasy.
Since the deal is a form of spiritual bribery. The more horrid and evil you are the less your assuredly damned afterlife is going to be. Because you got a I did big bad sticker and the evil spirits aren’t going to torment you as much.
