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Authors: Sparrow and InBrightestDay Title: Bunkerkampf (Mortuus Orbis Part Two) Summary: Following the events of Part One, the remaining survivors attempt to rebuild their numbers, only to face new threats in the dead city. More pressing, however, is a threat already among them, that their fragile unity may not survive. Feedback: Reviews and constructive criticism much desired. Fandom: Misc Video Games/RPGs > Crossovers Warnings: Abuse Angst Bigotry BMod BP Contro HC Hum MCD MF MiCD Minor2 Oral Racist Rape Solo Tort UST Violence Solo or chaptered story: Chaptered URL: http://games.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600091480 Review Reply thread: http://www2.adult-fanfiction.org/forum/topic/69143-mortuus-orbis-discussion-thread/

Re: “Wishful” From IttyBittySkitty on April 25, 2021 Before we get into your review, I just want to say that it’s everything I hoped for and more. I’m so pleased to know you found it hot. I was really trying to pull out all the stops with this chapter, which meant doing things I hadn’t done in previous chapters, and that’s always a risk. Glad it worked. LOL! *chuckle* And thank you for not calling it a “fustercluck.” I think this chapter required as much outlining as all 8 of the previous chapters combined. Thankfully, writing stories like “Hot Yoga” and “The More, the Merrier” gave me valuable experience in writing orgy scenes. That was me indulging my own fetishes. I love the mating press, especially when impregnation is involved. They are first and foremost entertainers, as well as being horny bunnies, so it just seemed logical that they would be the ones facilitating the action. I had to make some tough choices about what to include in this chapter and what not to. Ultimately, I felt that since we’d just had 2 straight chapters of Angel/Angelica, I would give more of the spotlight to the other characters in the final chapter. OMG, I’m kind of loving these ideas. Indeed, the Wish-world is full of possibilities. And I would be honored if you wanted to write stories about it. I’m so glad. You are so very, very welcome. Joma, you have such a big help to me over the years, and Skitty, you seem to make him so happy, which just gladdens my heart. It’s only Monday, but getting this review from the two of you has already made my whole week. Thank you.

Luz couldn’t at first and you’re right as to the reason why, but I think I found a pretty good middle ground by the end of the chapter since she did begin manipulating Eda’s mind. I often find that in these hypnotizing stories, there’s a little in the way of moral dilemma about what they do so I hope I could convey Luz’s struggle at least halfway decently. Now it’s safe to say she’s embraced her desires and won’t be nearly as hesitant anymore. As to who, I mentioned to my readers on AO3 that the next chapter might upset some of them since this story has been fem focused so far. I wouldn’t be doing Luz justice if I ignored her full sexuality.

Chapter three is up. Much shorter than the previous one, I’m afraid.

Chapter two is up. Better grab a sandwich or something, because this is a long one.