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Shades and a Snake’s Heart Description: Sometimes you don’t even make it to the Halloween party. Content Codes: 3Plus AFFO Bi Bigotry ChallengeFic COMPLETE Fingering Exhib Language MCD Transformation Violence ...managed it!

Hi, I took a look at both profiles, and it looks like they belong to the same person based on information in our records. Given that we only allow one account per member, what I’m going to do is remove the Kirara_Grey account as a duplicate account. I do want to thank you for catching this one. We haven’t finished clean-up in either Inuyasha or Originals, and the older stories are rife with this sort of thing. But we really, really dislike plagiarists here on AFF, so we always are grateful to alert readers! Thank you!

Yes! Ooooh, and a nice long list of content codes.

From JayDee on October 29, 2020 Tricked by InvidiaRed (Also spoilery review warning. I never learned to review properly.) So, I’ll start with a bit of a gripe, I know, I know I’m a dumbass – I just figure if you’re writing a sequel to TCR’s Death Always Wins and using an extended reference to InBrightestDay’s lady who was also a spider and then a spider lady (…and if that’s a reference to the Van Dijk he used in The Woman in the Statue, it’s technically my horrible rapist lawyer character…) the cool thing to credit the sources so any readers can go see further adventures. Especially with it being a sequel for any readers wanted to go back and see what happened last year with the Casino! Chips! Corpses! Craziness! Clocks! C-Words! Anyway, gripe done… ( I could put a link to the stories in the afterward.) …This line here, “The televised elder abuse of a senile geriatric as his political party, was dead set on throwing his corpse over the finish line if need be.” Made me laugh right out loud, partly because it’s funny anyway, but coming right after the genocide reference it was a hell of a mood swing. Perfect comic timing there! …I heard Gabriel last got the horn with Mary. Ok, sorry, bad joke. Nice use of the affable yet threatening phone call there. There’s some really nice descriptions here. Just about anything about the effects of oblivion really comes across well. Gotta love an unmaking void. The corpse puppetting description too was nicely grim. I’m really not sure how Lucifer got out of there… alive is possibly the wrong term. Existing? I guess it really is a Halloween miracle, especially If that cabbie really was a part time carpenter. ( Halloween miracle, He’s alive partly due to a combination of factors Hel destroying her own mother, The stroke of midnight returning the usual rules of life and death and literal divine aid from his friends.) The epilogue felt a little bit un-related (in defence I may have misunderstood an obvious connection! I ain't the sharpest knife in the bulb socket) but it was fun to catch up with Duncan again! “two poisoned suns would shine over Nippon” is just an awesome mention in a great line. Been 75 years and that shit still hits.( Its also can be considered atleast in Duncan’s setting part of the start of total divergance. For the first time in modern history the heads of the various pantheons established communication with the superpowers of the world. Man had devised a weapon that was on par with what the gods were capable of and had the potential to destroy the world. and with them certain realms opened up and man could potentially visit these other places. For example the uber rich who can afford it. Olympus is open) I shoulda said this to George too, but thanks to both of you for taking part and sharing stories with us. Sorry ‘bout the gripe at the start. Feel free to tell me to fuck off! (Never dear, I unironically enjoy your writing.

From JayDee on October 29, 2020 Thanks! I tried to cram in as much info into as few words as possible. It's certainly a favorite topic of mine. I'm so glad the ambiguity of the situation generated the suspense I was aiming for. LOL! Huh, I didn't think about that particular connection. I was just thinking "mad with lust and super-strong." Thanks!

Now posted: “Just One Rule” Chapter 6: Extra Credit.

I actually have a copy. After the catastrophic travesty that was “ray” they don’t have a right to criticize that special.

From InvidiaRed on October 29, 2020 Thank you! Glad you liked it. I do have a little history with gore. Rory's Gory Story having it more for the ryme than anything! Tommy’s gonna need some therapy, but failing that a hug and a fuck might help. Dunno if I’ll get back to them, or if I should have called Sarah Gina and pissed off the Bon Jovi fans… but thank you again!

From GeorgeGlass on October 28, 2020 Tricked Ah, a sequel to last year's story -- although I just glanced at InBrightestDay’s review, which points out that the first one was written by tcr. Interesting choice to sequelize that. I still like the idea of the various underworld gods, old and new, hanging out together. The bit about some of them collecting very few souls these days was a good one. And I'm guessing the cabbie was Jesus? Yep, Luci is currently seriously punch drunk from being crushed. It also continues the theme of luci playing the fool. He likesto think he’s so clever but to put it best Lucifer is playing checkers while everyone else is playing 3d 4v4 chess. That’s indeed why the cabbie is smiling. Wouldn’t you? You’ve announced yourself and despite every hint you’ve given the person in question still doesn’t know who you are.

ugh! so i finally can go on ubrelvy for my migraines! bad news was it was gonna cost me $860 OUT OF POCKET! got the discount card from my doctor, had a hard time activating it! UGH!!!!! hopefully now it wont cost me alot to get my pills! fingers crossed!

Tricked Lucifer thought there would be no consequences for his casino fun. Violence

Awesome! I am going to hold off starting reading and reviewing until either Halloween or until mine is finished, whichever comes first, but it sounds like a good’n.

I’ve finished my story and opened up the Halloween Party to all! (I’ve added the link to the top post.) Folks can add their stories when ready, and please post your title and tags here so I can add them to the Introduction page. Oh, and here are mine: Unleash, by George Glass Warnings: Inc, M/F, MiCD, Violence Summary: Seeking the courage to escape their abusive father, three teens try a new street drug that can empower you to act on your deepest desires. But what if your deepest desire isn’t what you think it is?

I asked if I could get the Nintendo Seal of Approval on mine. Went all the way to Kyoto. Thirty seconds later they sent Toad. Got the shit kicked out of me by a three foot tall ambulatory mushroom. Barely made it out alive. So, yeah, only 70% done here and no guarantees. I need to re-write the ending and try to make the one sex scene at least slightly appealing. No joke, it may be unintentionally the least erotic thing I’ve ever written. And I did Spyro porn.

Its nearly ready but doesn’t quite yet have my mark of approval.

Just checking: Does anyone have a story that’s finished and ready to post? I’m hoping to have mine ready tomorrow.