JayDee

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    George Glass' Transparency Thread

    Just begging for an Attack of the Killer Tomatos crossover :p “Were-bimbos?” “That’s right. We were bimbos. We’re not any more. Well, most of us. Will you join us for our symposium on the application of platonic philosophy or did you just want a handjob?” “I, uh...” *Sighs* “Babs? One for you.”
  2. Ah. Yes. Harry Potter and the wotsit of wotsits. I think the most emails/comments etc etc I have ever had for me to write a sequel/more parts to any story I ever did was the one about Hermione getting busy with the neighbour's dog. Huh... Did another HP story for the turkey prompt, having been unable to think of anything for the bird or the country, so I am starting this thread with review replies for Wild Turkey: Thanks for your reviews and comments all of you! pittwitch: Funny's good. It's definitely a pairing that is hard to take seriously (well, unless you have a multichapter angst fest of building UST), so I think the summary alone would be enough to make a few people smile. I think if this story had a tagline, it would have to be a homage to the once popular posters they sold to students, "Wild Turkey - helping old witches have sex since 1996...." Fairy Slayer: I wasn't meaning to suggest Petunia took liberties, just that a few sherries had her acting intoxicatingly/talking bollocks. I can see how it gives that impression though, especially as PWPs tend to make the reader assume everybody is fucking everybody else. I figured assuming potion made sense, especially as love potions aren't unknown at Hogwarts, though hopefully they keep 'em away from that Felch Filch fellow. I wanted to include the - yes, admittedly obvious - pun with something about an "old bird" in there punning with Turkey. Probably for the best! Though as I say to pittwitch I think that there's just something inherantly funny in Harry/Minerva. I used to chuckle in the later Connery movies where he had 40-50 years on his love interest too, though. Harry's 16, he gets aroused by an older teacher, he's gotta justify it! Apollo : I only thought of the stuff because someone bought some back from America in the summer. I was really stumped for something with turkey until I recalled that Wild Turkey. Quite a challenging prompt this week. Glad you enjoyed it! Shadow Knight Another seeing the funny side! I can get where the ewwww comes from - if nothing else, there's always something slightly squicky about a teacher and a student, even if the student is over the age of consent (off topic - did JK ever give a wizard world age of consent, what with different laws and all? I know Scotland has 16, and America doesn't have a federal one, but with quite a few states - like Rhode Island - also at 16.). Immoral abuse of position and all that though. Very naughty. Especially without using one of those polyjuice potions to look like... uh, still naughty. I dunno, I think she's got class and grace and that counts for a lot! I smiled while writing the thing too!
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    JayDee's Review Reply Thread (Harry Potter)

    Unleash The Beast ended up being my most “copy and pasted” story of all time. It just kept showing up elsewhere. It may well be out there again at the moment. Watching, waiting. Ready to strike. Who can say? Well, unexpected new review! Thank you for the review! I’ve noticed a lot of folks are super reluctant to review older stories which is likely why this’n from 2008 has 151824 hits and less than 20 reviews so it’s really cool of you to take the time and I’m really glad to hear that you enjoyed this so much! I wish I could still put our stories of this sort of length. Unfortunately most of my other stories are very different and if you liked this you’d probably not enjoy them, with the possible exception of “Corinthian Knot” in Games and “The Horse and His Cock” in books – and the latter might be too short to work for ya with this kind of content. Still, at least you’ve enjoyed this’n and I thank you again for the review.
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    Jk Rowling Mad- Anyone Else See This?

    ...have you been working through every discussion on this since 2008 and only just reached this one?
  5. I'm not a big one for original writing, so it's even more appropriate to just have one reply thread for this section! Sure, the first story is slash but that's only 25% of my original stories (and in pure length quite a lot less because the Angel story is thousands of words (and earned me a brilliant email asking if I was against God, and if not could the seminary-attending-yet-porn-story-reading emailer do a follow up where the angel was saved by twu luv. I said go for it... That's not a joke by the way. His email domain was a religious college. I swear by Eris t'was so.) Anyway, review replies... Harvest Mouse was my third plot idea for the prompt, and possibly my first ever cons m/m scene. Not a banjo player in hearing. Asexual Biped - Thank you! I like my anthros with a good streak of the animal in them, not just a human with a snout, as it were. pittwitch - Thank you, but honestly I thought that line was sort of corny. Ahem. I guess once harvested you can't sell it at market. Fairy Slayer - ...Corny, I say, corny. Thank you for your review also, I am glad the background stuff worked. I don't know why I couldn't just start it with something like "On this Earth there are furries. Deal with it." but the story wanted people to know why. Given the length of the story, I was seriously considering leaving out the sex, adding in more character introspection and then maybe finish with Gerald going into the barn... but I'm a pornographer dammit. Hey, Harry's fucking his boss's willing son; if he wasn't happy it's a great way to be a disgruntled employee Apollo - Thank you also for your review. I get what you mean with the pacing, I find the 'several hours later' jump somewhat jarring myself. I'd put up it being probably my first consensual m/m scene in defence, but I doubt my second'd be much better. Can't believe I have done four flashfics in four weeks... Thank you for the inspiration!
  6. *Goes to put head back in box. Sees law books leaning on shelf. Shrugs* Won’t be any minor1 tags for me! And yes, fair assumption on the MCD but there are some exceptions where the death is super quick/not a focus but I felt needed tagging anyway eg The Morpheus Potion where I think there’s only the starting swing of an axe and the death isn’t detailed, or even that Shokan Lust story where there’s one character stomped to death briefly and another dude got skinned/killed in a few lines, but it is by no means a snuff fic. Possibly less violence than the average round of Mortal Kombat really. I’m just not into writing much at all at the moment. Everytime In the past I’ve said I’m through with writing I went back and did something else, so no curious if not saying it will free me! Literally anything of mine could be revised to be so much better! Years ago me and the pervs on Deathstalker’s old forum used to have a “paragraphs of snuff” thread, telling some of that kind of fetish material in just a few sub-flashfic sentences. Some of it definitely hit the spot! I still remember some of their paragraphs now, while they almost certainly have totally forgotten my shit efforts. As bad as they are, the only reason I haven’t stuck a compendium of mine up on AFF is I’d need like one for misc games one for misc books etc and it felt like too much effort doing all the disclaimers. Never underestimate the ability of fetish folk to find just a few words revving their engine. There was that one time I was at the bus stop and a nerdy woman sat down next to me and said “I’m Kizzy. I prefer your funny stuff.” But apart from that, no. And when creating original characters these days I’ll sometimes have a bit of a google search to see if he name is either super common or not appearing for anybody alive! Darn it all! Can’t write fiction but I can jaw for hours on forums on my day off. It’s like 1999 all over again!
  7. Pandemic Head remains the last thing I finished. Considering one of my earliest stories after I changed my penname to JD was Getting Head… it might almost end up as bookend. Almost. I mean, not really but close enough. First off, thanks for the review! You really didn’t have to – at this stage you’ve pretty much read and reviewed everything that isn’t horrific garbage, and at least some of the stuff that is. Was nice to see you’d had the time to look over InBrightestDay’s story tho! Mike’s a lawyer! He specialised in criminal law although once he had his own firm he’s got attorneys in several fields working for him so probably some could be in the biochemical patent side for the scientists! Thanks tho’ fitting is fine by me. Thanks! Funny and disturbing is what I sometimes go for. Then people say “You thinking that is funny is really disturbing.” The only thing I’d disagree with is the niche fetish crowd wouldn’t give a shit about characters or past stories and still enjoy the fucked head. There’s some folks out there with a big thing for still-living-but-unattached-heads getting fucked – I blame stupid sexy dullahans – and it would probably shoot up their quality table for them. Like the dragon-snuff-rape fans who think the Spyro request story I did was great while I can’t remotely see the erotic appeal. But thanks again! So. Up until about 2006 or 2007 I was happy to write real person stories. Amongst other things I realised how fucking easy it was for sickos (I mean, more so) to link the real people or their friends/family to them with social media starting to take off more than forums and the rest and took all mine offline. Plus there were some court cases. I’ve since re-written most of my RPFs to be about OCs or fandoms, and one such story was re-written to be about OCs, and I decided to rename the fictional psychotic girl character as Mike’s cousin, Cadence Van Dijk and her father as his uncle. Much richer branch of the family. There’s none of the fantasy elements in it, it’s just a nasty piece of work with maybe one funny line. Anyway, I’ve got another real person story I still need to re-write and it featured a lawyer character I realised I could turn into Mike and the lawyer’s boss I could turn into Cadence, and have the theme changed from the original idea to be about a mass sacrifice to Eparlegna by Cadence seeking power, and end up as Cadence as an animated angry head who may possibly end up in the possession of one of InBrightestDay’s characters. There may even be a happy ending at some point. Who knows? Anyway, thank you again for the review! At least the story was short so there wasn’t too much cack to wade through for ya. In fact this reply may be longer than the flashfic! heh.
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    Thundercloud's Review Responses

    Your grasp of the English language is better than some peoples. I mean, I went to Kentucky once. Ah, yeah, makes sense. Or they could go on an arctic cruise! No need, honestly! I don’t expect reciprocal reviews especially since I was going to read it anyway. That said, if you’re really keen on reviewing, InBrightestDay has a short nosex piece under books The Least I Can Do inspired by the original ending to my Whore of Heaven story! That’s not had a review from anybody but me and you’ve read WoH so you’d probably get something out of it Thanks either way and I look forward to whatever comes next!
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    Thundercloud's Review Responses

    Time for something completely knew or do you think you’ll start on a Carmen sequel or similar? Unless the actual year is necessary to the story it’s probably safe to keep on keeping the way you have been – helps stop it get too dated later on! :) I mean, except for the careful Swedish readers. Lot of that around, sadly. Ha! That’s pretty funny but also cool. Will it be super masturbation heavy? I do get why she didn’t with that whole soreness going on down below. Probably would have come out dirtier than they went in as the poet had it. No probs! It’s an entertaining story.
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    InBrightestDay's (Originals) Review Reply & Discussion Thread

    I’ve only read one from him, but I’ll probably read more when I get the chance – and I tend to like those oldstyle books with all the little social history details thrown in so if I come across Travels with Charley I’ll give it a crack!
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    InBrightestDay's (Originals) Review Reply & Discussion Thread

    You bring the serious I’ll bring the levity!
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    InBrightestDay's (Originals) Review Reply & Discussion Thread

    Back once again into @InBrightestDay’s thread with a review reply to that joint effort Parlor Games! Thanks for the review! I’m glad you’ve had a second crack at it as InBrightestDay has some super cool horror atmosphere in there. I finally read Of Mice and Men during the last few months. Can absolutely see some similar characteristics there, I suspect that story set the template that sheer pop culture exposure has led to similar characters feeling alike. At least Cody didn’t shoot Todd in the head. Would probably have been a little out of character. This is definitely more one for InBrightestDay to answer – but I guess I’d say After Party would be the best one to start folks with, with it being purely InBrightestDay’s take on ‘em and, yeah, the fact that the other one has a buncha sex definitely has some AFF appeal. Yua not turning out to be a yaoi fangirl and getting the guys to blowbang Cody probably a good thing really. Also out of character for a start. Thanks! That coulda worked! InBrightestDay’s current collaboration with another author has had some smoking hot bits so it would probably have been mostly his guidance on the sex stuff anyway – I mean, with it being his characters he’s got a better feel of what they do to each other. Thank you again for the view, very much appreciated
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    George Glass' Transparency Thread

    Really sorry for your loss. Losing a pet is super hard.
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    George Glass' Review Responses -- Original Fiction

    I was thinking what if it was like his real Dad, rather than the real world guy he thinks of as him! But I guess not, so will remain on edge of seat until next update You’re welcome!
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    Thundercloud's Review Responses

    Just lucky I happened to check in the forum and see your promoted final part and had the time free to read it Sunday morning I hope ya have had a better week this week and have a better one next week. There’s a spoiler tag right here on the forum! He could go to Hell, rescue anybody needs rescuing. And not look back at the last minute ‘cos that didn’t work out so well for Opheus. Heh, we’ll say I was jokin’ ‘bout afterwards. More of a turn of phrase really, but yeah 60k is thoroughly long! Anyway, happy to have reviewed and read alla the parts
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    George Glass' Transparency Thread

    It’s weird, I must have watched every episode of The Simpsons up until 2000 and I still like to think it’s a great show and I’ve seen loads, but that’s like… 20 years ago now and I’ve only seen an episode or two since. I hope it’s still good. As for your idea – I don’t see why not! I’m sure folks who enjoy the R34would love the story just as well, and those who didn’t know the R34 would maybe just need an author’s note for where the canon differs. I based my story Corinthian Knot off a piece of R34 fanart of Lara Croft and a dog by Turria years ago, when I could still risk going to places like HF, and that story went down very well – DG just advised I needed the permission of the person who created the work and to credit them properly – http://www2.adult-fanfiction.org/forum/topic/26628-the-question-i-couldnt-see-where-else-to-put-it/ Edit -heh, the entire subforum was created so I could ask that question in it.
  17. edit - Eep. That topic description should read 'games' subdomain. s'what I get for a self-copy/paste job. As with the comics thread I have started, I just don't write enough stories to need multiple reply threads so I have created a single thread to reply to all of my games subdomain story reviews, and I will make sure to identify which story and review I am replying too so there's no confusion. I wrote The Witch's Lust for the weekly AFF Prompt Witch and I have two reviews to reply too: pittwitch - Thank you for your review! I don't think anybody knows where the Witch goes when she runs off crying, but it's certainly a nice change for it to be after sex rather than the in-game violence Apollo - Thank you also! I'm glad my style here appealed to you, now my writing time is limited I am working against both word count and clock with the prompts so its good to hear it's coming across okay. I certainly am trying to go for a much lighter tone for my story prompt stories, to a lot of the requests I have done, so it may have been a mistake to focus on an extremely bloody game...
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    JayDee's Review Reply Thread (Games)

    I’m all out of credits and continues! Game over man, game over! [/Hudson]
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    JayDee's Review Reply Thread (Games)

    Well, thank you! I did my best. I kinda liked Stryker when MK3 came out. All the other characters had something to make them extra badass, and here’s a dude in a baseball cap who is just a cop but he’s gonna try anyway. I mean, it coulda been worse. Sindel would probably have choke fucked him. And you seem to be wholly suffering the effects of quarantine at the moment, finding time to get through a bunch of my old game stories! Look, I know things are bleak in the world but there’s still hope! You don’t need to subject yourself to this unremitting horror! I’m grateful to get the reviews but feeling bad for ya suffering some of this shit like, Centaur Mother one of at least a couple stories I wrote with ‘mother’ in the title and generally a lot more wholesome than Zombie Mother… Lara Croft’s got that knack for getting involved with wacky old shit. And I don’t just mean her butler from the old games. I bet she could still get that centaur into a top public school simply by virtue of her title… Thanks for the comments! and then The Scout's Dream one of my few pure M/M stories without some non M/M shenanigans going on as well They do. Sadly, the voice actor for the TF2 Soldier, Rick May, died recently. He was 79 and hadn’t been well since February, but they wrote some great lines for him to deliver and he always did ‘em well. Thanks again for the comments!
  20. It was super strange. Lucius was so shocked he moved to London and became a market trader with his OC brother and their OC uncle lived there too.
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    JayDee's Review Reply Thread (Games)

    The Countess of of Abingdon is far too well bred to stoop to such base abuse against beloved fellow Brits. Now, those ‘bloody colonials’* on the other hand… *Giles Voice Struck Down and Sodomised Thanks for your interest! No, probaby not. Instead I ended up writing Shokan Lust on the basis of feedback/request from an MK fan who’d read the Stryker story, and the last main part of that revists the “Sheeva with a cock boning the shit out of a dude” theme although the rest of the story is FF. I kind of misunderstood the request part from the MK Fan and it wasn’t ‘til the first parts were in the bag that they pointed out they’d thought I was gonna write Sheeva with a cock all the way through. Uh, oops.
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    JayDee's Review Reply Thread (Games)

    And back to kinda funny titles, Lara Croft's Sheep God Trials Thanks for the review! Yeah, it does kind of just get worse as it goes on with a sudden death toll and some, uh, stereotypical behavior in the land down under don’t it? It’s a sad sick world when folks can publish shit like this I guess.
  23. I have progressed from starting stories and not finishing them to not starting stories. Well, ok, regressed then. Which is a shame as the next unfinished one would have been about a guy finding out his Mom had a twin after finally meeting the rest of the family (after his Mom’s falling out before he was born). It’d have been dead pervy as there’d be an attraction on both sides.

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      JayDee

      One thing there is, is time!

    3. GeorgeGlass

      GeorgeGlass

      I second Thundercloud’s suggestion of writing the middle of the story. That’s usually my process: I write the scene that I have best figured out first, regardless of where in the story it happens. The other stuff comes eventually.

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      JayDee

      It sounds like an option! If I can get the motor ticking over again I’ll maybe give it a try. Thanks guys!

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    "...or just plain review-whore!"

    I haven’t done a whole lot of co-writing, but Parlor Games was basically @InBrightestDay plucking some bits of sweetcorn out of something I squeezed out and adding some real quality and I love how it turned out, but what with the lack of sex, romantic incest, or Kushina* cheating on Naruto it has gone unreviewed thus far so this is me taking the description of this subforum seriously and review whoring! Story link – Parlor Games Description: Chad and Ricky have used Todd, their special needs brother, as their muscle for quite some time now. They move from town to town, finding new girls to, as they tell Todd, "play games" with. One night, however, they pick the wrong house to invade. Codes: AFFO COMPLETE Hum MiCD NoSex Oneshot Violence Words: 3488. Not one of which is “Titicaca”. So, here I am. Turning review-tricks, making like a Winchester Goose of reviews, hooking reviews etc etc etc. Taking advantage of most of the world being stuck inside and having masturbated itself raw over George’s stories, and so looking for something to give their gentials a break. Please review! But am I offering anything in return? A little Hannibal Lecter Quid Pro Quo? A favor for you on this the day of your daughter’s wedding? No. I’m a monster. You all know that by now. Or ought to. Or learned it when you just read that a few words ago. Or guessed when I kept driving this bit into the ground. But I could certainly review something of yours back atcha. Make this a single-story-centric version of one of those review exchange threads that just kind of sputtered and died like my creative spark. I still gotta go to work so I don’t have all the free time some folks do, but seeing as Parlor Games is a short story I figure drop a oneshot or chapter link in this thread if you have a preference for what I review and I’ll do my best to leave an honest, thoughtful review without too many jokes that exist just to make me laugh. Gotta say tho, no sex stuff with under 16s please. I can’t read it! It barely managed it in actual published library books (Haruki Murakami I’m looking at you, you ear loving genius.) Thanks in advance! *Edit: I meant Hinata but looking at the Naruto subdomain, honestly, his Mom works too.
  25. Sorry ta hear about the toxicity, absolutely a good reason to avoid social media though. I see so much obvious fake news/hoax stuff on facebook, I ended up unfriending a lot of past work colleagues and that, people I hadn’t seen in years and now is mostly family/close friends I don’t get to see often. And even then you got that one or two family members with, uh, robust political views at odds with your own. Also, sorry about the blog -I hope you are able to build it up again if you need it for personal enjoyment or marketing.