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It’s not just the not getting another chapter factor – and to be fair a few of my oneshots with a clear ending and everybody dead have had a sole review of “Can you do X in a second part?” – it’s more the way the site works with oneshots being less likely to be seen once they’re off the latest page unless someone goes looking in the specific sub folder or searches for a specific tag. Less people seeing them mean less opportunities for reviews. Now, older stories still get seen, sometimes quite a lot, but the other factor is that readers do seem less likely to review older oneshots than newer ones. Hence one of my HP oneshots with 10s of thousands of hits but most of the reviews are much older. I’m just theorising here, but it does feel like a factor with alla my unreviewed being oneshots There’s definitely some of that, I guess, and it’s going to be a case of depending on the writer, but for me a lot of the time the character is more fun than the actor/actress because all I know about the actor/actress is what the PR people say, or they put on twitter or something, but the character can have amazing powers and with books/comics and that which also have movie/tv equivilent you can even feel right in their head. At the end of the day Hermione could kill you with a flick of her wrist, while Emma Watson (or the stage actress for wossname child) can’t. I realised as I was writing this there’s a joke in there somewhere, but what the hell. I think maybe I didn’t communicate clearly (“What we have here is… failure to communicate.”) – by saying they don’t necessarily equal quality I was getting at the fact that there’s some heavily viewed and even reviewed stories that are still really shit. No disrespect to the writ… fuck it, they don’t know I’m talking about them. I usually see more hits as a sign of a more active fandom or more popular tag than necessarily quality is what I was going for I guess. Thank you! I appreciate it! That was always one of my more popular original stories it seemed. Someone once requested to write a sequel, I think where a student saved her from her imprisonment at the end by the power of love. Sent the request from a college email. I never heard from them again, but suspect the IT team asked questions about the stories they’d been reading. I just have a mental block against rating most things I’ve written very highly, I guess. Some authors I like have said they like my stuff and I’m half sure they aren’t just returning a compliment, and one character and story I did went on to appear in a bunch more by another writer (who asked!) so I’m sure there’s something in it, but when I look at most of it I just think it’s bad. I’m reading through a story I did in May 2008 at the moment, haven’t looked at it since then and my every other thought is WTF? Ahh well, for my part I just tend to avoid celeb stuff these days for personal fears and reasons but if you ever do anything with original or fictional characters let me know and I’ll have a read! Yes. Yes we do. There was someone on HF had a policy they would only do fan art for characters that had a game/cartoon/comic version not of actors/actresses portrayed version and I think it might well have been the same mentality behind it. Although, sometimes the thing that sells a cartoon character is a sexy voice in your mind… well, to me anyway.

When I’ve finished the application of glitter I’ll stick it in DBZ and leave it until a reviewer tells me a better place then! (Normal suggestions for better places for my stories are “Take them and stick them up your…” well, you can imagine the profanity, I’m sure) Thank you again for your time.

So, I have a story which my summary tells me I set a few years after Dragon Ball GT featuring a character from the series which I wrote as a request in May 2008 (says the file data) and which isn’t loaded on AFF. I was vaguely aware of this but don’t consider it a great story so didn’t really get around to loading it. Anyway, recently thought, what the hell, I’ll give it a roll in some glitter and stick it up 10 years later. Only thing is I am not sure where it needs to go on the archive – I see anime2 subdomain has a Dragonball Z section and wiki tells me Dragon Ball GT is set a few years after that, so would it just go under DBZ same as all the fallout stories go just under fallout for games, or do I need to request another topic in the same/another subdomain? Or is there already a topic somewhere I have missed? I don’t spend a lot of time in anime... My lack of knowlege is also due to this being one of those times I did a request based on a topic I knew nothing about because he requester was really just keen to see my describe a fetish with the character. Meh. Sorry for the rambling, TL:DR is “Where should I put a Dragon Ball GT story with 20 year old future Pan/Giru based death robot from even further in the future pairing?.” Thank you for your time.

I don’t necessarily see Dragon Prints as a sign of quality – it’s a sign someone clicked, not that they read it. I guess at most it says “This summary/codes/title/pairing/fandom was appealing” and a big multiparter, where the parts are posted at intervals rather than all at once, will often have many more hits than a oneshot purely because each new chapter will bring it back to the front page, but it doesn’t necessarily mean it’s any better. The oneshot could be amazing! For the celebrity thing… eh, I’ve said my bit on why I stopped doing ‘em, so purely in line with this topic - I sometimes think with celebrity stories folks don’t want to be commenting/reviewing positively on something the celebrity might have a lawsuit about later – but I guess the same could apply for many copyrighted works. I do know that if, say, I commented on a rape fic about a celebrity and them someone linked them to it on twitter, or a talk show host bought it up (as occasionally happens, it ain’t just mean tweets! Or, hell, a lot of these folks are waaay more into the internet than before, prolly find thm theirselves) I’d feel pretty bad for ‘em. Maybe other folks think the same thing and are less keen to have their reviews in that context, but quite happy to masturbate over it? But even that theory doesn’t hold up because there are people out there happy to use internet anonymity to tell someone to their twitter/IG whatever account that they hope they get raped/murdered/not allowed to be in another Star Wars movie. And those angry folks seem like they’d not be bothered reviewing celeb porn. Hell, some of ‘em are probably making the deepfakes. Having a quick look at yours, I see that three of ‘em only have one part, and the other one only has two parts – every single one of my unreviewed stories is a oneshot and I think that can have an impact as well, maybe more so than the domain thing (unless it’s a nosex multiparter in a really unknown fandom with other really niche tags or something!). Might even be more that factor than the celeb factor, because as you have with your big multi-parters once you get regular readers they’re keen to offer input, and feedback and interact, and guess about how things will go and so on. Just a thought. When I was writing celeb stories I got the vast majority of my reviews by email, maybe you’d get some by sticking a “Hey folks! If you don’t want to post a review, email me your thoughts!” message?

I’m just using domain in the sense of AFF’s subdomains because when I went through my stories I did it by subdomain originals and movies etc. Genre’s a better term for general fiction discussion and you can have same genre stories in different subdomains. I’d say least likely to be reviewed on here is a oneshot nosex original story, or little known fandom. People’ll definitely review a shitty story with a fetish they like, often to say they want to see more of it. I speak as a writer of some pretty shitty stories with reviews of that nature! Same with certain popular fandoms where a particular character or theme will get reviews just ‘cos folks want to consume any media they can with it. That’s how it seems to me. I’m sure you’re right that getting replies directly to the forum means you’re getting less on the story – those regular readers’d definitely be making at least some of the same comments as reviews! Gotta rush, will comment more later!

I keep trying to tell everyone that Existential Dread’s gonna be the next big fetish.

Chuck’s having fun, not taking himself even a little bit seriously and making a bit of money out of it. Seems like a good dude! I mean, look at the feelgood nature of My Butt Is Comforted By The Realization That I'm Okay And Everything Will Be Alright

There’s quite a few of them, although admittedly most of them are just “butt” and “pounding” repeated.

https://www.humblebundle.com/books/chuck-tingle-books?hmb_source=navbar&hmb_medium=product_tile&hmb_campaign=tile_index_4 It’s for charity! And how could you miss such great titles as Living Inside My Own Butt For Eight Years Starting A Business And Turning A Profit Through Common Sense Reinvestment And Strategic Targeted Marketing?

If it’s not Minor1 tagged I’ll look out for it! Those wacky pro-life ponies!

Some say that GeorgeGlass’s great talent is to make readers believe the unbelievable and so without further ado a positive review of The Man in the Tree. Thank you for your review! I am always grateful to hear what people have thought of my stories. It made me do something I thought I’d never again do: read the story. It. Um. Yeah, we’ll go with that... Detailed world building. Irony. Trees gonna tree. It was probably intended to be in the same world as another few supernatural characters I do, although there’s nothing explicitly connecting it. Could always do a follow up and send Kate to sharpen her claws against it and then have to run away really fast. Thank you for your kind words, I appreciate the review and making me have one less unreviewed!

...well, that’s a pop culture ref I don’t get! Happens more and more as I get closer to middle age. With older stories at least, unless someone goes looking for a specific fetish or specific fandom (and not even then if it’s a very popular fandom with a ton of stories) people just aren’t going to see them as they are with the latest update stories. I’ve had a couple cases where an old story suddenly started getting reviews again, but both were because of them being linked/referenced elsewhere by somone else delving more deeply and greedily than usual (Thanks JRRT) in the archives. I suspect you’re right that readers who don’t finish a story are less likely to review it too, but not just because of hotness, but also when they don’t like it – While I almost always review stuff I’ve read and liked, even if I didn’t finish reading it, if I’ve hated something/can’t think of any positives/didn’t get far ‘cos it sucked, I’m much less likely to leave a review because pure negativity with nothing contructive is no use to a writer*, and I am not great at constructive criticism. Plus, “Christ, this is fucking dull, I’ve had more fun reading the bleach bottle while sat on the shitter, Ms E L James” is probably pretty subjective. *I mean, most writers. I used to love getting to share the non-story-reviewing flames in the old flames thread before having to delete them on account of the site’s no flames rules.

I think you might have reviewed Just a Cat when I still had a HF account! Would have lost all the reviews I both received and made when I deleted it. And no problem! Curfew is a great little story, and hopefully story 89 is just as good!

Had a quick check and 88 stories posted? Better get another one loaded quick before internet neo-nazis think it’s a subliminal message! Unless, you know, it is a subliminal message for neo-nazis in which case, um, you’d probably want to leave it. I guess. I see a lot of your unreviewed are also originals. Obviously this here is AdultFanFiction rather than AdultFictionPress and I sometimes feel that the original stories are something some readers are less likely to look for. The site analytics may prove that wrong though! Just thoughts as they occured on some of yours! Mighty Magiswords – No joke, I’ve literally never heard of this fandom. Generally if something from America doesn’t take off/even get released in my third world country I usually hear about the bigger pop culture stuff through internet discussions, but not this’n. So, yeah, I could see how it’s a less popular fandom! Brides of Evil – I can see where you are coming from. My one and only erotic fiction co-writing attempt was also kinda a bad experience. I basically did 95% of the work, the other person did 3%, 2% didn’t get done at all and they reposted it. I may strip out their contributions sometime, but leave an original idea credit (their contributions were literally the original suggestion of people to use – RPF – and a few lines near the end, most everything else was me) and re-do it as a fanwork. I found it a lot easier to take requests/prompts/challenges and then show a first draft to the person who made ‘em to see if there’s anything they’d like me to add, remove or modify. Much more satisfying experience. On the other hand, years ago I used to do play-by-post non-adult roleplay and that was quite fun. Huh. Curfew – That’s definitely a topic with a bit of a fanbase on AFF. I’ll add it to my “to Read and review as soon as I have more time” list, because reasons. Dear Hazel – Some stories in letter format have been very popular over the years, but I could see how it might be a tough sell. The Small Hours – I think it can be similar with some of the gory stories. There is definitely a reader base, but a lot of them dont want to leave a record they liked it or something. Also, at least with the gore fans, there’s a percentage of incredibly self centred and cruel folk who read them who aren’t disposed to review. Not so sure if that also applies to the kinks here. Satisfaction – feel good incest also appears to be the leading porn type at the moment, based on the number of folks on reddit complaining how they have trouble finding videos with anything else. A Day at the Beach – nearly 60K hits and no reviews is just plain rude. I can’t help ya with that one though. Thanks to you, and everyone else, for the thread contributions!

I suppose I am a glass half empty kind’ve person. I see flaws in nearly everything. With the exception of The Price, by Pippychick, which I am again not going to link and review whore for. But, you know, if you happen to see a link to it somewhere, and click it, and read it, well the decent thing… I don’t really hold in my head concerns when folks don’t review – when I did the list above I had to stop and think about some of them to try and figure why they’d been overlooked. I never really thought ‘bout it before this thread. One thing that annoyed me in the past was when I did a story for someone and then they gave me literally no feedback on it. It’s like “Jesus, it’s your request, if I’ve missed something you need to get off let me know!” Back in the day some of the low ratings would make me laugh. It’d be obvious a “seconds after loading” downvotin’ had happened literally because of the tags or summary. I had one story that got rate-bombed with 100+ 1 ratings over night which I guessed was because someone really didn’t like the story.

Full listing? I’m in…. Well I’m not, I’ve got 100+ of the fucking things. I don’t have all week. Samahlen (combined one-shots): 22260 / 105 – Now this is a good story. Literally so good it got me to play a game that I then loved and wrote a bit of fanfic for myself. [off topic] Alistair should totally have been a male warden romance option. And Morrigan a female warden option. And Dog for both of… Ok, ok, I’ll shut up now[/off topic] I respect that. I guess I get squirrelly at the thought of someone’s first impression of my writing being something I’m not 100% proud of. That kind’ve sums up alla my writing to be honest… Nothing’s perfect! Multiparters definitely seem to have more chance of picking up reviews. And, yep, genre definitely makes a differene. That’s sort of the point I was making with the HP stories I have – some of them are really bad and some are kinda ok to good, but there’s only one of them that never got a review. Even that unfinished scat fic I wrote got reviews and that was just me being vulgar. As for story pulling: I pulled all my Real Person Fic stories years ago from AFF, but have re-written and expanded some of them to be about non real folks. I also have a few stories – some of drabble or micro fic length – that I’ve never really put up on AFF for one reason or another. The reason I pulled all my early JD stuff originally in like 2006 I can’t fully remember now. 12 years ago! I think one of the old mods said or did something that irritated me. This was pre-current forum days, I think, though possibly after… was it yahoo group? There was that AFF livejournal for a bit too... For my old username I took ‘em all down because of the one username rule, and because some real world folks saw some of my writing, but later on I asked DemonGoddess and she said it was ok to have my old username stories under my old username so I re-loaded some of the best of them. Probably coulda stuck a few more up but I doubt I will now. Maybe one of these days.

I suspect Minor1 is one of those tags like Rape that a large portion of readers understandibly actively avoid and a small portion actively look for. Some of the tags will get readers for a fandom or original topic about which they know/care little just because the fetish/kink/straight up mental sickness (Hello ABDL! I kid, I kid!) is the most important element to them. Though, weirdly, they’re often more likely to review to plead for more of said fetish sometimes in fandom they do know better, “Wow I really loved seeing your OC Mike wearing that pair of Depends, have you ever thought of how Batman must use something similar?” etc etc Than click and skip by unreviewed. Recording the dragon prints like that sounds like a good idea, but I suspect I might find it a bit depressing if I tried it with mine.

I’m not posting links ‘cos this isn’t a review whore thread. As most of what I write is one shots I am used to getting one or two reviews a story, with the odd one getting more and the multiparters occasionally getting 20+ Given my often niche subject matter not a big suprise! Anyway, I got to thinking about hits vs reviews – I have a story with 60K plus hits and considerably less reviews, but also I have a few stories with no reviews at all. And I wondered if it was worth looking at them to see if there’s any specific reason why they didn’t get even the pity reviews so many of my others got! So in order of dragon prints these are: Games > Fallout > No Mercy in Novac - Dragon Prints : 15278 15K reviews. Even with this likely representing one or two masturbators revisiting a few times, it’s quite a lot of people who’ve been interested enough in the fandom and the summary with it’s promised “gang of horny rapists” to click, but then haven’t liked or hated it enough to leave a comment. My strong suspicion with this one is that a lot of them have seen the note that this is a re-write of one of my earlier stories and either didn’t want to try again, or understandably felt this was a likely sign of poor quality hack work to salvage the porn scenes of 2007 JayDee. Games > Mortal Kombat > Sindel's Lullaby - Dragon Prints : 7000 I suspect that what happened here was the many readers who liked “Shokan Lust” didn’t pay close enough attention to the codes/description on this very different story, realised what they were getting after clicking and noped the fuck out. 7K though. Harry Potter > Crossovers > Nightmare at Hogwarts - Dragon Prints : 5798 This is my only HP fandom fic to get zero reviews, and for getting reviews HP fandom used to be like shooting fish in a barrel. You could literally write a necrophile sex dwarf and people would give it an honest appraisal. The only reason this one has so many dragon prints is because it’s been on AFF since I started re-loading my stories on AFF in 2007 after taking them down that first time (and accidentally not saving that hot Kate/Dad Angel fic I wrote. I’m a dumb fucker). So I think the reason for no reviews is niche appeal, less popular character, Het content, teen version of old character, and Freddy not being Freddy enough. S’a piece of shit story tbh. Cartoons > Josie and the Pussycats > Just A Cat - Dragon Prints : 3925 I thought this’n did have reviews tbh. Maybe the user’s content was deleted? Anyway, kind’ve a cheat to include since while it has no review on AFF it did get reviewed as part of “Fanfiction Friday” on the old Topless Robot site, and numerous reader comments that quite failed to understand it wasn’t intended as a serious literary heavyweight work, but just a 70s cartoon Afro-American woman with a penis nailing a white dude. Because that shit’s hot. Shut up. It is. 0 onsite reviews can’t be wro… fuck. FWIW this is probably one of my better unreviewed stories, but it is a fairly small fandom and dickgirl-on-male is not everybody’s cup of spunk. Movies > Southland Tales (2006) > Nobody Now Dragon - Prints : 2984 Movie that tanked at the box office, and didn’t make a whole lot of sense even when you read the prequel comics but still had some fun scenes and and dialogue and folks playin’ the roles. So on that basis, and the very niche amputee fetish, not surprised it didn’t get a lot of folks who looked at it happy to leave even an anon review. Another one of the batch of stories I re-wrote to be about a fanwork, although the original one wasn’t actually posted anywhere – they rejected it at CSSA which must take some doing. Games > Viewtiful Joe > Hulk Davidson has Sylvia for Dinner - Dragon Prints : 2726 A vore request/story exchange I did for a fandom I knew sweet FA about, so it probably scores poorly for being a lesser known Capcom property, not being especially close in character to the actual property, and featuring people eating. Cartoons > Extreme Ghostbusters > The Goth and The Goatherd - Dragon Prints : 2028 Not all of my re-write attempts were very good. Shoehorning this one into EGB didn’t really work. Not surprised at the low hits or low reviews – again, lesser popular fandom and niche content. Games > REsident Evil > Control Takes Jill - Dragon Prints : 1565 Niche content, but big fandom where folks usually don’t mind violent rapey gory stories. I guess It was just wrong place, wrong time. Not my best work as I was having a hard time writing anything at the time, and then forgot to post it here for ages (was a request topic fic I wrote as a reward for another forum’s thread) Just one of those things. Originals > Fucking Halloween Party Dragon Prints : 1267 Since Reviewed! (That you reviewer!) There’s some nice sex in this one and again actually cheating to be here – it did get reviewed when originally posted as part of the Halloween special multithread, but I wanted it on my own profile to keep alla the character stories together, and 1200+ people checked it out and didn’t really care either way! I certainly am not suprised of my four stories with no reviews and low dragon prints two are originals because that’s a harder sell outside of specific topics anyway. Maybe shoulda gone for “Cocky Succubus’ Halloween Party” Games > Elder Scrolls Oblivion > Decorative Destruction - Dragon Prints : 991 Someone wanted Jar Jar Binks to go to the Elder Srolls universe and rape a specific NPC with a tiny part in the game. I owed them a story and wrote it. Readers saw Jar Jar and scrolled the fuck down. I expect it’s 900 Star Wars bot searches. Weird idea. Had some nice descriptions I think, but I haven’t been back to check. Games > Elder Scrolls Morrowind > The Orc's Weapon - Dragon Prints : 619 It’s got NoSex tag, and features a character from an older game and, well, I liked it but I can see why it didn’t take off. Was a sequel to my better written Friendship’s Gift in a way. Originals > The Man in the Tree Dragon Prints : 602 Since Reviewed! (Thank you reviewer!) I did 52 prompts, one a week, for a year. This was the week I couldn’t think of any goddamn thing worth a shit and so crapped this out. It’s deservedly forgotten to the point I didn’t remember it until I saw it. ...I started with the most dragon prints stories to be positives. Anyway, that’s my Unreviewed. How’s about y’all?

Death’s Cold Fingering is one of those stories where I think “Well, it’s kinda fucked up but at least nobody has to look at it if they don’t want to!” and then I get reminded that actually the mods have to check all the stories for codes and disclaimers and such and feel a little bad. I mean, if If I’d posted this on old school gurochan’s /lit/ board someone would totally replied “So, can Anthony fuck Rita Pedal Bin style in part 2?” by now. and that’s not the kind’ve fic you want to even skim. On the plus side, I don’t do celeb! BronxWench review: This is one time when I think not having played the game won't make a damned bit of difference. Poor, poor Paul... Rita was most persuasive, and after all, it's not like Sofia was going to complain. On the other hand, consent is consent, and it's really not enough to assume the dead won't mind. Sort of the ultimate #metoo with one hell of a karmic kick at the end. Good to have you back and posting! Thank you for the review! I really appreciate it. I mean, I even like getting the negative reviews so the positive ones are really nice! I always err on the side of caution with consent issues and they definitely didn’t ask first so it got a Rape tag without a moment’s hesitation. Paul wasn’t really capable of giving informed consent to fingering Sofia’s shade either. A baseball bat to the head definitely counts as a form of coercion, right? Paul should have been strong and stood up to his punky necrophile girlfriend about right and wrong. Done a bit of Educatin’ Rita. Although, really he was coerced too. Rita’s the repulsive one here! I don’t know that I’ll be posting much more – I have a lot in my scraps folder of notes and half (or much less) started stuff. I still dream of getting the Willow gangsnuggle story finished, I’ve got a first draft that I originally did for the Fate/Fun/Finesse prompt before deciding to make it You! 5 which basically just has Lupa pissed off under a silence spell thing that I might manage to make half readable, and that’s the closest to done. I'd be nice to write more though, when I have the time. I miss it. I miss reading stories as well – I used to read a hell of a lot more. It’s Good to see you getting your writing published out there!

The Taking of Felicia Hardy remains in zMisplaced Stories [ADMIN use only] > Spiderman, and I am sure when I posted it in 2009 there was an X-Man domain but not a seperate Marvel domain. This was a long time ago and there’s been a lot of booze since then, and the only reason I haven’t done the decent thing and taken it down and re-loaded it on the Marvel side myself is because it’s got 12 reviews, which is an insane amount for me. Well, it had 11 but today another one: Donglibog review: Just read part 1. Really enjoyed it. I kinda like the fat guy character. Many thanks for your review! I really appreciate the feedback. Per the disclaimer at the start part 1’s plot and several elements were requested by KZ-01. Now, KZ-01 had a favorite fantasy and that was a smokin’ hot woman with a guy who was ugly as fuck in same way – fat, horrible features, Ted Nugent shirt that sort of thing. I say had, but for all I know KZ-01 still has the same desires. He made quite a few requests and the Felicia Hardy one appealed to me so I wrote it! Now the reason for explaining this is firstly to say I don’t take total credit for the fat guy character and secondly to let you know that KZ-01 inspired/requested fat guys appeared in other stories that you may also like if you can find them! Sadly I don’t have the links, but someone can probably help. Anyway, I appreciate the review, thanks for your kind words.

I “played” a visual novel game on steam last september. It was short but free to play – with achievements! - and apparantly has a premium version with a buncha sex off of Steam. Anyway, afterwards I did a first draft of a story, maybe 1000 words, and then forgot about it. Then, recently, when I felt up to trying to finish the half-done final part of You! I found the draft in the same folder and took a shot at finishing it over the last week. It became my 31st story in AFF’s Games domain Death’s Cold Fingering. You may be able to guess I couldn’t think up a non-shit or even half coherent title. As with many PWPs the story takes a few actual events from the game, described in my half-assed prose, and throws in sex with them. It’s at least one death less violent than most playthroughs of the game, and almost certainly has less sex than the premium version, because all the free one has is sliding puzzles and violence. But what the hell, I’m just a fanfic hack. Anyway. Just using the old review/reply thread for a bit of extra Authors Notes which I’m sure’s allowd somewhere in the rules. Sometimes think it’d be easier to have all my review reply/extra notes in one long thread rather than spread out per subdomain.

Sub: Games Title: The Last Weekend Story Written: http://games.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600090713

I don’t know it! If you could remember any more details such as character names or descriptions eg was it described as a “moon god” or “celestial being” anything like that? Any more specific terms can help a search or trigger a memory from someone who read it.

You! People have been saying to me for a while “I can’t wait to see the end of you!” and I’ve said “You know my writing?” and they’ve looked confused and said “You write?” Review! Thank you for the review, I really appreciate it! If I manage to write again there would be more Kizurial - She’d have a chapter of her own in I! if I get to write it, so would the others. I have edited the top of chapter 5 to include the “NoSex” warning code. Could catch, thanks for the mention! There’s at least a certain amount of nudity or exposure in previous parts and readers might be upset to discover only a cut off mildly-subtle reference to a penis. I personally have a less than pure mental image of Lupa feeding. If y’are inspired go for it – as I recall you inspired me to play Dragon Age: Origins and I really loved that Thank you again! Now we just need 3 G words for more prompts if DG ever has freed up time again… Goth Gushing Geromorphism?

You! finally finished. So if I do never write anything else again at least that’s one thread tied up and left unhanging. Of course, there’s always that first person follow up I! I could write to answer the important questions such as 1) Will it work? 2) What Kate did next 3) how many more of my old OCs can I kill off? 4) Pepsi or Coca Cola? Gotta review! Five chapters, nearly 5000 words, 2000+ hits and finally an 18th review! We’ve all been there! :p I couldn’t have taken that path though because there’s a strict rule in the TOS about setting power crazed futa demons against the archive moderators. Even in fiction! I know, I was initially shocked too, but you’ve got to remember that most of these aren’t the original mods. And that’s why they have the rule. Thanks for the review, the gag made me smile