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Filler isn't necessarily bad. The kind in DBZ is usually funny and even in Naruto, which was more filler than substance, it was some of the better parts. Typically with Anime the problem is they are based on Manga and those are the cumulative efforts of one artist bashing out works at their own pace while Anime has studios on tight release schedules. So they catch up quick and have to fill in the blanks. Or in the case of Fullmetal Alchemist, just kind of make things up and jump the rails, then make a new series once the manga is complete. Still, that doesn't explain why the first season of Korra, which was written as a short season without any deadlines or agendas, sucked… Anyways, my favourite Anime are Fullmetal Alchemist Inuyasha Dragon Ball (franchise) Sailor Moon Highschool D+D High school of the Dead but I have a passing familiarity with many more. Rock Lee and his Ninja Pals is hilarious and I never said I didn't like Ben 10, just that I don't think he or the show is the greatest in recent memory and is not a favourite character to write.

I honestly missed it since I have been using my phone for these discussions. I don’t have much to offer since I’ve only watched the dub that’s available on Hulu so a lot of people like Kushina and places/events are referenced I have no idea about. Mostly just musing. I kind of want to save Rex for a DC crossover and/or his own fic.

I don't really like dimension hopping stories for that reason. The only one I ever got into was Shura’s futa adventures. In the case of the MK crossover, they’lost be spending a lot of time in encampments living in woods and caves and such as they expand their influence and set up bases of operations, again, special forces stuff, and during those times out alone in the wilderness in slums is where the magic happens. My second big issue is that (as weird as it sounds) I actually don't like Ben 10 that much. It's a cool show and I like how it's evolved over a decade but I don't find the character particularly interesting and his power (monster forms) doesn't really work with a lot of settings. I'm also tired of writing him as I have Omniharem and I want to do a younger Ben story. To the point where I am considering swapping him in this story for someone that fits the Mortal Kombat setting and Special Forces mission better, like… I dunno, Snake? Rex? Neji?

The main issue is I am actually not that big a Naruto fan and never really got into One Piece. The only thing I can think of is some kind of soccubus possession or Naruto doing research to further his deceased master’s novels. The whole revenant thing kind of confused me in MKX. Since I am doing a borderline arcade style reselling, I'll say no and they are merely under the influence of Quan Chi and/or Shang Tsung’s magic. Unless we just really want to see the revenant forms in a lemon or I can figure out how to work Ashrah’s supposedly holy sword into the plot.

Mileena rules absorbed Edea until the special forces return Kitana to the throne and promise to aid her in becoming Outworld Empress if she recognizes Edenia independance. Tanya and D’vora are enforcers for Sindel who are defeated and coerced to their side. Sheeva is head of the Shokan and is defeated and converted.

Ultimately depends on how long the story ends up being. Phase one is a small harem of girls his age with some NTR just for fun. Phase two is expanding the harem to other girls, including teachers and parents and some harder NTR for those already in relationships. Phase 3 would probably be after school deal with the formalization of the harem and actually cuckolding people. Then phase 4 would be genderbending. If the story goes on that long.

I was going to do something like he grows his harem as he topples the regime in Outworld in traditional special forces fashion. He secures Edenia’s independence and support through dealings with Kitana and disposing of Mileena. Mileena’s loyalty is earned by promising her Outworld’s throne if conditions are met (again, typical special forces things) and in turn brings the Tarkatans to his side. Nitara and Ashrah bring vampires and nether realm folk to their side, D’vora and Tanya are already traitors etc. If I picked up at the MKX timeline though I really don’t see a logical point of insertion for him though, I mean Cassie’s team has it pretty covered. I also fear Ben and his aliens are somewhat over powered compared to their peers and I don’t think he’ll gell well with the sword, sorcery and cyborg setting.

The Boob Lover suggested an alternate idea in his challenge whereby Ben is brought into the game by a cursed laptop from Charmcaster that's more of an arcade style game where Sonya and Cassie’s special forces team is being hunted by Sindel’s in Outworld.

I was going to either pick it up in MKX timeline with alterations and/or do the video game insertion alternate idea.

Yes, as far as I am aware, Ivy and maybe some others have stunted aging from Soul Edge shards. I haven’t played V so I cant confirm. I was figuring that Krillin probably fell to whatever the problem is for the plot, he does die a lot so it’s not even unlikely. Yes, the major don’ts you aforementioned that I did not feel like typing again.

My keyboard was destroyed in an unfortunate soda based accident. As such I can not finish my works as planned but I stilll want to continue discussion. So here’s a challenge idea Instead. Another World Martial Arts Tournament Plot: Fighters from around the world gather to find out who among them is the greatest martial artist in the land. Trunks and Goten, now teens, enter under their fused form to test their metal against the world’s best but it becomes quickly apparent that there are stronger forces at work. Requirements Goten and Trunks are in their later teens in this fic Fight scenes Tries to keep things balanced even when opponents get possessed and empowered When fused, Gotenk’s penis is the combined length and girth of the already impressive size of the boys and increases in size and potency as he powers up. I.e. normally 16 inches, becomes 19 at super sayain, 22 and muscled at ascended super sayain and even bigger at SS3 etc Prospective Fighters to join harem Chun Li Cammy White Rainbow Mika Poison Rose Crimson Viper Sonya Blade Cassie Cage Jaqui Briggs Alisa Boscanovitch Williams twins Xiu Ling Sakura Miss Fortune Cluberella Filia Parasoul Android 18 Ivy Valentine (at halted by Soul Edge) Tina Armstrong Kasumi Dixie Clemets Any woman fighter than from aa near earth modern setting is preferable Thing I would like to see Extreme body proportions Clothes ripping Hyper sexuality Power Perversion Large loads Not allowed Hard kinks BDSM Pegging Pregnancy Others listed at top Just an idea

I could see Rex in the DC universe. The most important thing for me in crossovers is they have to match the setting. I can see Rex in a near earth modern setting but not as much in a 17th century setting and the nanites really over power him against the characters of that story. In a DC universe story though, no problem. I was thinking of some kind of world martial arts tournament type thing with teen Gotenks or something and women from various fighting games but can’t figure out how to balance the power levels among the genres.

What about Setsuka, Shura and the three shop venders in Soul Caliber 3? If I did a Soul Caliber story it would probably star Link, who (naturally) has been very well blessed by the fairies in this world. I still need to finish Generator Rex.

The dissidents from previous chapters who stage a poorly executed coup. They're tied up and made to watch while he enjoys his harem and contemplates their fate.

Ruffnut most likely. It'll be as part of a larger orgy.

Is it just ideas you have or can other suggest for discussion and tuning? Are they going to have extreme body proportions and sexual performances as usual per these challenges? What do you mean no politics? So I can't write my smut as a treatise on the role of Spain in the European Union or the practices of the Ways and Means Comittee in congress? If you can stomach the captive audience and humiliation, there'll be doggy style anal in my next Overlord chapter.

So are these ideas you are using or formal challenges that you are also taking or like what? What kind of version of Spider-Man are we talking about? How are they going to stop a universe obliterating monster? Can Ivy Valentine be in the harem?

Thank you. Still not to sure what typifies my style but I am glad it is working. Sure, I love answering questions. Honestly, when I started writing this, I only planned like six girls ahead (Hermione, Luna, Cho, the Patils, Pansy and Katie Bell). This is almost PWP in that regard but I can easily expand the harem how ever I want. I also planned there being a lot of NTR for a change, so married and older women are definitely options (leaning towards younger milfy McGonnagal, Narcissa and Fluer). When I said possible gender bends, I was mainly thinking of a female Draco, Snape and Harry, but I also want to cuckold and NTR them. I did not plan on converting them to females though I wouldn’t be opposed to it. I also have not ruled out Molly and Ginny. The main effect it would have on males is make them either intimidated or awed by his masculinity. As to the whole amplifying the sexual characteristics thing, still trying to figure out how much I should do it by, keeping proportions and performance ‘realistic’ or going to the extreme with Shiin, Jay Marvel and Julius Zimmerman style bodies like my other fics. The update schedule I am trying to get on is one chapter a week, alternating between one of the flag ships (Omniharem, Naruko’s Pact, Overlord and the almost complete Lust and Pixie Dust) and one of the other one shots or anthology works. The next update should be Overlord, and then one of the other challenges or Omniharem. I seem to have misplaced my notes for Pact and have to dig through this forum to find the ideas for the next chapter and one of these days I’ll get around to at least starting the orgiastic finale to the one that started it all, L&PD. The next chapter of Overlord will feature an orgy and have some more extreme tags (public humiliation and a captive audience), and the next one shot is going to have some extreme kinks I’ll discuss as it comes nearer. The next Omniharem will be either Charmcaster, Sunny Tennison, or Attea/Looma.

I think I’ll try that as a one shot side story at some point. If you have a favourite pic(s) you think I could write a story around, let me know. Anyways, opening yet another front. Took up the Ron’s Harem challenge. This one will be more of an anthology work than an actual beginning, middle and end story. It’s a little short, almost PWP but the lemon passes my 2,000 word minimum. I need something that isn’t an epic to break up the monotony. So as usual, any questions or statements you’d like to issue or make, let me know.

First chapter of Ronald Weasely and the Crystal Orb of Carnal Desires is up. Short chapter, more of an introduction really. Further discussions can be had at my thread.

Never heard of them. I only just figured out all those thousands of sketches were by the same dude like a week ago while doing something completely unrelated.

Zimmerman fuck fics? We’re talking about Julius Zimmerman right? Draws those uber busty fan art sketches?

I’m more into that Zimmerman guy. Well, that won’t be for a long while regardless. I need to get a Patreon or something. Anyways, next chapter of Omniharem is up. I was writing it concurrently with the Charmcaster chapter but this got finished first, so they’ll reference events that haven’t occurred yet. Also made progress on the next Overlord chapter, as well as the start of a Ron’s Harem story and one of the side project one shots. This one’s a bit on the longer side and a lot raunchier than usual. I decided to take a break from the whole character development and emotional connection thing to see where that road lead. Which is ironic considering I was pulling from Your Lie in April straight until a few lines into the major conversation before they have at it. I kind of gave up when I remembered that this is a harem fic so the idea of love as any kind of meaningful construct is sort of nixed.

I think I'll at least do one shots from it in the very distant future. Anything else you think I should try or could pull off? I kind of want to take a shot at some harder kinks or those fighting games I have been playing a lot of recently.

I was considering the Avatar retelling challenge before other projects that interested me more came up. Now Snake King is working in a Ben10 Avatar project so I put what little I did for on the back burner for a later time, if at all. Why?