Praetor

Looma and Atea are cuming soon but I want one more traditional m/f scene to avoid writing threesomes back to back (they're exhausting and confusing to write). Gwen, who else would be Ben's first? They find that they really like it.

Unfortunately, I'm already writing a Ben 10 harem fic with overbusty, sexually enhanced women and a hung and horny Ben. The only thing besides the setting that'd make it unique would be if Ben had an actual horse's cock, although the conditions make it interesting. What do the locals look like and what happens when they eventually leave the world?

Complex real world business keeps getting in the way. I've been too busy to even think about the fics, pretty much writing in brief five minute increments. I wrote a 'short' (4000 word) threesome that centers around Ben's first anal and am thinking of posting it as a short separate, interlude 'thanks for waiting' kind of chapter since I can't find a way to bridge it into the encounter for the next chick to join the harem (who I also haven't decided on yet).

Chapter 3 of Omniharem is up. The lines 'reduced to a quivering mass of jelly by her orgasm' and 'shakes like a spinning blob of warm clay' came to mind when you asked how Lucy sounded so beware. Very little build up because Gwen set it up behind the scenes. I wanted to use a scenic, exotic setting because the penthouse is going to get really old fast if I use it every time, and crowded as the harem expands. So I picked a cruise liner because I was playing Resident Evil Revelations the other day so the imagery is still in my head. Honestly, I was drawing a blank while writing this one. I feel like I could have done more with the shapeshifting and intensity but whatever, here's what I got. On a semi related note, halfway done with the next chapter of L&PD, the issue is that I was unsatisfied with where that chapter went and after writing and editing it, I scraped it and started over. As always, read, review and enjoy. http://cartoon.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600095130&chapter=3

Looks pretty good, it's very refreshing to someone other than Ben or Hiccup getting a harem. Nothing against the characters but he features a lot in these challenges. I would like to take it but am overbooked now for now and the near future. Hopefully someone else gets inspired and picks it up.

I think that's a fine idea but I want to hold off on Attea and Looma for just a moment since that threesome promises to be a spectacle and I want to build towards it a little more. I feel like that'd be double dipping, they really should consolidate the categories especially now that Omniverse merges the ages of Ben 10. I also want to use some of Lunarsilver's ideas, with Gwen largely (at first) calling the shots on organizing the harem and getting them stylized dog collars.

Dang dyslexia, the fact that there is a Lucy and a Julie in this harem is going to get really confusing later on. Fixed it, now who's next? Ideas or suggestions please.

Chapter 2 of Omniharem is up. Wow, that was quick. Almost the same length in a seventh of the time. Normally I'd dilly dally on it, reading and rereading it over and over again for weeks while making extremely minute edits but I'm going out on a limb with this one to see what happens. It certainly is one of my sloppier works, like... in universe, a lot of body fluids being shared. Please read and review. http://cartoon.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600095130&chapter=2

If you have any ideas, share them. Redundancy is by far the biggest issue with harem fics. After a few chicks, it all seems very indifferent.

Thank you all for the words of praise. I have no idea how the uncle/grandpa Max mix up slipped through numerous edits and revisions and I will be more wary of wording when it comes to the intense lovemaking parts of the lemons in the future. Now how does Gwen feel about Ben forming a harem, and is there anyone in particular you all would like to see next?

First chapter of Ben 10: Omniharem is up. Read, review and address all grievances here. Literally all feedback and/or suggestions help and would be appreciated. This is my first attempt injecting emotion into a scene so it's probably clunky and awkward but so is sex between cousins so it fits. I wanted to include a flashback to their childhood for grounding but felt that was too Naruto. I hope I have breathed some kind of life into the fantasy and can improve upon them in the future. http://cartoon.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600095130

Welp, it's been a week, here's what I got. It's about as long as an L&PD chapter, which is impressive considering I've only worked on it for a few hours over the course of the week. Now I haven't actually 'seen' Omniverse or Alien Force, merely doing research and watching select episodes, so I apologize for inconsistencies with the lore. Please read and review so I can improve... http://cartoon.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600095130

What are their dispositions? Are they super horny drooling mouthed porn parodies of themselves whose life desire is Ben's cock no matter the costs or are do they still retain their competency and require coercion for sex? To what extent does the incest angle bother Ben and his family, if at all? Are there any particular threesomes you would like to see?

Is there any particular order or preference as to who is going first? Is this an actual harem, like are they going to be in a big room for his exclusive pleasure or are they just hit and runs (smash and grabs?). I know megabust is the focus but are there any big butt models in mind for visual reference? Is anal on the table? How much milkplay would you like? Is there a target length for the chapters or lemons? Am I asking too many questions?

Oooh, a Resident Evil request- Hey! Those challenges read like booblover ones too. It's a very good template, plot, kinks, untouchables, visual references- they should all be so comprehensive. It would be helpful if you posted any ideas or suggestions, no matter how minor, to the aforementioned thread. Inspiration and motivation can dry up really quick, especially without direction.

Reads like a booblover challange. Did he get locked out of his account and have to generate a new one? Consider me interested, I think I'll add this to the rest of the challenges I am currently juggling since they are all in a similar vein. I just need to watch Omniverse first. Discussions can be had on my thread http://www2.adult-fanfiction.org/forum/index.php/topic/60592-praetors-discussion-thread/#entry380019

I kind of missed Danny Phantom. I stuck around for the first season and a half before loosing interest in favour of other shows. Now that the internet has made a time capsule out of old TV shows I may revisit it later, not like it was a bad show or anything, I just liked other ones better. I'm still annoyed that I lost all progress on previous fics and am thus slow to start those up again. I finally played MKX (which is awesome, favourite fighting game ever) and have begun working on that project. Figuring out the plot is the hardest part since now there is a time travel storyline. I am working on the Overlord fic but struggling how to format it, mainly trying find the right balance of gratuitous sex, plot advancement, character development and large gory medieval fantasy battles as he grows his dark army pillaging the Disney Kingdoms and traversing moralities. I have a few questions whose answers could help expedite the writing. I would like clarification on the new femboy option in the Big Hero 6 fic, what constitutes a femboy as far as Hiro becoming one? Are the various Ben 10 fics in the same continuity as the other Ben 10 challenges, similarly, is this the same Hiccup from the other two HTTYD challenges? Also, can I get a chapter by chapter review for the Tinkerbell fic? I am still fairly new at this and these fics are primarily for you, so I want to know how I am doing , what you liked/didn't like, where to improve etc. any feedback is appreciated. Thank you for challenging and assisting.

The next chapter will be posted as soon as it is completed. I don't mean to be snarky but these things take time and I am a busy person. Although I try to update at least monthly, even that has been hit and miss. It doesn't help that progress on all fronts has been reset due to an unfortunate hard drive failure. Which actually wasn't that big a deal for L&PD because I had only just started the next chapter, but I had made a great deal of progress on the Haunted House fic. Although it is well that I lost everything for the Mortal Kombat and Marvel projects as they had undergone so much revision they had to be rewritten from the ground up anyways. Periwinkle won't appear for a few more chapters, 4 to be precise if my plot map holds.

I am fully planning on taking this challenge and a few others by thebooblover but am currently in the middle of my first project for him. In the meanwhile, if you want to make suggestions or discuss details to help get the creative gears turning then you can do so on my discussion thread. http://www2.adult-fanfiction.org/forum/index.php/topic/60592-praetors-discussion-thread/

The Mortal Kombat challenge is on hold until I can play the newer games because I don't want to spoil the plots for myself by writing it. I am also wanting to do the How to Train Your Dragon challenges but believe they are being worked on by another so they're not a priority. I want to try the Overlord fic and even did some plot mapping but was unable to develop a format due to the obvious alignment issues of having an evil/grey Overlord make a harem out of heroines and villainesses. Am toying with the TMNT idea, nothing concrete. I wrote a lot of content for the Haunted House story but out of order so I can't upload any of it as is. Although I am thinking of pulling one of the more complete chapters I have written and uploading it as a prologue for Halloween but then I would feel committed to its expedient completion. Those will be as time goes on, as of yet the only ones I am actively working on are the Big Hero 6 and Tinkerbell challenges. Now I know it's insane to ask considering how weighed down I already am, but will you be issuing any more challenges? Just curious.

Thank you. Next chapter of L&PD is up. Immersion, it took twice as long as usual to write and is half as long as the previous chapters. I don't have an explanation, I actually finished this a while ago and was trying to expand it without making it feel stretched before finally accepting it for what it is. Oh well, the longer I put it off, the more anticipated it will be and the more disappointing when it's finally up. I might expand and revise it later and merely append it. Onto the next venture. Work has stalled on the Big Hero 6 project because of real life. Excuses, excuses, circumstances and situations etc. I am trying to make headway on that and work has already begun on the next chapter of L&PD. Again, thank you for your patience.

Sorry, it won't happen again. Please forgive me. http://www2.adult-fanfiction.org/forum/index.php/topic/60592-praetors-discussion-thread/

This is my review thread for all questions, comments, concerns, flames, reviews, suggestions, gripes, complaints or advice etc. concerning me or my fics, as well as for discussing works in progress. Lust and Pixie Dust. After an accident with pixie dust, Terrance awakens with a massive cock and works through Tinkerbell's friends on his way back to her. Big Harem 6. An accident in the Avenger's lab leaves Hiro hung, horny and oddly attractive as he and the gang team with the Avengers and their allies. How to Train Your Overlord. Hiccup finds the remnants of the Tower Heart in some ancient ruins and reassembles them, becoming the new Overlord and setting his eyes on the Disney Kingdoms. How to Ride Your Dragon. How to Train Your Dragon rewritten as a porno. The dragons have ultra busty human forms, all the women dig Hiccup, he's hung like a chandelier, the works. Ben 10: Omniharem. With the power of Alien X, Ben accidentally creates a world where the women of his life are hypersexualized versions of themselves. Naruko's Pact. Naruko sets out to dominate Konoha Highschool with a daemon futadick granted to her by the Goddess of Lust, who she makes a pact with to form a coven for. Ronald Weasley and the Crystal Ball of Carnal Desires. Ron breaks a crystal ball that turns his life into an erotic fantasy. Spellbound. Beast Boy finds a magical tome and figures it would be a good gift for Raven. They accidentally turn her into a bimbo and him into a stallion. Then decide to make a harem.

Chapter 2 is up. http://cartoon.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600094783&chapter=3 Sorry about the long delay, that stupid real life thing keeps getting in the way. I'm also working on some other projects at the same time, mainly the Big Hero Six Marvel fic. I am also toying with some other challenges and determining the feasibility of completing them as well as a couple personal projects (a futanari story you probably wouldn't be interested in and an erotic sci fi and fantasy porn). As well as a few regular fan fiction projects and a fantasy epic. I'm also doing a lot of research for these projects as well as keeping up with comics, games and movies. I'm trying to play Overlord so I can do the Disney princess' challenge but I got stuck early on the part where you crash Melvin's party and the music is charming the minions. Anyways, this is the shortest chapter I have written and is more porn without plot like, as far as there is some very minor setting establishment and then the encounter. Sorry if it seems spat out because of this. Also it has kind of a weird setting and was awkward to write, this is because I want to diversify the sex scenes as much as possible and make the setting and encounters identifiable and memorable so that they are not all same-ie. But I already wrote it out and wasn't about to unwrite it. The whole smut scene was based on the premise of sex in a tree. I've started on the next chapter on this and have the encounter line for the Big Hero 6 fic planned out and have written snippets for it. It's going to be more like Marvel Ultimate Alliance in that its a single long plotline on interconnected missions that has lots of characters coming on and dropping off throughout. I'll try to update before another month elapses but I can't make guarantees against time.

Chapter 2 is up. Called 'Ascension' because I had to put something in the chapter title bar although there isn't a whole lot of ascending unless you count the very end. I forgot while writing it that the first chapter was an origin story as well and tried to make this one as long as that, consequently the sex scene is kind of really long. This was written over the course of a few weeks in short, few minute long sessions a piece so it may seem disjointed at times. It's also my first attempt at any kind of dom/sub play and extensive dialogue in sequence so I apologize for any injury caused by the resulting cringing. http://cartoon.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600094783&chapter=2