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Thanks for the heads up. It was kind of short, Hope you are able to get some larger equipment to write on. B

I second that!!! B

She already knows about that brain thingy. She can tell by your chosen profession. Or the one you "gave up" anyway. B

I hope not so you can effectively drown it. Damn talk about ugly would stop an eight day clock. B

I think the nanites did all they could and Max almost fried himself directing them to at least save her life. B

Welcome to the crowd. B

Does the chairman get called away from the meeting because his daughter has been admitted to the ER if not as an inpatient?? B

Oh this outta be fun after Alice and Amy to their background digging. WE need a full report IMMEDIATELY after the meeting. B

Ass having to wait for kicking? Perish the thought. Under present circumstances getting some ass may have to wait but KICKING. should take top priority. Black ops appears to be like cancer - when you want to cure it you have to get every cell. That is why after excising the visible there is chemo AND radiation. Looks like another operation is called for this time with the proper follow up. I really like what you have done so far. This, to me, is fare more exciting than any of your other cliffhangers. Please post the next one quickly. B

Wouldn't have anything to do with the chairmen of the school board and the PTA getting thrown back a few notches would it?? Could be the "my little darling wouldn't do anything like that" syndrome comes into play?? Only the master knows where he is going to take us next. I agree with BigMan where is the next chapter?. This is almost worse than a cliffhanger This goes back to the day where you stand at the drug store counter and dared the delivery guy to bring in the next pack of comic books. Wondering where Susy is leading Charles with the tale of Max. B

Little does Kara know that she has just greased her slide to hell with her own shit and Amy is just going to give her a gentle push, not even a shove, to help her on her way. Only question is; does her posse go with her or do they have enough sense, finally, to bail out ahead of time. Guess Mrs. Smith is going to need some smelling salts before this class is over. B

I'm wearing out my bookmarks button looking for the next one!!! I know it takes time to do your magic but I'm impatient with where it looks like you are going with this. B

I assume you are referring to the "old board " as I don't think the new one has been formed yet. This oughta be GOOD. A meeting where the twins and Alice can shine. Their boots on some rears. B

I'm not a fan of male shaving. Sorta makes things crawl into places you really don't want them. I think the new school has real possibilities for ongoing (many many chapters) threads. Really would like to see the little sneak shut down and humiliated in front of her posse quickly. Then have them go neutral if not friendly. The new school thing should really be good - old school board etc. How many, if any, of the SWAT are taken by the girls.? B

@Sniper yeah saw that on reread after posting. Still have a lot of plot bunnies with them I think. it's so interesting now he should be giving us new chapters every 12 hours or at least 24. B

Are you trying to say that you are not now devious??? Along with twisted?? B

I suspect that some of the swat will be pulling KP for a while. May find a hidden gem in some of the rescues though. The scene with Kara is the start of something else. Like BigMan's comment about Alice's hearing. Maybe Kara and her click will learn what it is to scrub the school with their toothbrushes. Only question is how many chapters and incidents will it take to get to that point. And we really didn't hear any more about Charles and Co. The lack of descriptive sex does NOT interfere with the story at all - it enhances it. PLEASE KEEP 'EM COMING!! B

One of the girls pickpockets a sidearm from one of the bad guys drops the mag on the floor; one of the twins picks it up and shucks the rounds out of it sets them up on the window sill then both start popping the rounds from a distance. Such explosions as they hit the primers. Of course "you can't do that" then Cat shows that it can be done.. I can't wait to read that chapter!!!!! B

Maybe one of the young ones is able to track the unidentified agency and go straight into the head guys office and offers to feed the squirrels some nuts - his! Or something similar. Then Alice shows up and tells him all the things he has been doing and informs him they are now off the payroll and don't exist in any gov't fund. And of course his computers now only have kids movirs on them. B

OH YES action close to home. Pregnant enough to be obvious and throw some BIG ape to the ground like Tali did. Then friends come for revenge and Max ties their hair together and no knife available to cut them loose. They don't have to take long trips for action. B

The more the better. B

A chapter a day keeps the readers at bay. As some of the LE folks on here will attest "a ticket a day keeps the Sgt. away '. B

Glad you got back home OK. Hope you and the girls had a relaxing good time without too much sunburn. Looking forward to the next chapters. B

YES!!! B

I love it. No action just family interaction. I'm sure you can do several chapters on the family - not to mention the SWAT team etal. Real question on the SWAT arren't some of them married? How are they taking to adoption? Following Mia around. So many things that the family can do, KEEP GOING, B