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Well, if it’s fanfiction w/o a beta reader, one could get away with mixing up the two terms “blonde” and “blond” every several sentences A quick check of the thesaurus gives “fair”, “light”, “bleached”, “flaxen”, “sandy-haired”, or “yellow-haired” as synonyms as possible alternatives. But, yeah, that’d be my approach, check the thesaurus for non-gender synonyms to substitute during the descriptions. (I’m writing a fic where I’ve got a similar issue, though not in gender.)

Review Reply for Fiends I’ve enjoyed longer stories back when I was a more avid reader, makes sense it carries over into my stories. Thank you for the review!

Episode #20 is posted, enjoy.

Circumcise that habit! Or not.

Yep, I’ve made Father Jordan into a real monster, a creepy priest with a god-like power complex. (See Adam the Altar Boy, Dale’s Game, and Bones for other appearances). Hope’s a good character I do like, he/she’s pretty insightful at times (has an interest in psychology); also appears in Jefferey, Adam the Altar Boy, and Dale’s Game. This story is backstory for a scene that was supposed to make it into Dale’s Game, the one where Jarred finds out about it, except the story decided to end itself several chapters too early Anyways, thanks for the review, glad you enjoyed it.

Another thought…. next year’s story, with some magic Christmas dust, could be the successor, ie, offspring from this year’s “gift”

I’ll frequently do backstory as these holiday/halloween oneshots.

Hey, that’s good. Better late than never.

Halloween writing is enjoyable too simply because villains tend to get away with it too, and readers don’t know if the protagonist is going to win or lose.