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Thank you! This is the first time I've written a fanfic about a movie rather than a TV show; the fact that it's a single story and not a series provides a lot more latitude for developing the characters beyond what we see in the source material. But, of course, I try to develop them in ways that are logical and believable. I've got a couple more in the works: "Tri-Date Area," in which Candace, Jeremy, and Stacy decide to give having a three-way relationship a try (wackiness and hot, sweaty group sex ensue), and "Queen for a Day," in which Isabella, zapped by a random green ray from the sky, is suddenly treated like royalty by everyone--including a certain pointy-faced boy from whom she's craving some lovin'.

That's why being a Disney queen is better than being a Disney princess. Until the kid hit puberty, anyway; I don't think age of consent was really a thing back then. But yes, the potential political advantages of such a marriage are Herringholtz's chief reason for inviting Prince Hypatios to this event.

Author: George Glass Title: In the Light of Day: A FROZEN Epic Summary: Seven princes come to the kingdom to seek Elsa’s hand as Prince-Consort. But not all in attendance are what they seem, and behind the ball gowns and canapés lurks a plot that could destroy Arendelle—and its Queen. Feedback: http://www2.adult-fanfiction.org/forum/index.php/topic/59083-review-responses-for-in-the-light-of-day-a-frozen-epic/ Fandom: Frozen Pairing: Anna/Kristoff, Elsa/OC Warnings: Abuse, Exhib, M/F Solo story or chaptered story: Chaptered. Very chaptered. URL: http://cartoon.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600094620 This story has it all: romance, action, political intrigue, BFFs, heroic reindeer, beers foreign and domestic, a snowman doing yoga (no, not hot yoga), and a finale that will blow you away. If you're an adult who enjoyed FROZEN, come check it out!

Thanks! You are not the first person to tell me that. But I'm hoping that the story itself will be strong enough to keep readers interested, even if it doesn't feature their favorite 'ship.

Wow. I can't say I've ever had ideas for a fanfic about a movie (or anything else) that I didn't like. Is it still fanfic if you're not a fan?

Re: "A Beach Like No Other" I would prefer not to answer that question until after the fourth and final chapter is posted, because anything I might say would be at least slightly spoiler-y.

Whoops. I hope the consequences aren't too severe. Professors are hypersensitive to plagiarism these days, mainly because plagiarism is easier to commit than it's ever been.

Okay, I haven't tried to kill it, but I wish I could at least put it on a diet. This thing is turning into an epic in my head, like some kind of crazy Disney direct-to-video sequel written by a Russian novelist.

Re: "Learning a Daughter's Duty" Thank you, and so am I.

This story recently won DevilDuck's FABULOUS FUTA contest on Hentai Foundry, so I thought I'd promote it here for those who might be interested. It beat stories from several serious futa writers, so I was pretty excited. Author: George Glass Title: A Very Special Thank You Summary: A high-school drama teacher takes a helpful student out for a thank-you dinner. But each of them has a hidden agenda—and a secret she is afraid to reveal. Feedback: Always appreciated. And I'll respond to it here: http://www2.adult-fanfiction.org/forum/index.php/topic/55777-george-glass-review-responses-original-fiction/ Fandom: Original Pairing: Teacher (futa) and former student (18-year-old woman) Warnings: F/F, F/D, Oral. Oh, and French food. Solo story or chaptered story: Solo, baby, solo URL: http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600107436

Wow. Suddenly my situation doesn't look so bad. At least my mom isn't involved.

My cable company made all the premium channels free over Thanksgiving weekend, so I recorded some movies. One of these was Frozen, because I wanted to know what half the kids on the planet Earth were so excited about. So a few nights ago, I watched it. And frankly, I thought it was brilliant. Not only did it have great music and wonderful visuals, but it's written really well: The writers know that this is probably not your first Disney movie, and that you therefore have certain expectations about what is going to happen. And they use those expectations to completely screw with you, in some really good ways. So now, fresh off NaNoWriMo with well over a dozen neglected in-progress stories waiting for me to work on them, I find that there is a stupid, stupid, stupid Frozen fanfic writing itself in my head. And the only thing I fear more than the shame of writing it is the disappointment of not writing it. For Christ's sake, I'm a childless man in my mid-forties. Shouldn't I be immune to this sort of nonsense? I mean, it's freakin' DISNEY. Please kill me. Then the bunnies. Then me again, just to be sure.

I wouldn't worry. Magical flying reindeer have very little heat signature. And if the missile is radar-guided, well, that's why Santa invented tinsel.

I've actually been wondering a bit about this myself. I've used the Contro tag a few times, but in retrospect, I'm not sure it really covered anything that the other tags didn't cover (except maybe in the case of the story in which a man has sex with his daughter and, simultaneously, their unborn daughter/granddaughter).

Thank you! I aim to inspire.

Re: "Side Effects" The story is clearly tagged, so if you don't like that sort of content, I'm not sure why you read it in the first place. Maybe you're saying that there's another form of child rape that you would find more appealing.

Bless you, equine hell-deity.

I'd also be inclined to capitalize the D in "Don't," because "Don't shoot the messenger" is a complete sentence. And for the love of mods, could somebody correct the spelling in the title of this thread?

And if you're worried about being treated by students, there are studies to show that procedures performed by supervised trainees have just as good outcomes as those performed by experienced personnel.

Re: "Wish List" Thanks for the review. I'm glad you liked the story. I don't have any current plans for more chapters--it was always intended to be a one-shot--but it's always possible that one day I'll be inspired to write a sequel.

Re: "Caitlyn's Punishment" Thanks for the comment! A sequel, prequel, or pre-sequel (hey, they're doing it with BORDERLANDS) could happen someday. Right now, though, I've got lots of other stories in the works. I hope you'll like at least one of them just as much!

Re: "Learning a Daughter's Duty" Wow. Thank you! An update is actually coming very soon--probably tomorrow. (Although it will be the last one for a little while, because I'm going to be busy through November with a big ol' writing project.)

Hmm. Maybe I just need to get their attention by festooning my sig with pics and quotes like Magusfang's.