GeorgeGlass

I hate to be the bearer of bad news, but this is actually the ONLY chapter. Although I do have an idea for a totally different Star story that will probably become words on the screen at some point. In any case, thanks for the kind words.

Hmm, intriguing. We haven't seen too much of Janna so far, but I get the impression that (a) she's got at least a little bit of a thing for Marco, and (b) she's trouble waiting to happen. Maybe the good kind. And poor Chantelle--surely SOMEONE will be distracted by her booty one day.

I'm interested to hear that you're writing a Star vs the Forces of Evil story. Care to give us a sentence or two about the plot?

This response doesn't strike me as either useful or fair. If the person who asked the question is willing to read several chapters of a story before giving up on finding a sex scene, that implies that this reader likes some buildup, too, and probably wouldn't be too interested in a PWP story. Agreed. You mods are busy enough with serious issues (dealing with plagiarists, preventing lawsuits, keeping out the twelve-year-olds). I think it's fair to assume that if a story has no tags whatsoever (official or unofficial), it's likely to be devoid of sex scenes. That, or the author's attention to detail is poor enough that their writing might not be fun to read, anyway.

Thank you! As I said to a previous reviewer, I don't feel like it could be a true SvtFoE fic if it didn't have at least a little comedy in it.

Big time. I think I had the idea for this story very shortly after watching that episode--it just took me a while to give in to the urge to write it. Thank you! That's everything I was aiming for. Not to get too personal, but do you have ten hands, or are you just "all thumbs"?

And I always love to hear it. +500 xp for noticing Monster-Marco's resemblance to the D&D critter that inspired it. As for the monster cock, well, that would have changed the nature of the story rather a lot. Thank you. I always feel like you can't do a proper fanfic of a humorous cartoon without including some humor. And I do loves me some romantic fluff. My thinking was that at that point, Marco's mind--or what was left of it--was focused solely on fucking the hell out of Star. Tentacle-work would have required a lot more finesse than he had at that moment. Thanks for the review!

Thank you! "The characters were spot on" is pretty much what I live to hear. Not that "amazing," "hot," and "well written" are chopped liver. As for more: This story is finished, but I would be not at all surprised if I became inspired to write another SvtFoE story in the not-too-distant future. I just freakin' love that show.

I'll respond to any reviews of this tale of Mewberty-gone-wrong here.

Re: "Country Summer" Exactly what I'm aiming for--erotica with a touch of sweetness and old-fashioned charm.

Re: "Fireworks" Thanks! You must have had quite a childhood.

Yeah, well, this is why I'm calling it an "epic." It's going to be...Was I saying something?

Thanks! I decided that writing this in present tense (and first person) might make it more involving for the reader. I've got another story like that in the works. Chapter 2 is nearly done!

I always love hearing that. Thank you. More unraveling to come!

Re: "Excuses" Thanks! I've got plenty more kinky stuff in the works.

Thanks! I've been a bit focused on other stories recently, but I will definitely return to this one in the not-too-distant future.

Re: "FIreworks" You know me--I can't resist a cliffhanger. A little awkward, yeah. Thank you! Part 2 is in the works.

Re: "Learning a Daughter's Duty" Thank you! And keep on prowlin'.

Thanks! The movie really only has 3 central characters (sorry, Olaf and Sven), so it seemed like there was a lot of room to add new characters to the mix. And yes, little Prince Hypatios is one of my favorites to write, because his age sets him apart from the other princes in a lot of ways. Don't you worry, there's plenty more to come. The plot has only begun to thicken!

Re: “Activation Day” Before I respond to the reviews this story received today, I just want to say how exciting and entirely unexpected these comments were. "Activation Day" is my half of a story trade with a friend, so it was written for an audience of one, to suit his very specific interests. I had no idea that it would appeal to so many other people. Now, to the reviews: It really feels good to hear that someone enjoyed my story even though it’s outside the genres they usually prefer. Thank you! I’ve got all kinds of stories in the works, so stay tuned. My bad—I didn’t mean to provide so little detail about that. Essentially, the sun began continuously putting out more radiation than it does now (if I correctly understood my astronomy professor back in college, this is at least theoretically possible), destroying the ozone layer and doing all the other bad stuff that charged particles do. Spurred by your comment, I have added a few words to chapter 1 to make this point clearer. So I appreciate your feedback. Thank you! It’s funny—a lot of the plot and scifi aspects of this story evolved from the specific fetishes my friend wanted the story to include (eg, prepubescent girls who nonetheless had substantial breasts, socially acceptable romantic relationships between these girls and adult men). I wanted to make those things happen in a way that readers would find plausible, and that’s where all the details about cryo and preconditioning and Executive Function scores came from. You’re very welcome! I did indeed enjoy writing it, and I’m glad that the emotion I put into it came out the way it was meant to. Thank you. Thanks! Indeed, I’m not thinking of doing more with these characters right now, but that could always change. I’ve got all kinds of other stories in the works, though, so I hope you’ll keep an eye out for them.

I'm so glad. I don't remember exactly how the idea for this conversation came to me, but it was what made me decide to include Telephone Interludes in the story to provide some comic relief between the heavy action and drama of the chapters. In any case, thank you!

Re: "Activation Day" Hey, gotta keep you guys coming back. Not for long; I'll probably post it tonight.

No, it's not, and I kind of meant to imply that Candace realizes that. For one thing, she's in no position to judge (given her behavior in the story), and for another, I'd like to think that this experience is making her realize how pointless and narrow-minded such judgement is. Arguably relevant story: One of the other sites where I post stories is Inkbunny, which has a feature that lets other users (besides the OP) suggest tags for stories and artwork. One of the stories I have posted there is "Learning a Daughter's Duty," which includes a female character who really enjoys sex, both with her husband and with various other male and female family members. (There is no incest taboo in their world.) When someone suggested the "slut" tag for the story, I found it surprisingly upsetting. I was all like, "She does what makes her happy, and in doing so, she makes other people happy, too. Why does there have to be name-calling?"

I'm really glad you enjoyed it. Depending on what you mean by "like this," you might enjoy some of my existing stories. If you are interested in something viciously rapey, you might like "Unbidden" or "Cruel Nature." If you are interested in bestiality (albeit consensual), there's "Some Days, You Get the Bear." In any case, thanks for the review!

Re: Some Girl Thanks! I am, in fact, planning a sequel story that would take place on Fourth of July weekend and would involve Carl and Robin meeting up with some cousins they haven't seen in a few years. Wholesome family fun ensues. Re: Caitlyn's Punishment Yeah, that's the whole enchilada. But I'm sure this isn't the last story of this type that I'll be writing.