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So, I’ve been making progress on stories this week, but nothing’s quite ready to post yet. Here, in no particular order, are the next three things I’m likely to post: chapter 3 of “Twist My Arm,” chapter 8 of “Flesh,” and an as-yet-untitled original oneshot story about twincest. SWP1, I’ve actually watched both seasons of BH6 (as well as the movie). I liked it, and I have an idea for a BH6 story, but it hasn’t yet made the move from the Ideas list to the List of Twenty.

Glad you enjoyed chapter 4. The action will continue to ramp up! Just finished watching season 1 of Tangled: The Series. That musical number in the season finale episode is just stirring; I loved it.

Hmmm, that first idea seems interesting, and somewhat similar to an idea of my own. I’ll put it in the hopper for a while and see if anything shakes out.

Re: “For the Price of One” From Vacant on March 28, 2020 IMO, stating the obvious is a valid narrative tool. Hope you’ll enjoy it!

So the tree grows in the shape of a house? If so, you could describe the house as a bungalow, a cottage, or something like that.

Hey, Corn05. I would like to write another oppai loli story at some point. If you have ideas, feel free to throw them out there. No guarantee that I’ll do anything with them, of course, but I’m always open to suggestions. I do have thoughts about continuing “First Time,” but not with the same characters or the same species; rather, I’ve been thinking that it would be a sort of anthology, with members of different species telling personal stories that help explain how sex works on their planet. In case you’re interested, here are my notes about ideas for stories that would be included in the series: --Species in which everyone is born female and some grow male genitals at some point. An alien talks about being the only female left in her litter and having her first sexual experience with all her futa sisters. --A taur species whose females have no libido. All sex is rape. The alien describes the day shortly after he began puberty when he and his friends gang-raped a girl their age. He also mentions that some humans have proposed using chemicals to give females a libido, because they think this would be humane, but no member of his species -- male or female -- considers this desirable; females have more important things to think about than sex, and males would find a libidinous female to be too masculine. --Species whose males become fertile very early and then become sterile by the time they are in their teens. An adult female describes going to a local park where young boys are available for mating. Women go to such parks when they are in heat. There is a place nearby where a woman can take several boys for sex; women in heat generally require a lot of sex before they are satisfied. Some women have sex with the boys in public, but this is considered crass. For women who for some reason don't want to mate in this manner, or who experience sexual arousal outside of heat, there are young-looking sterile males who work as prostitutes. --Species that has one short, furious mating season per year.

I particularly like that the voice actors from the movie are voicing their characters in the series, too.

SWP1, a while back you recommended that I check out Tangled: The Series. Having recently finished both We Bare Bears and the all-too-brief first season of Glitch Techs, I decided to give Tangled a try, and I’m liking it so far.

Re: “Wishful” From IttyBittySkitty on March 24, 2020 Thank you! Because of the two very different worlds in which this story takes place, I’m spending more time on description than I might in a story with a simpler setting. Two more chapters are on the way! But it will probably be a little while.

Hey, SWP1. Chapter 4 of “For the Price of One” is coming right along and is probably the next thing I’ll post. I’ve gotten a good start on chapter 6 of "Wishful,” but it’s going to be a while. A lot happens in that chapter.

Thank you! I originally had a more maudlin ending in mind, with Dad dying of cancer and explaining that he wanted to get this story out before he goes, but that was when I was planning to make this a shorter story and skip over certain days of Angie and Daddy’s adventure. But as I was writing the story, I realized that I didn’t want to skip over anything, which made the dying-Dad ending unnecessary (not to mention that it that wouldn’t have been a good tonal fit with the rest of the story). But I left in a bit of conflict so as to be able to end with that last line of dialogue.

I’ve just posted chapter 1 (of 3) of “Keene’s College Weekend,” which is a sequel to “Keene’s Really Good Week.” Eleven-year-old Keene visits his big sister Kiri at school and learns a few things about college life—and college girls. (furry, straight shota, big boobs, brother-sister incest, anal) Probably the next thing I’ll post will be chapter 4 of “For the Price of One.”

Well, I’m certainly no expert in that sort of thing. I tend to follow the philosophy of a novel editor whose YouTube video I watched: Think of all the scenes you want to include in the story, then find a way to string them together. Joseph Campbell I ain’t. Oh, and BOOBS!

From Fairy-Slayer on March 19, 2020 Indeed. One of these days, I'll write something that actually justifies over-thought. It has occurred to me that I'm always finding ways to sideline Clyde instead of actually involving him in the story. But I do have an idea for a Clyde-centric story that may well join the List of 20 soon. I'm so glad those bits worked for you. It was Bobby's idea that the four of them go to this movie series, and Lori of course didn't want to tell him no. I love food and sex, but not at the same time. :\ 'kay. I love fusion cuisine, myself, so coming up with new combinations is fun for me. Yup, something like that. Hmmm, in what sense? Nope. Never saw that one before I clicked on your link. This I swear!

At long last, chapter 10 of “Make It All Better” is posted. I know I’m going to miss writing about Angie and Daddy at least a little, as I’ve been at it since 2013. But I’m glad to have given them the ending I think they deserve. And I’ve got so many more stories to tell.

From RandomReviewer on March 17, 2020 Don’t worry, Elvis has left the building. Like, thanks, and stuff. Totally.

From DoctorYnot on March 17, 2020 Thank you! I don’t mind. That’s often how I write reviews. Although I must say, mine aren’t usually nearly as detailed as this one. Thank you! To me, authenticity is paramount, because IMO, there’s no point in writing a fanfic if it doesn’t resemble and grow from the source material. A lot of people think that fanfic is easier to write than original stories because the characters and their world have been created for you; you’re just taking them out of the box and playing with them. But that’s also what makes it challenging, because you have to play with what you’re given. If you change the characters or their world (at least without some internally logical reason that you explain in the story), then you’re not really writing a fanfic anymore. Of course, writing smut adds a whole layer of challenge -- and therefore fun -- because you have to create circumstances in which the characters would plausibly do the things you want them to do. This is easy in fandoms where there’s magic or technology that can change people’s behavior; in half of my Phineas and Ferb stories (okay, probably more than half), sexy times ensue because of an Inator or one of the boys’ inventions. Lisa’s mad science can be used to the same effect, of course, but I’m trying not to over-rely on that as a plot device. No one has ever put it quite that way, but that is exactly what I’m going for. I don’t want readers to feel like they’re reading smut with some familiar names tacked onto it; I want them to feel like they’re reading about the characters they know. And because humor is integral to every Loud House episode, I feel like it’s not a Loud House story if it doesn’t contain a solid dose of comedy. Hell to the yes! Thank you. That’s a reference to “Heavy Meddle,” in which Ronnie Anne starts picking on Lincoln (off screen) and Lori opines that her shoving a sandwich down Lincoln’s pants is a classic show of romantic interest. Fair enough, but I feel that with Lincoln and Ronnie Anne being physically separated these days, they really have fallen into each other’s friend zones. But maybe they’re not that far outside the romance zone. Their romance, or at least romantic interest, seems like something easily rekindled. Noted. Keeping this in mind for the next chapter. One thing I like about The Loud House is that although the sisters started out as stereotypes, most of them have grown into three-dimensional characters. There’s a lot to Lori, and we’ll get into some of it later in the story. Yeah, you get the idea that this isn’t the first time Lincoln has had that thought. Food trucks are very popular where I live, and a lot of them are selling either fusion cuisine (kimchi enchiladas are surprisingly good, FYI) or upscale versions of street food. And because fusion restaurants seem to be popular in Royal Woods -- if Jean-Juan’s French-Mex Buffet and that Italian/Chinese place are anything to go by -- I figured I’d use that. Oh, and I liked cinnamon sugar on my popcorn when I was a kid. I’m kind of the anti-Dickens, because my default is to sacrifice descriptive detail in the name of moving the plot along. Sometimes that works in my favor, sometimes not so much. Lincoln only gets so much dialogue in this story, so monologue seems essential to showing what’s going on in his head. And pants. Yeah, allowing no one-on-one communication between them -- at least for now -- seemed essential to the story. Thank you! Thank you again. You know, for me, the setup has really become the most fun part to write. I’ve written so many sex scenes now that it has become a struggle to keep each new one from being a copy of the previous eight. So I’ve become more fond of getting the characters into the sexy situations than I am of writing those situations themselves. That said, I’m trying not to skimp on “the good stuff,” either. I added some more details to chapter 2 after the first draft seemed to end too quickly. Oh, yes indeed!

From ConanEdogawa on March 17, 2020 No spoilers!

Chapter 2 of “Twist My Arm” is posted!

Thanks, SWP1. I appreciate the support.

Thanks! I expect to be posting chapters every 1-2 weeks, so you won’t have too long to wait.

From RandomReviewer on March 12, 2020 No, no, I already ripped that off in “Multiversity.” Seriously, hope the rest of the story lives up to your expectations.

From Fairy-Slayer on March 11, 2020 I’m sorry, but Fairy Slayer and the Spoilers of Doom was simply an inferior film to Betas of the Lost Fic. Fortunately, the franchise got good again with Fairy Slayer and the Lolis Get Laid. His reasons are multifactorial, for sure. Lincoln didn’t have much opportunity to tell Ronnie Anne anything without risking Lori overhearing. Safer to just go with it. Who invited Luan on this date? Thanks for the review!