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So two things happened today that I didn’t expect. First, I spend time this afternoon that I should have spent on other things finishing the draft of “Just One Rule” chapter 9. Second, when I sent it to Jomahawk for beta, he responded, like, within the hour. So contrary to what I said earlier today, Chapter 9: No Substitute is now posted! As a result, three of my stories are now within one chapter of completion: “Cartooniverse,” “Rashomonster,” and “Just One Rule.” But I’ve got plenty more stories warming up in the bullpen.

I expect to be posting new chapters every 2-3 weeks.

Drafting the next chapter of “Just One Rule” is taking longer than expected, mainly because it’s been a busy weekend. Now I’m guessing it won’t be beta-ready until Tuesday. I’ve also had the first-world problem of having lots of reviews to respond to. Lady Freelove went on a reading-and-reviewing binge yesterday, and I’ve gotten a couple of reviews of “My Wish Is Your Command” and of original stories (including the first-ever AFF review of “The Wrong Locker Room”). Pretty happy about all that.

Re: “The Wrong Locker Room” From SickRose on April 25, 2021 Thank you! And thanks for being this story’s first reviewer on AFF. Hmm. I will consider that.

Re: “Unbidden” From Lady Freelove on April 24, 2021 I love writing psychological stories, so I really enjoyed producing this one. It also enabled me to take a lot of miscellaneous rape-story ideas – ones that weren’t substantial enough to be the basis for a whole story in themselves -- and use them as Judith’s fantasies instead.

Re: “Wedding Night” From Lady Freelove on April 24, 2021 Thank you. It’s more of an alternate reality. I envision it as a world where aliens infused their DNA into select humans to create the Ladies, who became a permanent overclass. I may write more stories set in this world.

Re: “Impulse” From Lady Freelove on April 24, 2021 I was hoping you’d like this one. This was one of those rare stories that just took hold of me and wouldn’t let me stop writing it until it was done.

Re: “The Power Arcane” From Lady Freelove on April 24, 2021 I’m so glad you liked this. And we might be seeing more of Sumaya and Aleem later on.

What does “good five” mean?

From Lunarsilver on April 24, 2021 Pretty much all the major action in this story is already planned out, so I’m not really open to suggestions for scenes at this point. But rest assured, Jessica Lovejoy will be making an appearance.

From Fabian on April 23, 2021 Hello, Mr. Glass! Hello, Fabian! Even though this is your first review, I feel like I’ve seen your name before, although I don’t know where. But I’m pretty sure it’s not just from Laverne and Shirley. Thank you! I would be interested to know what other AFF authors you like. When it comes to cartoon fanfics, I feel that humor is an essential component. Most cartoons are comedies, which means that you can’t be true to the source material without including at least some humor. Thanks! I’m very proud of both of those stories. I really appreciate that. Some of the credit goes to my two betas, Jomahawk and Fairy Slayer. The main reason why I recruited the two of them was to help me do justice to any cartoons that I felt were iconic enough that they had to be referenced but that I’m not overly familiar with myself (eg, Fairly OddParents). I think interspersing the action on stage with commentary from the audience helps. Starfire shouting, “I, too, enjoy the sex of the butt!” was on my bucket list of things I want to include in a fanfic. Glad you liked that bit. It’s one of my favorites. Thank you! I hope the final chapter will live up to your expectations. I would love that. Thank you! -- Fabian Whoops. I will go fix that. Thank you!

From ConanEdogawa on April 24, 2021 Honestly, I never even thought about starting the story that way. This is meant to be less of linear-narrative story than a slice-of-life story, albeit with a dozen slices.

Theoretically he could, but once you have wished for ultimate power, what else is there to wish for? There’s also the possibility that using up the wish at age 10 would undo the wish he made at age 23. In any case, the next chapter will explain a bit why he hasn’t thought about doing that.

So, I’ve just posted the first bits (ie, the prologue and chapter 1) of “My Wish Is Your Command.” This will be a longish one: 12 chapters, plus a prologue and epilogue. In other news, chapter 9 of “Just One Rule” should be ready for beta in the next day or two. Once that’s out of my hands, my main focus will be on the third and final chapter of “Rashomonster.”

Here, I’ll post responses to any reviews that “My Wish Is Your Command” may receive.

Re: “Wishful” From Marksman on April 22, 2021 Thanks! I don’t have any plans to add to the story at this point, but it’s always possible that I’ll have a great idea for a spinoff story one day.

Schweeeeeeeet. Will be checking it out soon.

From Fairy-Slayer on April 19, 2021 Team Loud got a 4.5 because the act up to that point was pretty hot, and because the judges liked the creativity of the three-way dildo. You know, I never even thought about the possibility that the contest was the result of Timmy's wish. But it couldn't be, really, because it's been going on for decades. Timmy's wish was just to be there. Or at least dubcon. The uncertainty was probably even more titillating. Yeah, this is a pretty dark version of Helen. Mainly inspired by all that Helen-as-futa r34 porn out there. Super powers are no guarantee of success. But they're in the lead, so who knows? Indeed it will not. Thank you! Jomahawk gets the credit for that one. He suggested it when he did his beta-read of this chapter. Just wanted to throw a little slapstick in there. I had to have one non-dysfunctional mother-daughter pair make it to the finals. Thanks for the review!

Chapter 3 of “Cartooniverse” is posted! Now the onstage action really gets out of hand. I’m making good progress on the next chapter of “Just One Rule,” but the progress just shows me how much more there is to do. In contrast, the first chapter of my Simpsons story, “My Wish Is Your Command,” should be ready to post soon. This story is kind of a ripoff of my own original story “Flesh,” and it’s very much a ripoff of that Treehouse of Horror episode that ripped off that Twilight Zone episode where Bill Mumy played a kid who was omnipotent and was a real brat about it.

So next, I guess I’m going to try to focus on finishing the next chapter of “Just One Rule.” Also, chapter 3 of “Cartooniverse” is on to its second beta, so I may be posting that soon. Lastly, I expect to start posting the first bits of my Simpsons story, “My Wish Is Your Command,” in the near future.

Re: “Wishful” From IttyBittySkitty on April 16, 2021 Thank you! It wasn’t easy finding a way to do something with real-world Angelica that would compare with what happened with Lady Angel, so I’m glad you liked the result. I see real-world Angelica as being even more passionate than her Wishful counterpart. No spoilers! I hope you’ll like it.

Re: “Wishful” From IttyBittySkitty on April 15, 2021 Skitty Chapter 8 I guess I do tend to reuse certain themes. Glad to have done that again. I think Angel/Angelica is the character he put the most thought into, so I really tried hard to do justice to her. Thank you! I do love the non-sex parts of this story, too.

The next story of The Power Arcane, titled “Sumaya and Aleem,” is posted.

Re: “Daddy’s Rules” From Maxsteele1986 on April 14, 2021 No.

Re: “Some Days, You Get the Bear” From Maxsteele1986 on April 14, 2021 Here’s a working link: http://www.hentai-foundry.com/pictures/user/CoaX/260788/Second-Prize---Fetish-Writing-Contest-2014