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I would only use the Iron Man/Optimus Prime description if you are describing the armored character from the POV of another character who would be familiar with those franchises. In that instance, the description would actually serve double duty, telling you what the armored character looks like while also telling you something about the observer (eg, that they’re from Earth in the 1980s or later, and that they’re into scifi and such).
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More “Depravity Falls” has appeared! Chapter 4: Hidden Vagenda
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So, the next chapters of “Depravity Falls” and “Secret Sash” are both in beta, along with chapter 5 of “Into the Third Dimension.” So what gets posted next will depend on what comes back first. Jomahawk is the beta for both “Secret Sash” and “Third Dimension,” and he’s going to be the beta for “Waltney Plus” as well. So even if I have a complete draft of “Waltney Plus” by the end of the week, I’ll probably hold off on sending it to him until I hear back about the two chapters he has now.
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The latest chapter of “Smooshed” is posted! Chapter 12: Looking for Trouble
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I’m pleased to announce that my laptop is back in my hands. This was a bit of a surprise, because the website said that it was still “Under repair.” But I’d rather they make that mistake than the opposite one. I’m hoping to finish and post chapter 12 of “Smooshed” today or tomorrow. Also, I expect to send chapter 4 of “Depravity Falls” to beta by Monday. Chapter 3 of “Secret Sash” should be ready to go pretty soon after that. And “Waltney Plus” is getting close to beta-ready, too.
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Welcome to a special edition of “Good News, Bad News.” The good news: Chapter 12 of “Smooshed” has come back from beta. The bad news: My astute beta for that story, Fairy Slayer, pointed out a glaring omission on my part, and now I have to decide what to do about it, so that chapter might be delayed a day or three. The good news: Chapter 5 of “Into the Third Dimension” went off to beta last night. The bad news: I don’t know when I’m going to get my laptop back. I was kind of hoping to have it back by the weekend, but we’ll see. Every TV show, movie, character, etc mentioned in the Waltney stories is a parody of some actual Disney thing. But Disney’s properties are so vast that probably not everyone can get every reference. I’m afraid this problem will only get worse in “Waltney Plus.” In the two previous Waltney stories, i only referenced Disney and Pixar properties; in “Waltney Plus,” I’ll be Going There with Marvel, Lucasfilm, and National Geographic, too. So, Waltney’s competitors? That could make good fodder for a future story. The main reason why I’ve focused on Disney versus the others is that Disney is a vast corporate empire with many kinds of products (movies, TV shows, theme parks, consumer products) and many acquired IPs (like Star Wars and Marvel). Speaking of Nick and Netflix, I’ve just started outlining a Glitch Techs fic called “Retro.” Miko and Five accidentally release a bunch of glitches from Hinobi’s “adult games” of the ‘80s and ‘90s, and wackiness ensues. It’ll be a while before that story sees the light of day, though.
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That did the trick. Thank you!
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Okay, news first: Chapter 2 of “Liberatrix” is posted! Thanks, DoubleD (love the name, BTW). I do sometimes work remotely by using my laptop, so I’m stuck going into the office every day this week. Thanks! Not having my laptop hasn't slowed down my actual writing very much, because I do most of that on my phone (so I can dictate text). The bottlenecks are editing, which I find easier to do on a computer; and proofing, formatting, and posting, because I always do those things in Word. I'm experimenting with using the Word app on my phone, but it doesn't have the macros I use to format text for different sites. Right now, I’m using my wife’s computer to post chapters, but it doesn’t have my Word customizations, either. I have tons of old stories, so my back catalog could keep you entertained for a good while if you’re finding stuff you like in there. I don’t know if you’ve read “Anything That Moves,” but judging by what you’ve written in this post, you might particularly like that one. Thanks! That story doesn’t get a lot of love because it’s so dark, so I appreciate your saying that. I’ve just never been into crossdressing and forced feminization. My feeling is, the boy should already be feminine/girly enough that such things aren’t necessary for the older boy or man to want to violate him. Although the idea of a boy being forced to fuck a female dog is a bit interesting. As it happens, I think I’m pretty close to having a complete draft of “Waltney Plus.” I’ll probably be ready to send it off to beta by next week. Same to you!
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The bad news: I had to send my laptop to the manufacturer for repair. God only knows when I’ll get it back. The good news: Before I sent the laptop home to momma, I managed to get all my story files onto a flash drive, which means that I am finally able to post those story chapters: Secret Sash, chapter 2: Silver-Fox Hunter Depravity Falls, chapter 3: Two Steps Forward
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The good news: I have two chapters that are virtually ready to post. The bad news: My laptop is on the fritz, and I can't post the chapters until it's fixed. C'est la vie, I guess.
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Well, it looks like every forum post from the past week was lost in the server upgrade, including my response to SWP1’s post. And now I can’t remember what I wrote, except that IMO, that scene in Iron Man was simply meant to show that Tony Stark is a guy who gets what he wants. The how of it didn’t really matter. Now, on to the good news: The latest chapters of “Secret Sash,” “Depravity Falls,” and “Smooshed” are all in beta. We’ll see which of those boomerangs comes back first.
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This is a fun game that was popular on the now-defunct WWOEC forum and then on the soon-to-be-defunct Palcomix forum. I thought perhaps it could find new life here. It’s a simple game: You ask for a list of 5 things, and then the next person comes up with a list of those 5 things and then asks for a different one. For example, one person might write “Five left-handed compliments.” Then the next person responds with something like this: 1. "Well, at least you're not a total failure." 2. "You don't sweat much for a fat guy." 3. "You're kind of pretty with your mouth shut." 4. "You remind me of my idiot cousin." 5. "You're just the right person for this terrible job." Then they give a prompt for a new 5 things. So I’ll start with this: Five things you’re perfectly happy not to know.
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From GrayNeko on July 02, 2022 I read some Robin Cook in my youth, but not that one, I don’t think. I’m guessing it’s not great? Or was it just not appropriate for middle schoolers? I thought I was almost done with Brittney’s sex scene, and then the idea of the other girls getting up and cheering came to me and I just had to include it. It is super-weird that you mention Symbionic Titan – which I’ve never watched – because when Fairy Slayer sent me his beta of the chapter, he included a link to an astoundingly sexy dance scene from that show. Guess I’m going to have to try watching it one of these days. Thanks. More Starry angst coming soon!
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Well, I’ve gone and done it again, posting 2 new story chapters on the same day. One is the next part of “Smooshed”: Chapter 11: Cheer Up. The other is the first chapter (of three) of my Miraculous story “Liberatrix,” which is a sequel to “Miss Match.” I’m going to go lie down now.
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I’ve got two things in beta right now: chapter 11 of “Smooshed,” and an original one-shot story called “First Flowers.” And I’m hoping to get chapter 2 of “Secret Sash” off to beta by the end of the week. The first chapter of “Liberatrix” (which doesn’t have a beta) should be ready to post in the next couple of days.
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George Glass' Review Responses -- Original Fiction
GeorgeGlass replied to GeorgeGlass's topic in General
Re: “Keene’s College Weekend” From ANON - Vadarr on June 21, 2022 Oh, there are certainly several sexual acts that are forbidden in Keene’s world (ie, they have sodomy laws) and are therefore tempting. Well, I write it that way, at least. BTW, I do plan to write one last story about Keene at some point; I just haven’t gotten all the ideas together in my head yet to begin. -
Review responses for "Into the Third Dimension" [Phineas and Ferb]
GeorgeGlass replied to GeorgeGlass's topic in General
From Lunarsilver on June 17, 2022 Well, that’s a lot of speculation. -
From ANON - DaremoKamen on June 19, 2022 Spiderbite was suggested early on as a candidate for the harem, but I decided against it specifically because I didn’t want to break up her and Slime. Given that the Monster Haters are alive and well, their Mewman/monster relationship remains important. I’m glad. It’s been interesting for me to write Tom as a good guy, rather than the straight-up villain he was in my previous Star Vs. story, “Star’s Crossed Lovers.” But I’m glad you didn’t let it go without saying. Thanks!
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Hey, all! I’m back at home base and trying to get into the groove of things again. I’m hoping to send chapter 11 of “Smooshed” off to beta by the end of the week. Chapter 2 of “Secret Sash” will probably go to beta not long after that, and then chapter 3 of “Depravity Falls.” And I plan to post chapter 1 of “Liberatrix” (sequel to Miraculous story “Miss Match”) before the month is out.
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Okay, I never do this, but I just posted two new chapters at once! Smooshed, Chapter 10: Going in the Back Depravity Falls, Chapter 2: Statue-tory FYI, I’ll be out of pocket for the next few days and not responding swiftly to reviews.
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The next hunk of “Into the Third Dimension” is served! Chapter 4: A Day in a Girl’s Life The next chapter of “Smooshed” should be ready pretty soon, too. And chapter 2 of “Depravity Falls” should head off to beta in the next day or two.
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Review Responses for "Secret Sash" [Phineas and Ferb]
GeorgeGlass replied to GeorgeGlass's topic in Threesome/Moresome
From ConanEdogawa on June 16, 2022 You’re going to want to stay tuned for chapter 2. -
Nine years ago today, I posted my first story on this site: “Rated F: A Phineas and Ferb Sex Comedy.” Today, I have posted chapter 1 of its sequel story, “Secret Sash.” Chapter 1: I’ll Show You Mine