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The first chapter of “Smooshed (or, The Nine Wives of Marco Diaz)” is posted!

Here, I’ll post responses to any reviews for my story “Smooshed (Or, The Nine Wives of Marco Diaz).”

“Stallion” is finished at last. In Chapter 5: Contracts, Mace fucks a young girl who's home alone. Later, his two live-in lovers put on a show for him. There is also a short epilogue. So far, I seem to be on track for finishing all the things I wanted to finish in January/February. My main focus will now move to the next Power Arcane story and to chapter 1 of my somewhat dark Phineas and Ferb fic “Third Dimension.”

Some author’s notes about "Stallion": My original idea for this story was different from the end result. The main character was going be the uber-macho father from my previous story “Rough Night,” which is about a young bear who gets raped by his older brothers and then, later, by the father. It is mentioned during the story that the father is always bringing girls to his room to fuck—sometimes with their full consent, sometimes with less. But I ultimately rejected this idea, for a couple of reasons: First, I wanted the main character to be a bit more sympathetic than the complete asshole / rapist from “Rough Night.” Second, even though straight sex is mentioned in that story, all of the action that is described in detail is male-on-male, so I was concerned that people who enjoyed “Rough Night” wouldn’t necessarily want to read a sequel that features only heterosexual sex. I confess that Mace is in some ways a masculine version of Mia from my previous story, “Mia: Confessions of a Dickgirl.” Both characters are extremely promiscuous and seductive, enjoy helping women and girls cheat on their husbands or boyfriends, and are always excited by the prospect of knocking a girl up. Also, both Mace and Mia have structured their work lives so as to give them access to a variety of women and girls. And both have big dicks. Part of the inspiration for this story came from an incident at work a few years ago. A female coworker and I were in the cafeteria when she saw a man—I think he was a firefighter—whom she found viscerally and overwhelmingly attractive, to the point that she was fanning herself on the elevator on our way back to the office. When I envisioned Mace, that’s the effect that I imagined him having on women. I don’t actually know a lot about horses, so I had to do some research on the internet regarding the colors and patterns their coats come in. I also made a list of the coat colors of every female character with whom Mace has sex to make sure I wasn’t making them look too much like one another. While most of my furry stories are set in worlds that are clearly different from our own, Mace’s world is as much like ours as I could make it. Mainly, this is because I didn’t want readers to think that Mace’s ability to get with all those women and girls was due to his world having different cultural norms (eg, a more permissive attitude towards promiscuity and casual sex) or to some biological trait of the equines of the Mace’s world. Rather, I wanted readers to have the impression that Mace seduces women through his sheer masculine presence and his charm. Nonetheless, Mace’s world is not our world, and I had to keep that in mind. In chapter 5, I changed “don’t you dare bogart that cumload” to “don’t you dare hog that cumload,” because while Mace’s world has hogs, it never had Humphrey Bogart. I see Mace as someone who has extremely strong reproductive instincts. These drive his constant need for sex but also his love of being a father.

Re: “A Little Family Trip” From ANON - Candlelight Scribe on January 27, 2022 Given how many stories are on this site, that’s quite a compliment! Thank you. Thanks! True. We shall see. Thank you!

“A Little Family Trip” is posted! For Evie’s birthday, Randy and Opal take Evie and Rose to a secluded lakeshore campsite to make both girls’ fantasies a reality.

Hey, SWP1! I appreciate your giving “Heaven Help You” its very first review (on any platform). That sixth episode (the one about the government agents) is probably my favorite. And I love those bleeped-out conversations between Blitzo and Stolas, which is why I decided right from the start that “Heaven Help You” had to include one. Only later did I realize that it was also the perfect way to separate Blitzo from Loona during her encounter with Collin. Of course, Loona getting horsefucked (okay, unicorn-fucked) was really the idea that inspired it, because I think Loona is hot. Oh, I don’t think it’s either/or. Writing these characters was a blast for me, because Vivziepop has developed them so well in the space of just, what, 8 episodes? The Moxxie/Millie relationship, Blitzo’s cynicism and crassness and the different way he treats each of his employees, Moxxie’s nervousness and prissiness combined with his underlying capacity for badassery, Loona’s baseline hostility, and Millie’s sweetness and talent for extreme violence are all really fun toys to play with. In any case, thanks again for the review!

Another upcoming project I should mention: Recently, I posted a journal entry on Inkbunny stating that once I have 500 followers there, I will have a story raffle for them and write a story for the winner. I've done this twice before on Inkbunny, for which I wrote "Leilaya's Evening" (which starred the winner's OC) and "A Sweet Little Girl Like You" (because the winner wanted a rapey story involving a tanuki and a de-aged starlet). In any case, I currently have 499 followers on Inkbunny, so that trigger could be pulled at any time.

I know I said I would post the final chapter of “Stallion” this week, but when I got to what I had originally planned to be the end, I decided that what I had written wasn’t enough. I’ve made some more progress since then, and I expect to have the chapter ready in the next few days. As of now, the List of Twenty is a mere 18 stories. At this time, I find myself more interested in working on things that are already in progress than on anything completely new. (That could change at any time, of course.) That may be because some of those stories have a lot of parts to them – most notably “Smooshed” (with a planned 18 chapters) and “Third Dimension” (which will have 7 chapters, but they will all be long).

I’ve been posting on AO3 for a while now. I’d say it’s pretty similar to AFF. They have a kudos feature, which is nice, but I tend to get fewer comments on my stories there than I get here.

My Helluva Boss fic, “Heaven Help You,” is posted! When the I.M.P. team goes to Earth to assassinate a movie star, a cherub makes Loona an offer she can’t refuse. EDIT: I forgot to mention that my “Little Rose” story, which FINALLY has a title (“A Little Family Trip”), is now in beta, so that should be seeing the light of day soon.

Category name: Helluva Boss Section category to be in: Cartoons > +G through L Do you have any stories for it?: Yes

Hey there, SWP1! Thanks for the review of “Naughty and Nice,” which I’m glad you liked. I made the leader of the CRT Russian because some people who read last year’s story made jokes about the Russians having been the ones to hack Santa’s gift list. So I figured there should be a Russian reference somewhere in the story. I actually have a backstory in my head about how Santa and Krampus met, as well as how Santa got into the whole gift-giving biz in the first place. It’s quite possible that I’ll do a Santa Claus “origin story” at some point that will get into all of that.

Just wanted to report that things seem to be humming right along. My Helluva Boss fic, "Heaven Help You," recently went off to beta, and I expect that both the "Little Rose" sequel and the final chapter of "Stallion" will be ready to post some time next week.

Re: “Can’t Resist Her” From ANON - Candlelight Scribe on January 12, 2022 Thanks! I focused a lot of buildup in the hope of making the story at least slightly believable. Yeah, I suppose this was kind of an “origin story.” There could certainly be a sequel. Thank you!

Re: “Can’t Resist Her” From Edward on January 11, 2022 Thanks! This story is more amenable to a sequel than a lot of my fics, so yeah, that could happen.

The next part of “Stallion” – Chapter 4: Little Sister – is posted. Mace has some very casual sex with an angry college girl. Then Ginger's little sister, Randi, comes to town and finds out why Ginger is so happy in her marriage.

“Can’t Resist Her” is posted! A divorced mother and her teenage daughter talk about the day when their life together changed forever.

Happy New Year, SWP1! Well, as it turns out, I have one more thing to add to my list of items I’m expecting to post in January-February: The first chapter of my Candace-centric Phineas and Ferb story, “Third Dimension.” So here’s the full list of everything I hope to post by the end of February: "Stallion" chapters 4 and 5, plus the epilogue "Smooshed" chapters 1 and 2 "Third Dimension" chapter 1 The Power Arcane, Story 8: Eldridge "Can't Resist Her" (original mother-daughter one-shot) The (still untitlted) one-shot sequel to "Little Rose" The Helluva Boss fic "Heaven Help You" Original fic “Loli Gras” I know this seems crazy ambitious, but all of these have been in the works for quite some time, so they’re pretty far along. Chapter 1 of “Smooshed” is in beta right now, I expect to post “Can’t Resist Her” tomorrow, and I’ll probably post chapter 4 of “Stallion” early next week.

Re: “Dogsitting” From Ghost_of_Colston on January 06, 2022 I’m honored. And welcome! Thank you!

@Thundercloud I didn’t know that the exposition fairy was actually a trope. I’m clearly out of touch. I’ll have to check out that link you posted. I could easily see you doing more stories set in this world. Part of the fun is that it seems to be a generic medieval-fantasy world, which means that you don’t have to do a ton of world-building, but with funny and sexy quirks that you can reveal to the reader in the course of the story. Oh, and I’ll have to check out JayDee’s “You.”

Re: “Stallion” From ANON - MX_rose on January 05, 2022 Wow! That means a lot coming from a serious furry like yourself. Thank you! I really enjoy writing Mace and “discovering” a little more about him in each chapter. I’m a professional editor IRL, so if there's bad spelling, grammar, or punctuation in my stories, I have no excuse. Thank you! I hope you’ll enjoy the rest of the story just as much.

I need to add one more item to the list of things I want to have finished by the end of February: a fantasy story called "Loli Gras." It's about a college student who goes to New Orleans with his frat brothers for Mardi Gras but gets knocked out in a bar fight on his first night there. He wakes up to find that somehow, he is the king of one of the parades, and that all of the onlookers flashing him for beads are little girls (which the guy is into, unbeknownst to anyone). He then meets a particularly entrancing and mysterious girl with whom he has a romantic encounter. Many moons ago, I promised myself that I would finish and post that story before Mardi Gras 2022. Mardi Gras falls on March 1st this year, which means I’d better get the lead out.