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Re: “Stallion” From Metamorphic on January 05, 2022 Thank you!

Good point. I figured that was what you meant. Thanks again for the review!

No, that doesn’t solve the problem at all, because these are still sentence fragments and not sentences. Would this rewording capture its intended meaning? “The serpent coiled into the shape of a lamb, becoming a danger not just to the sheep but to the shepherd as well.”

From Thundercloud on January 02, 2022 Thank you! Having established in last year’s story (“Checking It Twice”) that the Nice List can’t be hacked, I was forced to get creative. Glad you liked the result. Like the two previous stories, I wanted this story to have a sex scene involving the reindeer and one involving the elves. The elf one was easy to set up, since Greta and Ida are both established as antler-chasers, but I needed a reason for the reindeer to have an orgy. Since it was December, when it’s just about time to change the calendar, I thought it would be fun to have the reindeer do a calendar for charity and to use that to build up to the sex. You’re welcome, and thanks for reading and reviewing!

Happy New Year, everyone! I hope 2022 will be what we all hoped 2021 would be. And now, the news. One of the next things I'll post will be that one-shot story I mentioned a while back called "Can't Resist Her." It's a first-person story told alternately by a young teenage girl and her mother, about the day when their relationship changed from conventional to sexual. Other things I plan to post in the next two months or so: The rest of "Stallion" (2 chapters and an epilogue) The first chapters of "Smooshed" The one-shot sequel to "Little Rose" The next Power Arcane story My Helluva Boss fic, "Heaven Help You" There may be other things, too, but this seems like a sufficiently ambitious list for now. In other news, I’ve been helping with the fight against spambots here on the AFF forum. The spambots have been VERY active, both posting their nonsense in existing threads (this one included) and creating new ones. As a group, the mods have been reporting and hiding literally dozens of spam posts a day. I hope the ‘bots lose interest in this site soon. Also, yesterday I decided that I wanted every story of mine that has a sequel to include a link to the sequel at the end. Adding those links to every such story on every site where it’s posted (potentially including AFF, AO3, Inkbunny, Lolicit, and the Palcomix Forum) took a while, but I’m glad I did it. Within a few hours afterward, some of my old stories got new comments on Lolicit because adding the links moved them to the front page, where they were read by people who hadn’t encountered those stories back when they were first posted.

From ANON - Pedophile on December 29, 2021 Yeah, but don’t, okay? Thank you!

On this forum, there’s probably a dozen old ones that would fit the bill.

I used to worry about this a lot, and I still worry about it some. But as my friend and beta Jomahawk once pointed out, if readers like your sex scenes, then they don’t really want the scenes to be all that different from one another.

The next chapter of “Stallion” is up! Mace fucks his youngest son's girlfriend and introduces Ginger to anal sex. Chapter 3: Ronnie’s Girlfriend So far, this story has nearly 4000 dragon prints but no reviews. Cue the world’s tiniest violin. Making lots of progress on other stuff, but nothing terribly worthy of report as yet save that I still expect to start posting “Smooshed” in January.

Re: “Excuses” From ANON - Sexy girl on December 26, 2021 Thanks! I’m glad it worked so well for you.

Re: “Mommy’s Home” From ANON - Sexy girl on December 26, 2021 Thanks! Then you might want to check out the sequel, “Auntie’s Home.”

Re: “The Order of Things” From ANON - Ash on December 26, 2021 Interesting thought.

Thanks, and Merry Christmas to you!

Egads, sorry to hear it. Hope you are all well again soon.

From InvidiaRed on December 20, 2021 Thank you! I know it’s a long story, but it needed to be in order to build up to that ending.

The next chapter of “Stallion” is up! Chapter 2: Mace’s Favorite MILF Mace visits a plush older mare, then gives Ginger a lesson in the fine art of deepthroat.

“Naughty and Nice” is posted! Summary: Final story in the trilogy that began with “The Ninth Reindeer” and continued with “Checking It Twice” The mysterious hacker again threatens to ruin Christmas, and this time, Rudy is in no condition to save it.

My story is posted! “Naughty and Nice” Tags: 3Plus, Anal, Anthro, F/F, Inc, M/F, Oral Summary: Final story in the trilogy that began with “The Ninth Reindeer” and continued with “Checking It Twice” The mysterious hacker again threatens to ruin Christmas, and this time, Rudy is in no condition to save it. IB, I took the liberty of adding a link to the story collection in the top post.

From ANON - Zac on December 15, 2021 Thanks, and I will!

A few updates: --My Christmas story "Naughty and Nice'' has gone off to beta. It's pretty long (12,000 words), so I'm not sure how long the beta will take. --I expect to post chapter 2 of "Stallion" in the next few days. --The way things are going, I may be able to start posting chapters of my massive Star Vs. story, "Smooshed," shortly after New Year's. I'd like to publicly thank Fairy Slayer for his past and future help with this story. I'm making progress on other things, too, but nothing worthy of mention as yet. Givemecummies, thanks for the kind words. I’m willing to hear suggestions, but I make no guarantee at all that I’ll act on them. Fire away.

I didn’t actually try to describe it in that case, but I probably should. I might use a phrase like “...demi-bras, which left everything above the nipple uncovered.”

I often talk about color, material, and cut. For example, in my upcoming Christmas story, Santa’s (anthropomorphic) reindeer are doing a photoshoot to make a sexy calendar for charity. For the shoot, Dancer and Prancer wear matching demi-bras and panties (Dancer’s in red, Prancer’s in green), and the panties are high cut to show off their shapely legs.

I’m not sure, but you might be thinking of a few of Lady Freelove’s stories: http://members.adult-fanfiction.org/profile.php?no=1296993446&view=story&zone=original&page=1

My friend and frequent beta Jomahawk has been helpful to me in pointing out when I’ve failed to describe clothing (and especially lingerie) in sufficient detail and in making suggestions about what characters should wear. I’ve also done a certain amount of googling to learn more about the varieties that bras, panties, bikinis, etc come in. And just googling “unusual sexy outfit” or something like that can give you ideas.

Chapter 1 of “Stallion” is posted! Well-built and well-hung stallion Mace likes fillies and mares, and they like him—a lot. Including his new daughter-in-law. Chapter 1: Her Real Wedding Night