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  1. That's a valid criticism, and it jibes with an observation made by a reviewer on Hentai Foundry (where this story is also posted): that all of the stories I've written to date are about the characters getting together and having sex for the first time. He suggested that I try writing a sequel to one of my stories to explore how their relationships develop after that. I thought that was a great idea, so I'm doing in that the upcoming "Danville, We Have a Problem" (which is a sequel to "Truth or Dare 2.0"). What really makes it work is Vanessa. She's a much edgier character than most of the others, so including her in the story gave me a lot to work with. I don't have plans for a sequel to this one, mainly because I found this story very difficult to write (for an explanation, see my response to Jomahawk2694, above). But I'm glad you liked it overall.
  2. Thanks! The adult ThunderCats are, of course, very upset when they eventually find out what Kit and Kat have been up to, but they quickly realize that they have only themselves to blame, because each of them has been avoiding the responsibility of teaching the kids about sex. Kit and Kat also remind the adults that there are no other Thunderians their age, so what are they supposed to do when it comes to having a romantic relationship? Ultimately, the adults let them continue to explore their feelings for each other. You and me both.
  3. Thank you! That's exactly what I was trying for: to show the kids doing what they could manage to do on the basis of instinct alone, without even a decent "the birds and the bees" lecture for guidance. And yes, there will be more.
  4. Tell me how you really feel. Seriously, there will be more very shortly.
  5. They did have fur, actually--it was just rather short fur. If you watch the very first episode, there's a part at the beginning when you see them without clothing (their clothing is given to them by Jaga before they arrive at Third Earth). They don't look naked, though, so their fur is clearly covering all the bits. In any case, I'm glad you enjoyed the story. Glad you liked it. There is a second part, but it's pretty much all kittens. I'll get it posted soon.
  6. Thanks. And yes.
  7. This response thread is for "Thunderkittens: Innocence" and its soon-to-be follow-up, "Thunderkittens: Need."
  8. There are plenty of sites that have nothing BUT furry stories and art. I post my furry stories on Inkbunny.net.
  9. I believe you're thinking of CONTACT, starring Jodie Foster.
  10. It's true. My first response to the "to find out why, come to us" message might well be, "They want to sell the nukes back to the highest bidder."
  11. Some people, fearing an invasion, would go survivalist and begin stockpiling guns and ammunition, building bomb shelters, etc. A smaller number of people would look to the aliens as potential saviors. Attendance at religious services would rise, both because of fear and because the appearance of intelligent extraterrestrial life would shake many people's worldview. Many people would be desperate to find any scrap of information about the aliens. Governments would do anything possible to get hold of alien technology. Fashion and design trends would emerge that would be inspired by the aliens' apparent aesthetic. That's all I can think of for the moment.
  12. Thank you. Not sucking is what I strive for. Seriously, I'm glad if you think I did justice to Ferb and Vanessa. Ferb is so below-the-surface and Vanessa is so hot and dark that they ended up being really fun to write--a big change of pace from Phineas and Isabella. Thank you! As for everyone else's dreams, well, a story about dreams has to leave a LITTLE mystery... I will confess that this story was harder by far to write than any of my P&F to date. I've always believed that rules and limits enhance a writer's creativity, but this story taught me that the opposite is also true--having NO rules or limits can be crippling. I had massive "option paralysis" trying to figure out what would happen in each chapter, because potentially, ANYTHING could happen in the dream world. It's like having an all-powerful genie give you ONE wish, and then spending weeks agonizing over what to wish for. So while I loved having all that freedom, I also found it to be weirdly stifling. Next up: Romance and disaster in space in "Danville, We Have a Problem"!
  13. Recently, they had the "Mission Marvel" episode of PHINEAS AND FERB because Disney now owns Marvel. But what if Disney had bought DC and had a P&F/YOUNG JUSTICE crossover instead?
  14. Thanks! I didn't want to have to pull a coitus interruptus on Phineas and Isabella to cut to Ferb and Vanessa, and I didn't want to write a chapter that was twice as long as the others, so I decided to let the couples have their own chapters just this once.
  15. Thank you! Someone asked me a while back whether I might write a fic that involved Vanessa, and I realized that I had somehow neglected to feature the hottest character in P&F in any of my stories. So this story is partly an attempt to make up for that deficit. The weird part is, I think I'm enjoying writing the Ferb/Vanessa bits more than the Phineas/Isabella bits, because there is so much more to explore. Thanks, Ron! I hope you'll like it.
  16. I get the impression that Vanessa and Monty aren't yet all that serious. Also, I sort of have it in my head that Vanessa kind of has a thing for Ferb but won't act on it (in waking life, at least) because of their age difference. Vanessa and Ferb will definitely have to confront the barriers to their having a real-world relationship. Oh, yeah, there's all kinds of ways this can--and will--go. I'm afraid you're expecting a lot more in the way of plot than I'm planning. We're pretty much about to dive right into the "adults-only" portion of this story. Plus, I REALLY don't want to imagine Heinz getting it on with...anybody. I will definitely publish that story (working title: "Danville, We Have a Problem") here. Outer-space disaster awaits!
  17. I wrote this story (http://cartoon.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600094250) some time ago but didn't post it on AFF because I thought it seemed too...extreme. Then I saw a description of another story posted on AFF that makes this one look pretty tame by comparison, so I decided to just go for it. Anyhoo, below are my responses to reviews of this story. Thanks! I'm not that big on sequels, but I do sort of have an idea for one. I'll need to let it cook for a bit longer before I decide whether it's edible.
  18. Re: "There's a New Seraph in Town" Thank you very, very much. Everything you said about the story is exactly what I was trying to achieve. I really appreciate the props, especially from Gabriel himself!
  19. I have a fanfic that I had posted on other sites but that I had never posted here because I thought it was too twisted for AFF. Reading this thread made me realize that there's no such thing, so I posted the story last night. Thank you for the inspiration.
  20. Thanks! I'm here all week.
  21. Re: "There's a New Seraph in Town" Creating a review reply thread before the story has gotten any reviews: blind optimism or shameful arrogance? Yes. In any case, if any of you lovely folks reviews "There's a New Seraph in Town," I will joyfully reply here.
  22. Author: George Glass Title: There’s a New Seraph in Town Summary: A first-year med student is visited by an angel who wants to take Halloween back from the Devil by throwing the ultimate Halloween party. Feedback: Feedback in general and concrit in particular very much appreciated. Fandom: Original-amundo Pairing: Wouldn't you like to know? Actually, I really hope you would. Warnings: M/F, mutual masturbation, miscellaneous fooling around. Oh, and don't mow the lawn when it's wet. Solo story or chaptered story: Chaptered. All chapters have been posted. URL: http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600106551
  23. Thanks! I've been a little distracted lately by a <gasp> original story that I've been inspired to write, but I will be back on the "Sweet Dreams" case soon!
  24. Thanks for all the work, DG. This means the name of the site itself has changed, right? I notice that "Adultfanfiction.net" still appears on the title page and in the headers and such. One thing at a time, I suppose.
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