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BronxWench

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  1. Category added.
  2. Category added.
  3. Category added.
  4. Category for L.A.’s Finest added.
  5. Category for B2K added.
  6. Categories added.
  7. Category added.
  8. Category added.
  9. Category added in the Games subdomain.
  10. Pairing sub-category added, and stories moved to the new sub-category.
  11. Category created and story moved.
  12. I just double-checked myself, and I was actually pleased to find I’ve marked my completed work with a “COMPLETE” tag. Now all I have to do is actually finish the incomplete works.
  13. There is currently a category for Angel/Xander here: http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/index.php?cat=866 The remaining categories are not divided by pairings, and those categories can’t be added.
  14. The original author of the story, be it fan fiction or an original work, owns the story. It is their intellectual property, and as such, we will protect their rights to their hard work. Let me put it in terms that might actually get through: I don’t own “A Song of Fire and Ice” and even though it’s been YEARS since George RR Martin wrote Book 5, and many of us are desperate for Book 6, George RR Martin isn’t going to take kindly to my writing Book 6 for him. (He did allow HBO to abuse his universe, however, which just goes to show that no sane author should ever let anyone else write their story for them. Season 8? Really? Talk about lazy writing...) So, the answer to your question is: you don’t get permission if Praetor doesn’t grant it.
  15. A very happy birthday to @foeofthelance and hoping this year brings lots of good things for you! See you at Ren Faire, lad, and I’ll stand you a mead! :birthday: :cheers: :party: :beer:

    1. Desiderius Price

      Desiderius Price

      I’ll second that motion.  Happy Birthday!  :bday:

    2. WillowDarkling

      WillowDarkling

      Happy birthday, Foe! Hope you have a fantastic day. :bday:

    3. GeorgeGlass

      GeorgeGlass

      Hope you have a great one, Foe.

      Just wondering: Would your archenemy by “friendofthelance”?

  16. The archive account has been deleted. Google may return search results for the old name, but if that link is used, it will lead to a page saying that the user does not exist.
  17. Good point! I try to pretend the Celebrity subdomain doesn’t exist, which is probably not a good thing. But for fan fiction NOT involving real persons, you can age up characters.
  18. Yes, it’s fine to age up characters in fan fiction.
  19. We don’t have a chapter cap as far as I know. We have multiple stories on the site which have gone well past 100 chapters, so write away!
  20. Sending birthday wishes to my darling @pippychick and wishing you all the very best for this year, and all the years to come. Love you! :wub: :hug: :wish: :party:

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    2. Desiderius Price

      Desiderius Price

      Sure, I’m 21 too, once I get the court to sign off...um, correcting my birth certificate to reflect my desired age.  Anybody got a spare tube of time-reversal cream I can use to get nature to reflect my desires?

    3. BronxWench

      BronxWench

      You are all younger than springtime, my darlings! :wub: 

    4. WillowDarkling

      WillowDarkling

      Happy belated birthday, Pippychick! :party:

  21. No worries! I’ve deleted the new account so there shouldn’t be any issues.
  22. I can’t speak to the forum account, but I can delete the new archive account for you.
  23. [MC] looked around the tavern, assessing his coworkers. They were a diverse bunch, but he had grown fond of them. Janina, a young elf with blond hair that was always tied up into a folded ponytail bun, stood at just over six feet tall and had blue eyes that has had a slight glow to them. Her green top gently hugged her athletic body, her fair sized breasts pressing against the fabric were the envy of many women, as were her strong toned legs hidden by a pair of grey pants that held on to her round shapely buttocks. Only once did anyone ever try to force her to do something she didn't want to do. She had the man pinned to the wall with a spell in one hand (What was the spell? You describe the fire ball in her other hand, so is this spell visible? If so, describe it!) and a blue fire ball in her other, ready to kill the poor drunk. After he had pissed his pants, she smiled at him and told him it was time to go home before he gets got into any more trouble. He quickly paid his tab and ran home. Janina simply returned to work while the entire tavern was dead silent, not one person taking their eyes off her, until she asked if anyone needed another drink in one of the sweetest voices that challenged anyone to try something like that again. So, to explain my edits… Give us some context in the form of a sentence that lets us know whose point of view this is. If this is from MC’s point of view, he doesn’t know what other women envy about Janina, unless they’ve all decided to drop by and tell him. If her legs are hidden by the pants, he can’t tell that they’re strong and toned, unless he makes a habit of peeking when she’s changing. Also, his absorption with the way her clothes fit makes him sound like a pervert, or a fashionista. You need to watch verb tense. You keep popping off into present tense when the sentence starts out in the past tense. Pick a tense and stick with it, please. The gods of grammar will thank you. Avoid endlessly complicated sentences. It’s confusing for a reader to keep track of what’s happening when they have to unravel all those clauses. It’s as bad as all those endless (and breathless) sentences that begin with “Then… And then...” Most of the time, unless it’s in the form of a scroll, you don’t see a spell. You see the effect of the spell. You got it with the blue fire ball, but the other spell? We readers have no clue what it is, or what she’s doing with it. Help out a poor reader and either describe it, or just have her hand around his throat as she pins him to the wall.
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