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It's definitely a workable premise! You can always downplay the actual "mechanics" of the time travel jutsu, and focus more on the emotional and physical toll it takes on Naruto as his memories merge. It's bound to cause odd behaviors, and all sorts of peculiar situations.

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It's the same with most fad diets. There is no reason, other than a health issue, to eliminate carbs, or naturally occurring fats, or even refined sugar from your diet. The key, as with everything else, is moderation. There is no one at all holding sharp or projectile-ejecting objects to your person and demanding that you super-size that meal. My daughter is a type 1 diabetic who's been diagnosed with Hashimoto's thyroiditis, currently not requiring medication, thank all the gods. Trust me, diets are something I deal with daily. She eats as normally as possible, within reason, and primarily fresh foods and homemade foods. Junk food has never been a staple for us, even before her diagnosis. My son is a fairly high-functioning autistic. My daft bugger proposed a gluten-free, dairy-free diet for him after reading an interview with Jenny McCarthy. I told him in no uncertain terms that I don't get my information from the pages of People magazine, and when JAMA and the Lancet told me to starve my son, I'd still want to see a few more opinions from reputable doctors not affiliated with any crackpot organizations. It was worth the price of a new skillet, trust me.

The memories of the old world or the new? (I am confused and uncaffeinated...)

::nods:: So in essence the Naruto in your story, in the story's present day, may come out of this frozen state to find his world radically altered, perhaps beyond recognition... It's bold. Very bold. So much about Naruto's character was shaped by his being an orphan, and having that need to prove that he's not this harbinger of evil that caused his parents' deaths. That alone will make for some interesting changes, I think. The trick will be to think through the various timelines for each action that changes. You might even need to make serious notes to stay on track, and not slip back into canon.

Time travel is incredibly complicated as a concept. But, given your premise, we can eliminate the quantum mechanics, I think. So, there will be a jutsu that will send Naruto back in time, presumably to a time where he also exists. Will the jutsu supersede his consciousness, or will his two selves co-exist? I'd posit that having the future version of Naruto act as sort of a mental voice of reason might be better, and more believable. Then there's the paradox theory, that simply by altering the flow of the future, you change more than you anticipated. The whole things works on the principal of the butterfly's wings: a butterfly's wings flapping can alter air currents, and the change ripples along until you see an upheaval in the weather patterns on the other side of the world. So, Naruto will need to be very careful in how he alters events, or at least should have that concern in the back of his mind. He can't be rash and brash.

Or just make a thread in there, and we'll all see it. But really, Writers' Corner is meant to be a general area, for whatever we as writers want to throw out there for discussion.

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Actually, that goes well in the Writers' Corner. There are world building discussions there, as well as helpful research and ask the other authors threads.

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This story is currently in Originals > Erotica > General, but should be in Books > The Bible: Story Profile

tehuti88 has done a few stories with pregnancy that are very good. A search using the term Preg and Story Summaries as the option yielded a couple dozen choices. You haven't said if there's a genre you prefer, though, so it's hard to make recommendations without a little more information.

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Thank you for that catch, and I've edited that as well. I'm an author as well as a moderator, and I'd be pretty upset if my fiction was hosted someplace without my consent.

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