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  1. That article’s got some awesome advice. I’m taking notes! Turns out I haven’t been nearly as douchebaggy as I should be with publishers, and I’ve been writing the wrong stories! Zombie politicians, here I come!
  2. For Trust the Dead @Sinfulwolf A little bit of approval of my profanity is going to make a monster out of me, I hope you realise, because that means fucking everything, lol. I’m so glad you enjoyed this first chapter. It’s a genre I love soooo goddamn much, and I’m actually pretty proud of this atm. Thank you so much for the review <3
  3. Chapter 4! God I’m never gonna get that Alabaman accent out of my head.
  4. For those of you who looked in the body of the email, and the sextortionist provided a bitcoin address, you can report it at “bitcoin abuse” here: https://www.bitcoinabuse.com/
  5. Review for Trust the Dead I’m so glad! I’ve been wanting to do a zombie fic forever and this one’s been nagging at me, so I’m happy its going over well so far. Thanks for the review! @InvidiaRed Hey! No spoilers! LOL That legit made me laugh tho. TY for the review!
  6. Author: PlagueClover Title: Trust the Dead Summary: (This, my friends, is a zombie fic.) Manuel just wants to be left alone so he and his sweet, traumatized dog can recover from the years of abuse they suffered together. One night, when riots break out over the city and a wounded foreigner crashes into his patio door, Mannie’s world descends into chaos. Now his anonymous stalker and those pesky traumas haunting him from his past are the least of his worries, because the dead are rising and they are pissed. Feedback: Love it! Fandom: Original Pairing: M/M Warnings: Violence, anal, racism, rape, oral, MiCD Solo or Chaptered: Chaptered Url: http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600109391 Review Reply thread:
  7. Chapter 3 is up! Shit is starting to get crazy for poor ol’ Liam!
  8. Review for Dying for the Devil @Sinfulwolf That’s a tough thing, ain’t it? Trying to capture stuff and making it consistent without overdoing it. I’m glad the prison shit is coming off as authentic enough so far, it’s kinda one of those things that I’m really into, besides pirates lol: prison, so the compliment is much appreciated! And thanks for the heads up! I’ll try to keep his gay shark thing from getting too obnoxious. Well, it’s meant to be obnoxious, but you know what I mean! TY for the review <3
  9. Jeez, you put a lot of thought into this, @InvidiaRed Next time I need to name a story, Imma steal your brain for an hour.
  10. The Sibling Predicament A Steamy Solution Hug It Out Though I do like “Tension” because it’s nice and simple. So if you don’t really like it you can just use the word, or the word ‘tense’ combined with something else.
  11. Review For The Captain’s Cabin @Tcr Well that’s good. I didn’t want to do the burp porn in a super predictable way. It was short but I was aiming for some semblance of ambiance lol. I’m glad it was still kinda funny though, because… well, it’s fucking burp porn. Thanks for the review. Review for Dying for the Devil @InvidiaRed Man I would have totally watched that movie till the end instead of wandering off randomly halfway through the climax if there were more tentacles in it. TY for the review!
  12. Yeah, he was awesome! Pretty sure he took off with my wallet though… or my soul… Either way, something feels a little light. Hey, you look a little familiar...
  13. It’s so damn nice to be writing again after such a long-assed drought. 

    1. Tcr

      Tcr

      You and me both.  Now the internet writing sites won't know what hit them again ;) .  Lol. (And the trophy is for a win, not so much thanks ;) .)

    2. Sinfulwolf
  14. Chapter 2 is up! Right here!
  15. Author: PlagueClover Title: The Captain’s Cabin Summary: Written for the two challenges: Pirate porn and “Burp” porn. When Itzcali woke up that morning, he didn’t think he’d live to see the sunset. Playing the sacrificial lamb was his price to pay to keep the invading Europeans from slaughtering his tribe. But when a cavalier British pirate shows up, Itzcali’s life is forever changed. Feedback: Always appreciated Fandom: Original Pairing: M/M Warnings: Bodily functions, fetish, anal, challengefic, humil Solo or chaptered: Oneshot URL: http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600109379 Review Reply Thread:
  16. LOL I was wondering since my story has zero resemblance to GoT but I’ll take all the ego stroking I can get, even if it is a miscommunication!
  17. Review for Dying for the Devil Chapter 1 @InvidiaRed First of all, thank you for the review. You’re the first review on this story! Yay! That deserves a prize! Second of all, I have no clue what you meant by that, or if that was just a typo, but since I love GoT sooo much it made me blush anyway. Thank you <3
  18. Author: PlagueClover Title: Dying for the Devil Summary: Liam’s early release from prison comes way earlier than he expected, but he’s not thrilled when he finds out his Christian Republican father’s behind it. Thought he’d get a little taste of freedom, but instead he gets hidden away in some backwoods town because daddy doesn’t want him stirring up trouble during his campaign. Problem is, this time it’s not Liam stirring up the trouble. There’s something wrong with that town, and something extra wrong with that lake and them tentacles coming out of it. Feedback: If you enjoy the story, please let me know! Fandom: Original Horror Pairing: M/M Warnings: Masochism, tent, anal, rape, violence, bigotry Solo or chaptered: Chaptered! URL: http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600109368 Review Reply:
  19. Wooo! I hit the 5 chapter mark! Since that’s my I-Got-This-Far-So-Pretty-sure-I-Won’t-Drop-This-fic-Like-I-Did-The-Last-Fifty-Yay line in he sand, you know what that means, don’t you? Tiiime to unleash this porny beast upon the world!!!! Mwahahahaahaha! 

    Well… Soon as I edit and wrangle me a beta… BEWARE and so forth. 

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    2. InBrightestDay

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      that’s my I-Got-This-Far-So-Pretty-sure-I-Won’t-Drop-This-fic-Like-I-Did-The-Last-Fifty-Yay line in he sand

      :lol: It’s always good to have a line like that.

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      Oh crap I gotta write the summary. :no:

      I know how you feel.  It’s a surprisingly tricky thing to do.

    3. CloverReef

      CloverReef

      Ha! I did decide on a title, thanks to Melrick. 

      But yeah, summaries. Who needs em? From now on I’m just going to load the summary field with top secret mind control words that force everyone who’d enjoy the story to read it and review. Those words exist! I’m sure of it! We just gotta make them harry potter writers tell us what they are! 

    4. JayDee

      JayDee

      “LOL I SUCK AT SUMMARIES JUST READ AND REVIEW.”

  20. Sometimes I just wanna name my story what it is. Fuck nuance and creativity, this one shall henceforth be called “Porny Monster Fic with Maybe a Cult Too, If I Feel Like It.”

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    3. CloverReef

      CloverReef

      Sounds like a self-help book that I absolutely need in my life. 

    4. InvidiaRed

      InvidiaRed

      A self-help book that enables you to bump into things man was not supposed to know….

      And more importantly, bump uglies with.

      Cause deep space and or a ton of other dimensions tend to be awfully lonely.

      *Warning Author is not responsible for any mishaps and or misunderstandings with unknowable entities. Please do not read if you are pregnant and or nursing. If you are a sex that cannot be pregnant please consult with the nearest available physician.

      Primary side effects include Xenophilia. unnatural growths. Sudden markings in dead or unknown languages on sensitive flesh. New orifices. tentacular genitalia. Ocular genitalia.Sapient genitalia.  Scales. bruises. Smelling colors. hearing textures. Speaking in tongues. Sudden new organs of undetermined purpose. Weight loss, Weight gain. Height gain. Height loss. Alternating sexes. Inability to understand modern language. Inability to understand any language. Unexplained smells. Bills and proof of residence of the following places.

      R’yleh, Carcosa, Lake Hali.

      Missing pets. Sudden new pets. Unknown suddenly interested family from Innsmouth. Cults with an inornate fondness for kidnapping. mundane ancient artifacts bearing your likeness. Sudden new discovery of your ancient burial place. Etc.. 

  21. There are genderless nouns that could be used in place of a name if the name is unknown. “The stranger”, “The figure”, or for example, using a nickname, like if she described them as ghostlike, then calling them the ‘phantom’, or something more in line with the narrator’s personality. Sorry, I’m sticking my nose in late to the convo but I do love to hear myself type!
  22. We use homestead still up here, but generally for a single family’s place. I’d go with hamlet. I think we have another word for it but I forget!
  23. I got the internet today! What did I miss?

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    2. InBrightestDay

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      I don’t know why I thought that said ‘cat porn’.

      I mean, it’s the internet.  I guarantee you there’s cat porn out there.

    3. JayDee

      JayDee

      Khajiit has porn if you have coin.

    4. InBrightestDay

      InBrightestDay

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      Khajiit has porn if you have coin.

      I’m now imagining a Duke Weaselton-style Khajiit with a big coat full of off-brand DVDs.

      mBQ8KiW.jpg

  24. I’m amused that my thread about flaws turned into a thread about redemption. Just to clarify what I meant by ‘redeemable’, it’s not so much that they kill some one and go off and pray it away. I meant more balance within their ongoing traits rather than a pivotal redeeming event in the story (which is great too). For example, he’s a killer, but he’s also really good at flower arrangements. He’s got a major flaw, but he’s also got a major strength that makes him likeable despite his flaw. My interest in this topic hasn’t waned mostly because my love for ugliness is going strong and I’m aware it’s not everyone’s cup of tea. I’ve gotten more than enough reviews that told me so. “OMG U NED 2 MAKE UR CHARS LIKEABLE STOOPID!!” And yeah. Of course I do. Mr. Murderous whoreyface is totally likeable, so I dunno what they’re talking about. As much as I intend to keep my chars flawed when I wanna, being aware of the expectations of the audience and finding some semblance of balance helps sometimes.
  25. Internet will shut down any day now and moving day is next week! Time to go on a frantic search for free kindle books to download! Maybe I’ll get lucky and find some free erotica en espanol to help me learn. 

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    2. CloverReef

      CloverReef

      Moving to Edmonton Alberta, from Southern Saskatchewan.

    3. InBrightestDay

      InBrightestDay

      Oh, okay.  I thought from the “erotica en espanol to help me learn” that you were moving to Spain or something!

      At any rate, good luck with the move and we’ll see you when you get back! :)

    4. CloverReef

      CloverReef

      Nah, I just love spanish so I’m trying to learn it. That would be awesome tho. And thanks! 

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