Stan and Haley got locked in the basement by Roger who ended up forgetting they was in there after a few hours Haley starting to yell for help hoping someone would hear her only for Stan to tell he made the basement soundproof it got to hot and Haley and Stan removed some clothes to keep cool in just their underwear they couldn't control themselves and ended up fucking
When they finally got out they said no one can ever know what happened and then immediately started making out and went to Haley's room to go again it went on for a few days until Steve caught them he told them he wants to fuck Haley and Francine Stan and Haley who just finished agreed
Is your choice how they get Francine to join and if Francine and Haley have lesbian sex or not
my number 1 all time books were either Goosebumps or Battle Tech/Mech Warrior.
perspective wise though, I would say maybe trying to take a Q from LOTR would be a better setting or something.
And that’s a great start. Why am I in jail? What the hell just happened here? Why won’t anyone answer my questions? Give the reader a little emotional hook into the character and they’ll want to find out, too.
Most of my favorite authors are voracious readers. You can’t write if you don’t also read, in my ever-so-humble opinion.