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I may yet. It’s hard to say, though, given how difficult Gogedheh’s actual strength is to pin down. I mean, Deathstalker consistently misspells “scraping” and “scraped” as “scrapping” and “scrapped”. Nobody’s perfect. Oh yeah, I noticed that. From my reaction post concerning Multiverse Trophies: Now, I admittedly have not read Five Women. One Night., but looking at the chapter titles I get the idea. A Yautja (Predator, for simplicity's sake, from here on out) arrives on Earth who specifically hunts women. He tracks and kills five of them, Lara Croft, Beatrix Kiddo and Miho from Sin City among them. I should be able to follow this without having any questions. … I don't know what the circumstances are precisely, but somewhere, somehow, JD is responsible for this. So yeah, that answers that! Funny you should mention Eparlegna. Roundabout Becoming the Hunted (wherein Gogedheh wades through the cast of Mass Effect) he pretty much turns into Eparlegna. Morally speaking, and in terms of what they do, they’re essentially the same guy at this point, the only difference being that Gogedheh does this stuff when he’s mad, while Eparlegna does it because it’s fun. On the vocal mimicry, absolutely. I don’t remember Predator 2 as well as I do the first film and Predators, but the City Hunter may have broken someone’s wrist in that. Celtic does it in the first AVP film (a redshirt pulls a gun on him, so he grabs the guy’s wrist and very quickly snaps it). You make a very good point concerning the height difference. Just because the Yautja in the films all tend to be around the same height doesn’t mean there couldn’t be larger ones. As for the internal testicles...maybe you didn’t want to have to describe his balls so you decided they were inside? I appreciate that, though I don’t know if anything in here is going to do what the other stories did (Becoming the Hunted features a torture scene so long and detailed that I didn’t feel anything, emotionally speaking, for a good 15 minutes afterward, or as I put it to Deathstalker...), and there is, like, plenty of entertainment value!

Thanks, SWP1. Hope you have a good week ahead.

Then you’re going to like the sequel to “Enter the Sandboy.”

Wow, these are some – some – solid suggestions. Thanks!

Five Women. One Night. [AFF Edit Edition] 18584 hits and before the most recent reviews, 4 reviews! A story that at least partly inspired a series of sequels to be requested of the legendary author Deathstalker, a genius of the written word. This one, on the other hand is, uh, well, JayDee quality. Still, it seems that after reading DS’s epics one bold reviewer has waxed curious over the origin of the Villain Sue OC and let this curiousity overcome common sense. Hence, Thank you for the reviews! I am genuinely appreciative and grateful to get some feedback on this ancient thing. I personally hope that having been through alla the stories you finally decide to do your own Samus vs Predator work, because that outline you had sounded really badass. I fear you will be hugely disappointed given that Deathstalker is a really good writer capable of infusing true emotion and characterization and I was even more of a talently hack over a decade ago. For anybody else reading this and curious, this post over on the Great Wall promo’d the other site ref’d – http://www2.adult-fanfiction.org/forum/topic/20643-the-depravity-repository/?tab=comments#comment-226004 So this is all his fault! Or hers! This was the original request in case you’re curious and I’ve PM’d you the whole thread if you want to know more [/Starship Troopers] Needless to say I went the fictional character rather than celebrity route. Well, mostly. There was on big exception that may now be explained. And the AFF edit edition cleared out the exception. So moving on before people remember I once did celeb stories. Well, maybe not that humble. god of rape? Well, there’s an idea for a story- Gogedheh vs Eparlegna in the “Great British Raping Show” “This one’s got a soggy bottom” “Oh, lot of cream on those buns.” “Tarts” etc etc No, but I guess if you’re gonna have a total villain sue effortlessly beating canon characters who, in many cases, would easily destroy him without a thought you might as well go full retard with it. Which is what I did. His descriptions sound like his Mom wrote them. I ju-wha? *laughs* Damn it, man, I was not ready for that! Hey, Clueless was an absolute classic film! Clueless vs Predator woulda been a better film than Prometheus. Thanks again for this review. *Googles Vivian Ward* Damn it, JayDee... Actually, I might be adjusting to the insanity here, at least to an extent. The idea of Julia Roberts as a ruthless crime lord is hilarious. Thanks! There’s actually a few little references like that tossed in to each chapter. I think my favorite – to the extent I can still remember it today! – is a one paragraph throwaway reference to The Long Kiss Goodnight in one of the chapters. I totally think Julia has the acting chops to do crimelord, but in another way that line is a little sweet – I mean, at least her character’s marriage worked out after Pretty Woman! I think some of those traditions are totally from the films. Well, not the uterus one. But I could swear someone gets a wrist broken at least once, and the play back taunting is definitely a film trope. I guess it’s a thing in fanfiction to take the film stuff and use it in different, entirely perverse ways. Cool to think that DS got his own spin on ‘em later though. I guess it’s a little bit of ongoing characterisation – though I remember that with DS’s there had to be some character elasticity to fit in with the requester’s wishes. Such as his developing a desire to keep going after Lara Crofts like some kind of gotta catch ‘em all pokemon hunt. ...the nature of the codpiece. Here, Gogedheh is wearing a pretty normal codpiece. In the later stories it's an armored codpiece which, in case you haven't Googled it, looks freaking hilarious. I think I just wanted to go for something he could tug aside easily or possibly had a look at the film outfit and went for something close to that. Kind of a porn pouch thing. No doubt some unpleasant kicks and/or punches led to DS having him adopt the greater protection. Or possibly he looked at some metal codpieces and spent as much time laughing as you :D Eight and a half feet? The Jungle Hunter and City Hunter were both about 7'3" (played by the 7'2" Kevin Peter Hall, and it's safe to assume the makeup adds another inch). You know, I've been building a psychological profile/character study of him in my reaction posts, but maybe it wasn't necessary. Maybe this has all been roid rage the whole time. Haha, yeah, maybe he was actually a bookish nice guy before he got gassed up! Then Hulk Hogan sent him some vitamins and BAM! BAM! SPLURT! or something. Hey, you get variation of heights amongst humans, too! If one dude can be 5’4 and another can be 7’2 then having a Predator a foot or more bigger than the film one (Gotta get that Villain Sue bigger and better shit in there!) maybe isn’t so unlikely! We’ll just assume he was wearing some platform shoes for this one, to extra intimidate his shortest target :D Or stood on a half-foot tall thing on the roof that Miho hadn’t seen so from her perspective he was 8 and a half… I dunno. Actually, it is entirely possible I have a different height later in the story. Continuity and me… Thank you again! I didn’t remember he had internal testicals. I wonder if that detailed stayed in throughout or got quietly forgotten? I also wonder what the hell made me think of it. Ahh well, thanks for coming along for the ride with this thing. If you stick it out for the rest of the chapters I hope there isn’t anything that upsets you too bad (I mean, besides the quality of the writing) and that you’re able to find some entertainment value. Somewhere. Under a rock at the back of a scene, maybe.

Thank you so much for the recommendation!

This one’s been making me laugh like a fuckin’ loon for about 10 minutes. I don’t even know the characters involved.

I support this recommendation! But be warned, That ending is ‘emotionally’ touching, not in the ‘Chris Hassen shows up to interview Lady Aldreda’ sense.

Rule Breaker Lincoln Continental ( in case of a foreign exchange student.) Outgrowing Family Growing Up Alabama Special Overcoming incest Mom, I’m tired of banging my sister. New Year Craving New Soil Sex Is Always Sexier On The Other Side Of The Fence Unusual Circumstances The Best Kind Of Fruit Is Forbidden What My Family Doesn’t Know Finally! Someone Not Related Risk Taker Hooked Only Guilty If Caught Nobody Needs To Know Surprise Child Support Good Thing He’s Shooting Blanks Expanding Horizons Shrinking World Incest isn’t always Wincest Not All Its Cracked Up To Be Life Is Hard When You’re Perpetually Horny

"A Harem-brained Scheme" "The WHITE Stuff" "Loud and Proud" "I'll Show That Fucking Tortoise!" "Little Daddy" "The Human Shish Kebab Skewer" "The Sperminator" "My Absolute Mostest Bestest School Year EVER!" "The Incredible Fucking Machine" "It's Lisa's Fault, I Swear!" I hope you still feel that way after this.