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  1. If it is bad, you’re in good company. Around Halloween, I had a lengthy conversation with InvidiaRed over insect mouthparts due to a throwaway line in his story, and just yesterday I made an author on another site blink by explaining how much research I had to do to figure out if you could use water to hide from something that sees infrared. *notices everyone else staring* It’s more complicated than it seems, okay? The infrared spectrum is huge!
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  2. “Have you always lived on your own?” “I had an apartment share back in the 90s. Wasn’t so bad except you could always hear the girl upstairs jilling off.” I can’t really remember. I might have intended for it to end with some kind of end of millenium sacrifice attempt which the Under The Bed crew would have broken up to save Joan. The original plan would have messed around with perception, too, like was it real or in Joan’s head (nobody else even saw the letters f’r example), but eventually turn out to be real. "Fear is the path to the dark side. Fear leads to anger. Anger leads to hate. Hate leads to suffering." “...I just skipped straight to fear boner. Dat halo tho’ ” Is it bad that I read it and just thought “Oh, more than one Agora ?“ I blame being over educated and under skilled. Thank you again for the reviews!
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  3. Yua’s secret backstory confirmed. It actually sounds like something that would be fun to continue. Out of curiosity, why did you go with writing it as a period piece? I apologize for nothing. The funny thing is that the prompt apparently came from someone named Agoras, which sounds like a cool name for a demon. The skin-suit actually sounds like a cool and really creepy idea too!
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  4. At last, chapter 3 of “Flesh” is posted. Grant puts his mom to the test, and she’d better not fail.
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  5. This sounds like a crime against basic human decency, an example of unfettered degenracy not seen since the fall of the Roman empire. I shall look forward to it!
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