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Thank you! You are most welcome, and thank you. Lana is one of my favorite Loud sisters, so naturally I wanted to begin and end with her. And the rain just seemed necessary for a happy ending. Most of my stories draw at least a little bit from my own experiences. I suppose that’s true for a lot of writers – maybe even all of them. Indeed it is. Not sure when it will be ready to start posting; I have a lot of other stories in the works, too, including a couple of other Loud House fics. Hope you’re enjoying them. And thanks for the comments!

Re: “Day of the Deadly” From InBrightestDay on October 25, 2019 LOL! That may be the funniest first line of a review I’ve ever read. Turns out the underworld is a real sausage party. That was a spur-of-the-moment dialogue choice. I know that an expert can reload a bolt-action rifle in less than 3 seconds, but I wasn’t sure whether Enrique, who has presumably been practicing with semiautomatics, would actually be able to do it that fast. So I decided not to try to put a time frame on it. The whole “man in a woman’s body” thing was something I’d never written before, so a lot of amusing thoughts like that came up. It was still pretty awkward to write sometimes, because I was like, “Marta grabbed him...grabbed her...grabbed them?” I didn’t either. Ultimately, I just chose sex over gender. This being a Halloween/Day of the Dead story, I felt like I had to include at least one horror element. Thanks for reviewing it!

He’s got a work ethic, I’ll give him that.

...I’m sorry but I draw the line at sifting through giant spider poop. Just long enough to outdrink everyone with the beer bong! Even if you’re not, that many legs is definitely a bit of a brain squirm! And those eyes! Seven years time. Yua’s birthday. There’s a knock on the door. It’s Shannon, from the party. She just says: “Nice.” And that’s another great thing you have with their rerlationship I figure. They have a real understanding. Similar to how she probably really didn’t need to confirm he remembered the safe word because It seems like with her experience and that close bond she’d stil be able to tell he wanted things to stop. Thanks so much for writing a story and taking part! Us non contributing readers are basically leeches. Leeches, I say! (Well, just me then. No offence to the busy/un-motiviated folks!)

Glad to see Lana returning to complete the full circle… and its finally raining! The last scene was wonderfully sweet, showing the loving intimacy between the Louds. Very interesting to see parts of the story were based off your own life! I hear Enter the Sandboy 2 is in development Also thanks for the list of your works you gave me, slowly working my way through them...

*sniffles* Beautiful ending to a beautiful story. As this was the first story I came across when I discovered these forums, I just wanted to say thank you for introducing me to this whole new world with your incredible writing.

Have to say. Got to respect Asesemana