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Hey, mine is going to be a supernatural action-comedy, so I say genre schmenre.

Me: “I’m gonna read and review one halloween fic a day from the AFF halloween party!” Sudden real world stuff taking up free time: “Bend the fuck over JD.” ...fuck, hope I can read another one tomorrow at least!

Welcome, ghouls, goblins, banshees, and succubi. Here is the review responses from our 2019 Halloween Party Anthology. All the sweets one can ask for! A link to the anthology for the crazy brave! http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600109450

All very true...except that the punishment was not as effective as her superior hoped... How about this curse...“You cannot climax until have suffered a splinter inside your cunt”

Besides, It is a slice of amber. A moment that is profoundly yours. So you can see yourself improve as a wordsmith.

But Darling. Like making chocolate ganache Or a rich chocolate cake (An extra yolk is the secret) It requires sugar. Horror requires a helping of light-hearted brevity. You can't have horror all the time or it gets stale, quaint. inexcusably tired. Especially towards the cynical among us.

Oh, absolutely. It’s like if Hitler wound up on the wrong end of the Archangel Samael (probably the main angel of death in Judaism). I think the approach you went with definitely still works. It’s just one of those things you understand better if you read the story a second time. It does make me wonder about Hel hitting on the receptionist, though.

Well, to christen it, here's some replies: From InBrightestDay: This was a fun little idea! I love seeing all these deities from different mythologies interacting. It's cool how all the souls they're using as chips are tied to their respective cultures (Agamemnon and Paris for Pluto/Hades, Hitler's as close to a Norse bad guy as Hel can get, and Cortes is...well, let's just say him being reaped by an Aztec death god is pretty amusing). It's also kind of an interesting idea that the Greek and Roman gods all have like Dissociative Identity Disorder now, as I'm assuming that what applies to Pluto/Hades would also apply to Jupiter/Zeus, Venus/Aphrodite, Mercury/Hermes, etc. And of course, the action scene. I was really puzzled at first, since that little bit of domestic terrorism felt kind of random, but then you clarified that the death gods had their game here because this was going to happen: dinner and a show. Also, this is purely personal, but I love scenes where somebody picks on a defenseless victim only to discover that their target is not defenseless at all. Final note, it was pretty funny to see Mictlantecuhtli (I can see why you shortened that to "Mic") go completely over the top on his kill, dancing around and demanding more blood. From what I know, the Aztecs did have a habit of getting a little...enthusiastic about stuff like that. This was a fun little idea! I love seeing all these deities from different mythologies interacting. It's cool how all the souls they're using as chips are tied to their respective cultures (Agamemnon and Paris for Pluto/Hades, Hitler's as close to a Norse bad guy as Hel can get, and Cortes is...well, let's just say him being reaped by an Aztec death god is pretty amusing). It's also kind of an interesting idea that the Greek and Roman gods all have like Dissociative Identity Disorder now, as I'm assuming that what applies to Pluto/Hades would also apply to Jupiter/Zeus, Venus/Aphrodite, Mercury/Hermes, etc. I'm glad you enjoyed it. It was definitely an intriguing idea to write anf I thoroughly enjoyed it. Even if I got a little stuck halfway through. Lol. As for the Greek/Roman pantheon, yeah, I feel in this work, they would all have Dissociative Identity Disorder. Especially since they are mostly the same with only a few differences. (As for Mic reaping Cortez... Let's just say I had the thought and it was too good to pass up... lol). And of course, the action scene. I was really puzzled at first, since that little bit of domestic terrorism felt kind of random, but then you clarified that the death gods had their game here because this was going to happen: dinner and a show. Also, this is purely personal, but I love scenes where somebody picks on a defenseless victim only to discover that their target is not defenseless at all. (I owe a big thanks to SinfulWolf for this one, lol. She made the suggestion and I kind of ran with it, worked it in after the fact. Lol). That said, after I did work it in, I deleted some mentions earlier, too. I kind of wanted things to just seem like it was just a poker game. Lol, until shit hits the fan. Final note, it was pretty funny to see Mictlantecuhtli (I can see why you shortened that to "Mic") go completely over the top on his kill, dancing around and demanding more blood. From what I know, the Aztecs did have a habit of getting a little...enthusiastic about stuff like that. Yeah. Lol. I liked writing him after shit hits the fan, because I tried to keep the Gods/Goddesses tied at least partially to the culture and the mythology they were from. Glad it shone through .

Yep. Once posted, you are obligated by virtue of the writing Gods to keep it there! Honestly, it's always good to have a wide selection of creepy and good humoured WAFF!

Don’t ya dare! There’s no requirement for bloodythirsty terror. Edit: Also I am looking forward to reading and reviewing!