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Corrupt the Midwife – 1333 hits! Not terrible for a story in the depths of misc! One day it’ll be sat all on its own in a sub catagory! But with it being such a niche fandom for fanfic It’s not urgent Thank you for the review! Shannon also got InBrightestDay to look at it, from which I can only guess she’s an appealing character and that if I had the time her Doctor Who halloween party “Slutty Weeping Angel” costume would go down go great. I’m glad you found it a worthwhile read. I’d have felt bad for you if you’d finished it and thought “Well, fuck. That’s half hour I won’t get back again. Fuck this JayDee!” Which is the standard thought of most of my readers. I have a review that’s very similar to that on litereotica anyway. Thanks again! Absolutely agree on the repetitiveness – even having Chummy realise it is repetitive doesn’t excuse that the reader’s there already. Cynthia masturbating wih a wooden cross is definitely a bit out of character. Trixie getting drunk and horny, well… no, all very out of character. So, yeah, the dream/fantasy sequences allowed it. While I’ll not be expanding that scene, if I ever get back to proper writing a demon pleasuring herself with a cross might well show up again. It’s probably less blasphemous than the idol worship of praying to a cross, or so the old school iconoclasts might have argued. Thanks for the feedback! I can see where you’re coming from there. What I was trying to show as a follow on from Chummy’s little speech in the previous part – “I’d rather be Miss Havisham than join you. My God created pleasure, don’t you know, one doubts there was ever sin in taking it when no harm was done. Perhaps some got their morals wrong over the years, but I know what’s right and I’ll choose to look for love rather than surrender to lust. This is 1957 and I may love anyone I choose. I won't be corrupted” Chummy had the realisation that it was perfectly fine to have pleasure and love and sexy stuff as long as nobody is being harmed. She was resisting temptation of making a deal with a demon, but after what she’d been through she was perfectly happy to have sin free loving sex with a friend, with no danger to her soul – It’s been a year but I think Shannon had been partly trying to get her so frustrated she’d sell her soul for a good gushing orgasm. There’s also a driving point of a difference between harmful lust and non harmful. Just not explained very well, but that was sort of the point I was driving at! It’s definitely an interesting idea but Shannon pulling off a Trixie mask (magically speaking) feels a little out of character for her. She’s perfectly happy to pretend to be a cheerleader or a fan or friend-of-a-friend or something to get someone on top of her, but I think she’d be less happy at a full on bed trick. Thank you again for the thoughts and the feedback! It’s always really useful to hear where readers think something didn’t really work. I wasn’t very happy with how the story turned out as a whole, and I might still one day manage another Call the Midwife based story with Chummy and some chaps.

So, one more time for those of us who are new: since the first chapter can’t be edited by just anyone, do we just post our entries, and then you’ll edit the introduction to add the new stories to the list?

The 10th and final chapter of “Enter the Sandboy” is posted! I also put some author notes (warning: spoilers) in the review response thread.

Author notes (Warning: SPOILERS) Lynn Senior’s murmured comment to the central air conditioner—“You hear me, baby? Hold together”—is what Han Solo says to the Millennium Falcon in The Empire Strikes Back. The zebra in Lola’s nightmare is a nod to Phineas and Ferb, in which Candace sometimes sees a talking zebra in her dreams. Lynn’s nightmare about an evil baseball team wearing clown makeup was inspired by the 1970s street gang film The Warriors, in which one of the gangs wears baseball uniforms and face paint and carries bats. The bit about a badly ventilated pipe making a banging noise when the water is running is a real thing, which I experienced at my parents’ old house. (Warning: TMI) Lincoln’s sleep-sex is inspired by a few events from my own life. I once woke up to find myself making out with my wife, who’d had no idea that I was asleep when I initiated it. According to her, I’ve done a few other things like that, which I was not aware of at the time. Four square and pickleball are both real games. According to the internet, perennial ryegrass is a recommended lawn grass for the northern U.S. It is said to be hardy and able to endure a lot of foot traffic, which makes it ideal for the Loud family’s yard. During a typical night of sleep, we go through multiple REM cycles, and each one includes a larger proportion of REM sleep than the previous one. As a result, you spend more time dreaming later in the night than you do soon after you fall asleep. This is why only some of the girls were affected by the sound of the hose pipe each night, whereas many of them were affected by the sex sounds made by Lincoln and his bed companions, which always happened later in the night (at least until the hose pipe mystery was solved).

From GeoSoul on October 19, 2019 Oh yes indeed!