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Okay, I had to show up just to call attention to that title! Although that one’s kind of amazing too, in an almost poetic way.

Jeez, you put a lot of thought into this, @InvidiaRed Next time I need to name a story, Imma steal your brain for an hour.

Thanks for all the feedback, folks! Some of these ideas are great. (I really want to use “Hell in a Handbasket” some time.)

Yay! Another review for Charlotte and the crew in Tales of the Starbound Glory, this time from @InBrightestDay. From InBrightestDay on July 14, 2019 Okay, full disclosure, given some of your other stories and the name of the ship...I actually thought this was going to be about space pirates before I started reading. You still have your flair for action, and the attack on the French ship is visceral, not to mention that bit where, while disabling Abraham's hands, Charlotte ends up slashing him in a very...personal place. He had it coming, but holy shit did that make me cringe. Related to that, when Charlotte throws him out onto the deck, all the other crewmen attack him. While I'm sure they know he's a perennial screwup, they don't necessarily know what he's done this time, only that their captain saw fit to punish him violently, and that's all they need to know. I bring this up because while there were female pirates (Anne Bonny being one of the most famous), they were a definite minority, to the point that the ship's contract sometimes outright forbade women from being onboard. Charlotte's male crew, meanwhile, is fiercely loyal to her, and I'd imagine there's a really interesting story about how she won their respect. Charlotte felt her heart racing. She didn't understand. Not completely. This actually made me laugh, because that was kind of my reaction. I mean, Isolde was almost raped, and then was in the mood really fast. I'm not complaining, mind you, since the sexual content was quite well done and pretty hot. I did also like that bit where Charlotte attempts to flip across Isolde and ends up missing the bed and falling on the floor. I think we've all misjudged where the bed ends at some point in our lives, so that made me laugh. *** Okay, full disclosure, given some of your other stories and the name of the ship...I actually thought this was going to be about space pirates before I started reading. Lol. I certainly thought about making it space pirates, but a certain someone, I thought, would enjoy it as historical pirates. I certainly did writing it. . You still have your flair for action, and the attack on the French ship is visceral, not to mention that bit where, while disabling Abraham's hands, Charlotte ends up slashing him in a very...personal place. He had it coming, but holy shit did that make me cringe. Related to that, when Charlotte throws him out onto the deck, all the other crewmen attack him. While I'm sure they know he's a perennial screwup, they don't necessarily know what he's done this time, only that their captain saw fit to punish him violently, and that's all they need to know. I'm glad my action scenes still have the attention capturing hold. Lol. I enjoyed writing it in the quick, rapid pacing with bloody violence, despite the research into cannon fire and the chain shot. I'm glad it made you cringe, it was definitely meant to. As for the crew, I definitely wanted to show that most are unconditionally loyal to Charlotte. Always a few whi would be problems. This so that eventually i might be able to expland as they come to. I did also like that bit where Charlotte attempts to flip across Isolde and ends up missing the bed and falling on the floor. I think we've all misjudged where the bed ends at some point in our lives, so that made me laugh. Lol. Yep. I read somewhere that mistakes work for a first time scene and really felt that it works in terms of Charlotte's character. Lol.

Chapter 14 (Straight to Hell) is posted after a very long hiatus.

I really like @CloverReef “Hug it out” idea. It sounds like something the parent would actually say but totally fits the nature of the story idea.

I actually like “Tension” as well.

The Sibling Predicament A Steamy Solution Hug It Out Though I do like “Tension” because it’s nice and simple. So if you don’t really like it you can just use the word, or the word ‘tense’ combined with something else.

It’s so damn nice to be writing again after such a long-assed drought.