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Pass the brain bleach, please?

Funny you should lead with a Hamlet reference, since Eparlegna’s apparently rather fond of those when eating people.

Thank you! The second chapter is always going to be short, but I’m glad to see I was able to address some of your other concerns.

Actually, I think I’m doing alright with regards to reviews so far. I have three chapters up and 9 reviews, so if my luck holds I might have 27 reviews by the time I’m done, only a third of which will be from you. Thank you! And don’t worry about making me feel bad. You wrote what you called a “sexualized horror” story, so aside from the niche audience who would have been enjoying Luzurial’s pain, it was probably supposed to be upsetting. And hey, you’ve enjoyed this story so far, and as I’ve said elsewhere, I wouldn’t have asked to write this if I hadn’t felt so amazingly bad for her. Judging by other reviews, it’s a symphony with a few sections playing off key, but nonetheless I appreciate the compliment! I feel like he can’t really do anything about it. If fictional characters could protest their fates, you’d probably have more to worry about from Luzurial, Lily Flynn, Wonder Woman, Jill Valentine, Private Vasquez, Cassie Cage, Kylie, Pan… You’d have one or two men, and then a long line of badass women waiting to kick your ass. And no, I didn’t actually read any of those, but the summaries and titles are generally enough for me to figure out what’s going to happen. Heh. Also: Ew.

Lol...Ned Flanders trapped in the mirror. I seriously cannot stop laughing. If I ever decide to do a parody of my own story that would be the way to go. On a more serious note it is good that ghost comes across as evil. Basically there is meant to be no good redeeming qualites there, but just a very bored ghost that suddenly can take out all his built up anger on his poor innocent victim. John is very much a decent guy that normally would never take advantage of his sister, but the ghost is working hard of convincing him that Ronja dig the thought to have sex with him. You can bet the ghost eventually succeed. I am very proud of the master-trigger, and there will of course be plenty of hypnotic triggers coming up but that one is very nice. Getting Ronja to participate in her degradation is an obvious way for the ghost to progress things. The thought that only anonymous dudes on the internet will be customers is of course bound to be proven wrong, that chapter is not written yet but I so look forward to that scene. Having alternatives gives me as author more options. Basically the story contain enough material and kink for a number of separate stories,, but adding it together in the same story gives something that I hope is greater than the parts. Great that you liked hypno-sex scene.

I’m back from vacation, and ready to start planning the next one.

Slow and steady wins the race. I think I just took my first baby steps to be an Author. ISBNs Checkmarked.

Been debating about posting some of the sketches I've done for some of my characters... Not sure, though...