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It's been a year now since the plot bunnies pinned me down with my own bedsheets, jumped all over my face, and demanded that I write an epic Frozen story. Rather than suffer the Death of a Thousand Hops, I relented and started writing. Now, 372 days and 15 chapters later, the end is in sight. So far, I've given the bunnies everything they want: action, romance, mystery, comedy, drama, drinking songs, sexual innuendo, sexual not-so-innuendo, the works. All they demand now is a spectacular grand finale, the tying up of loose ends, a bit more gettin'-it-on, and some laughter and tears, and then they'll let me go. I will accede to their demands. But I know the truth: that they are almost certainly lying their floppy little ears off. I don't think they have any intention of letting me go--I think they are going to make me write a SEQUEL. Oh, God, I think one of them just hopped by and saw me posting this message instead of writing chapter 16. Gotta go!

It's not just because she's human. I think Caolfionn says something about it, that their love gave Aneurin too much power, and the blood curse didn't like that so it nipped it in the bud if that makes any sense. True love is power, (as cheesy as that sounds) it was the same reason why Baba Yaga couldn't bother them, Baba Yaga is powerless to effect those who are truly in love according to legend

end it with the one sister having such an intense orgasm she explodes in a lethal shower of deadly icicles that kill everyone in the kingdom...take that plot bunnies! I ain't scared of you, I eat bunnies for dinner, seriously I just had roast rabbit the other day

Let it go!

Long time reader, first time poster… With regard to the "Wow, I think someone's..." line near the end some people are wondering about - It seems like Kayla is just surprised at what's gotten into Jack and is trying to say "someone's excited" but can't complete the sentences due to the sex experience. Jack's mental anger at the situations with his friends has so enveloped him he zones out once again during sex, and he is literally trying to fuck his anger away at that point. When someone has anger sex it creates an entirely different level of feeling for both people, and you can easily lose control of what you actually want to have happen while you get wrapped up in the feeling. People can cease caring about partners while they're getting off and it can be really scary for the one on the receiving end. Jack seems just fed up with everything and "punishing" anyone he's with including himself when he enters that mood. There's also the random thought about handcuffs in the middle of it possibly indicating a desire of more excitement, pain, and control over the situations. A very long time ago there was a line of thought that Jack really wasn't such a great guy as he appeared. It seems that over the past chapters he's simply out letting his frustrations about not being in control and able to fix and hold things together as he thinks it should be. Jack is seeing everyone else's faults while attempting to avoid confronting the fact that he shares part of the blame whether he instigated it or not.