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So, I promised you an embarrassing review in here. Don't judge me... wait; you already do. So, it's whatevs... For the longest, there's never been much writing that... arouses me. I might read a few scenes and be all "ooh, that's kinda hot" but nothing more. Maybe a "I wish that would happen to me" type feeling. And almost always, I end up blushing, anyway! This is may have been the second or third time I've read something to where I had to close my legs to calm myself! Dear gods, that was well written! And when I said I could feel what Valentina felt... I meant it! Just... ugh; I hate going into details because I'm blushing just thinking about it! The voyeur scene... loved! The garden scene; holy hell, the garden scene! *flails* This is so good; for the first time being on the site, I wouldn't mind it if this story was PWP! Valentina is a great character. I really enjoy that she thinks things through and understands the consequences of her actions. While reading, I really wanted her to not get in trouble for what she did but I knew that in reality, something like poisoning forty men and then burning their bodies wouldn't go unnoticed! I love elves, now. My God, why have I neglected elven stories?! Not to say that any other story about elves would be like this one but it just makes me think of what all I'm missing!

I just posted my chapter. Probably correctly. This is the first sex-free story I've ever posted on AFF (although it's definitely not for children). So Chrissy, thanks for inspiring me to take a stroll outside my comfort zone. And thanks, of course, for organizing this thing.

Author: ChrissyQuinn Title: Heart of the Forest Summary: Valentina has been the cunning woman for the village of Laeth for years. She never expected her neighbors to turn on her, or that she would be left to the mercy of the elves that dwell in the heart of the forest. Feedback: greatly appreciated. Fandom: Original! Pairing: M/F, MMMM/F, M/M Rating: Adult + (might change if feedback warrants it) Warnings: Violence, Bigotry, Solo, 3plus, fingering, oral, exhibitionism, het, Rape, Solo story or chaptered story: Chaptered URL: http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600107932 Author: ChrissyQuinn Title: Eyes of Fire Summary: Two Years after moving to the idyllic town off the Ersland Coast known commonly as "The Shore," Valentina finds herself running for her life as she desperately tries to free her lost love Aneurin from the clutches of the power that consumes him...with the ruthless commander of the Redcaps, Yorwrath, in toe. Feedback: greatly appreciated. Fandom: Original! Pairing: M/F, MMMM/F, M/M Rating: Adult + Warnings: Violence, Bigotry, Solo, 3plus, fingering, oral, exhibitionism, het, Rape, Solo story or chaptered story: Chaptered URL: http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600108114 Author: ChrissyQuinn Title: Song of the Seer Summary: Valentina is still caught between two worlds, neither accepted by the humans nor elves. Months have passed since she took shelter with her lovers in the hidden grove. However, as always tragedy nips at Valentina's heels as refuge is devastated when the Knights of the Morning Lily attack to continue their holy extermination of the elves. The attack serves as a catalyst forcing Valentina to continue on a blind journey to free her lover Aneurin from the Swynwr's grasp as the situation for elves in Ersland sinks to all time lows. Feedback: greatly appreciated. Fandom: Original! Pairing: M/F, MMMM/F, M/M Rating: Adult + Warnings: Violence, Bigotry, Solo, 3plus, fingering, oral, exhibitionism, het, Rape, Violence, Menage Solo story or chaptered story: Chaptered URL: http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600108315

That's what I was aiming for. I didn't want anything definitive. I've heard stories about Becky for almost 50 years, many of them different (and most involving alcohol), so I tried to convey that confusion. I had at least one character witness something that they'd swear was supernatural, but that they'd still have a hard time convincing anyone of later "You had to be there..." so that a day, a year, even 20 years later, my characters would be telling the same kind of stories that I grew up hearing. My brother-in-law had some to drink, went to the cemetery by the mall and was scared shitless. He won't go back. A writing friend from town read the first draft of this and asked, "Have I told you my story?" Seems her brother and a friend also went to the cemetery by the mall and said they took a flag off of Becky's grave. When they got to the friend's house, his mother said, "Becky called, and said you have something of hers!" I was also trying to add humor, and with things like the sign, stuff just pops into my head and I go with it.

God, she's relentless...so I posted my poem...be kind

All Hallow's Eve by ThinLizzie, just a halloween poem

Alrighty, I'm gonna post my review stuffs here. Ghosts Aren't Real, says the Vampire to the Werewolf - ChrissyQuinn I laughed so hard at this. The Harry Potter and Doctor Who jokes just made this all the better Feed the Land - BronxWench A sad ending, and I wanna know more about the world and characters, but well done. Is this part of another series by you, or straight up original? Becky's Grave - JoeLong I was hoping for more interaction with the ghosty. I do, however, get that this is part of another story, so you probably can't do that and it still fit in. Girls Who Wear Glasses - Magusfang Dang man. Well done. You overachiever you. I like the concept, and how it all plays out. Can't wait to read the chapters that you are making about these characters. The Phone - Desiderius_Price I did skip reading this one cuz I don't want spoilers. Gonna hafta come back to it later. The Glory Hole to Hell - C.L.Mustafic The bigotry in this makes me wince, but the fact that it is a crucial part of the story makes it all better. Through it we begin to hate those characters, and feel a sense of justice when they die. Good job. I also find it sad that they only have one night to spend together, and most of it is spent getting victims, covering up the deaths, and reliving their own deaths. So sad. Fucking Halloween Party - JayDee This was funnier than the summary let on. It does leave me wanting to know more about her though. We get snippets of her past, but I wanna know more. I think I'm gonna hafta look up those other stories. From the Ashes - Tahn Yeah...moving on... Snap - GeorgeGlass Holy crap dude! That was freaky, good job! Nightmare's Dream - Perverted_Pages Wow, gruesome. Also, ouch! Death has an Ugly Face - Tahn ...I really hope everyone knows who Vincent Price is.

Ah, miss meaning you didn't read it (skipped) rather than the story missed. This Halloween chapter fits in with the overall story, and will be included as a future chapter when the timeline gets to late October. No sex takes place in the Halloween chapter, but the characters make reference to sex that has happened in earlier chapters (yet to be published)