angeldust Posted September 3, 2014 Report Share Posted September 3, 2014 It's that ungrateful old priest, Max fixes him and he ups and dies on him after inserting a fork in the toaster to get his bread out. Actually it's no one for a while as fangface has skipped school again. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Rescue25 Posted September 3, 2014 Report Share Posted September 3, 2014 It's that ungrateful old priest, Max fixes him and he ups and dies on him after inserting a fork in the toaster to get his bread out. Actually it's no one for a while as fangface has skipped school again. Or in the parlance of the military AWOL. :spank: B Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BigMan7307 Posted September 4, 2014 Report Share Posted September 4, 2014 He's told us repeatedly he's a sadistic ass, lol..... we all knew that coming into it, but, he's got a hell of a knack for keeping us engaged in the series, all of them. If it weren't for us falling in love with the characters, we couldn't care less about him still writing. What's scary, I've bounced back to that "other" site and read a few other authors.... ty Gemini for letting us in on that little gem you had been keeping hidden P.O.I. is almost as good as Magus, almost. Reading through a few others, I've kinda rediscovered some other authors that weren't as affected with the rules and still posting(good filler in between GITG/NorthStar chapters) I read because I like the storyline, where things may be going with them, and wondering what new twists they will put in. I can't be loyal to just one site for that, too many quality authors out there that don't all post to the same places. I do, however, always check on the status of my favorites, while still looking for other gems out there. No one author can satisfy everyone, occasionally, a precious few can bring my personal emotions into the story. ie. June getting shot, we all felt the pain, i'm pretty sure there more than a couple actual tears dropped over that. in P.O.I.'s series, I felt Guy's pain when he caught Heather and Derek, i'd have probably done the same as he did. In JAshley13's series, you can feel the love between Jack and Kayla, how he'd do anything to protect her. There are many others out there that can pull that same kind of emotion, not many can do it in two different series at the same time... Magus, you truly are a marvel, and we all eagerly await the next steps in the journey with Max and the Girls. :beer: COJimmyV 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hundybuns Posted September 5, 2014 Report Share Posted September 5, 2014 BigMan have a look at the stories by Hard93 on the old site. The 1 I like is called The Ten of Them. Not much sex but the story is pretty good. His other stories are not bad either. Another good site is the Mystic Wolf Pub. Magusfang is there as well. Eric Storm has some good stories there as well. Just. A little note case you and anybody else want a look see while waiting for the master to post his next chapter. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Gemini Posted September 5, 2014 Report Share Posted September 5, 2014 He's told us repeatedly he's a sadistic ass, lol..... we all knew that coming into it, but, he's got a hell of a knack for keeping us engaged in the series, all of them. If it weren't for us falling in love with the characters, we couldn't care less about him still writing. What's scary, I've bounced back to that "other" site and read a few other authors.... ty Gemini for letting us in on that little gem you had been keeping hidden P.O.I. is almost as good as Magus, almost. Reading through a few others, I've kinda rediscovered some other authors that weren't as affected with the rules and still posting(good filler in between GITG/NorthStar chapters) I read because I like the storyline, where things may be going with them, and wondering what new twists they will put in. I can't be loyal to just one site for that, too many quality authors out there that don't all post to the same places. I do, however, always check on the status of my favorites, while still looking for other gems out there. No one author can satisfy everyone, occasionally, a precious few can bring my personal emotions into the story. ie. June getting shot, we all felt the pain, i'm pretty sure there more than a couple actual tears dropped over that. in P.O.I.'s series, I felt Guy's pain when he caught Heather and Derek, i'd have probably done the same as he did. In JAshley13's series, you can feel the love between Jack and Kayla, how he'd do anything to protect her. There are many others out there that can pull that same kind of emotion, not many can do it in two different series at the same time... Magus, you truly are a marvel, and we all eagerly await the next steps in the journey with Max and the Girls. :beer: Your welcome, I thought some of you guys would like reading it while waiting for the next chapters of magus' stories. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest usnretr Posted September 5, 2014 Report Share Posted September 5, 2014 keep up the good work.. cant wait for the next chapter of girls in the grass..(14) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jelad Posted September 5, 2014 Report Share Posted September 5, 2014 on Mystic Wolfpub Eric Storm has a story called Woodward Academy. it is well written and a a developing story. He post once a month for the story and each year is a book. he is on year 4 now. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hundybuns Posted September 5, 2014 Report Share Posted September 5, 2014 Yes, that is a good set of stories. Another story is called Dragonseekers. Another one is called A New Beginning, by Kenneth Hammond on the old site, it has just about everything. If anyone likes magic check out The Artifact. At least it keeps me busy while waiting for the next installments. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BigMan7307 Posted September 6, 2014 Report Share Posted September 6, 2014 Thank you hundy, actually, I did the same with Ten of Them as I did with BITG, GITG, Northstar, and Going Home. There's times where I don't have net like Magus, so I make sure I have a little selection to bounce between. It was actually Ten of Them that started me reading in that section, then along came Magus and blew most of them away. Ironically, it isn't the erotic part that pulls me in, it's the actual story behind it. I would have been happy with just Max and Emma and seeing their romance blossom without the others. Don't get me wrong, I do like the additions, but, I guess I'm a little "traditional" when it comes to love and romance. I will definitely be looking at the other suggestions too while awaiting our favorite to drop the next bombshell on us. Thank you all so much for the recommendations. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hundybuns Posted September 6, 2014 Report Share Posted September 6, 2014 You are very welcome. I agree with you about Max and Emma, except I believe that Amy and Alice are a big part as well. I think it is because they were basically in the story from the start. I like the way Magus has Max be loyal to what Emma wants. I hope that as the series ends we get to see if the question that Marge asked Max way back in Boy in the Grass. About how he sees his future with her girls turns out. I spend a lot of time in various doctor`s offices with my father and having a lot of stories to read stored on my tablet gives me something to read Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
magusfang Posted September 7, 2014 Author Report Share Posted September 7, 2014 Ok, not sure if I should tell you. But I'm killing off Emma,........psych! MAn I'm such an ass Ok should have 14 up soon, my girls have been taking special delight in distracting me - not that I mind! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jelad Posted September 7, 2014 Report Share Posted September 7, 2014 this has nothing to do with magusfang but has anyone heard of a story called Genie Chronicles? it was a story posted on xnxx by a person who said she was not the author and found it on another site. the story stopped and it has actually spawned 2 more stories with different characters but I would like to know how the original story ended. If anyone could give me some info. I will be eternally gratefull. also has anyone read the author Captius on Watpadd? he has three stories going and has even started rewritten ETERNAL AWAKENING. he is a good writer but be warned he doesn't have any sex in his stories. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest spaced_monkey Posted September 7, 2014 Report Share Posted September 7, 2014 the author never finished Genie Chronicles, sadly one of the spinoffs was also very good but suffered the same fate Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BigMan7307 Posted September 7, 2014 Report Share Posted September 7, 2014 Good thing we love your writing you sadistic ass...... lol, can't wait to see what happens. I liked Capitus, until he just up and decides to take off, no forwarding address, with the damn story half finished. While you all were talking about Genies... "A Guy and His....." by pars001 is a decent series, nowhere near the caliber of Magus, but, a pseudo effective diversion. Sadly, it's on that other site, shorter chapters but, decent..... In other words MAGUS.... HURRY UP AND POST IT ALREADY!!!!!!!!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Rescue25 Posted September 7, 2014 Report Share Posted September 7, 2014 Sorry to hear that Emma is destined to the can. She and Max are special. You are causing a lot of lost man hours by having people (including me) continually checking for the next chapter. B Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
magusfang Posted September 7, 2014 Author Report Share Posted September 7, 2014 I was just teasing, can't kill Emma off, too vital to the storyline Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hundybuns Posted September 7, 2014 Report Share Posted September 7, 2014 You`re lucky I was going to send Nick and TJ from Northstar after you if you killed Emma off. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
angeldust Posted September 7, 2014 Report Share Posted September 7, 2014 Well guys & dolls I am leaving this site as it does not seem to be for me I will delete the two stories that I posted as they have a low read and no comments/reviews. I wish you all good fortune and joy in life, for yourselves and those that you love. May the Sun always shine on your shoulders, the Wind always be at your back, may the road rise up to meet you and may you be in Heaven an hour before The Devil even knows that you are dead. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Rescue25 Posted September 7, 2014 Report Share Posted September 7, 2014 You`re lucky I was going to send Nick and TJ from Northstar after you if you killed Emma off. EXCELLENT! Wish I had thought of that. Well guys & dolls I am leaving this site as it does not seem to be for me I will delete the two stories that I posted as they have a low read and no comments/reviews. I wish you all good fortune and joy in life, for yourselves and those that you love. May the Sun always shine on your shoulders, the Wind always be at your back, may the road rise up to meet you and may you be in Heaven an hour before The Devil even knows that you are dead. Thanks for the wakeup.. Very honestly I have been so focused on Mangusfang's stories that I haven't even looked that much around this site. I "assume" that you are the angeldust that has 2 copywrited stories in the sci-fi category. I have downloaded them to read at a later time. A search for you name brings 5 returns. B Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BigMan7307 Posted September 7, 2014 Report Share Posted September 7, 2014 Well guys & dolls I am leaving this site as it does not seem to be for me I will delete the two stories that I posted as they have a low read and no comments/reviews. I wish you all good fortune and joy in life, for yourselves and those that you love. May the Sun always shine on your shoulders, the Wind always be at your back, may the road rise up to meet you and may you be in Heaven an hour before The Devil even knows that you are dead. I knew I had read your first one before.... just didn't know that you were Ed itor on that other site, if any others have posted any, please feel free to pm me the links to yours as well, I'm always open to reading different types, some may not be my type and I may not follow as closely, but, I give everyone the chance, never know when you'll find another gem that you didn't know about until you're slapped with it. Don't give up on those series, they are really good, just a little more character development, and you'll be right there with many others that I follow. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
magusfang Posted September 7, 2014 Author Report Share Posted September 7, 2014 Sorry to see you go, I can see your point about the site. Fan fiction isn't really my thing so I tend to stay in the originals archive. Pm me your new site. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
angeldust Posted September 7, 2014 Report Share Posted September 7, 2014 Yeah I have a fan fiction I started back in the 90s but never finished as my daughter out grew HP. Here's a link to a story that I had started to post here, let me know what you think. http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600107333 Hundybuns 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hundybuns Posted September 8, 2014 Report Share Posted September 8, 2014 Angeldust I just read your story and I must say it is one of the best stories I have read. I love sword and sorcery stories and this is excellent. I have been reading these type of stories since I found out about them in the early 70`s. I hope you decide to someday continue the story, if you do please let me know as I really would like to read more. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
angeldust Posted September 8, 2014 Report Share Posted September 8, 2014 Thank-you kind Sir, at least it occupied some time awaiting fangface. (hint, hint: It's been a week since you promised.) I have a few more chapters written so keep an eye out , but I don't want to hijack magus' thread. Okay group seeing as you didn't want to pony up a ransom, how about a bounty on his hide than? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest KragonT sal Posted September 8, 2014 Report Share Posted September 8, 2014 this has nothing to do with magusfang but has anyone heard of a story called Genie Chronicles? it was a story posted on xnxx by a person who said she was not the author and found it on another site. the story stopped and it has actually spawned 2 more stories with different characters but I would like to know how the original story ended. If anyone could give me some info. I will be eternally gratefull. also has anyone read the author Captius on Watpadd? he has three stories going and has even started rewritten ETERNAL AWAKENING. he is a good writer but be warned he doesn't have any sex in his stories.I found Captius shortly after I found Magus and I read most of the Eternal Trilogy earlier this year. The original was good even with the erotic scenes the new version is just as good and what he has written so far I am loving. Magus Have you ever thought of trying to get some of your work published? I know BITG and GITG most likely couldnt but your Gone Home storie is phenomenal. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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