Review responses/votes for "Within the Lies"

[Guest Dark Serpent Cat]

I suck at challenges, as you can see. Remember, the challenge that inspired WTL was for a HP/DM fic... I can't keep to the "guidelines" of a challenge to save my life ;; lol Ah well...

But yes, your challenge/request did help to inspire what I'm working on

That would be interesting. I'm willing to try reading just about anything, except kids having sex. That doesn't sit well with me at all. I prefer they be 18 or older, and 16 is probably as young as I'm willing to let them be... though Ginny in the fic will be grabbing herself a mate, she won't be doing anything sexual until she's 16 or older... I know back in the "old days" girls were getting married at the age of 13 and whatnot, but... I dunno... Just seems weird.

Well if that is the case have you checked the "searching for stories?" lately because I also have one for Harry Potter there and you might get inspired by those to though really it is mostly pairings I am searching for

[SilverMyst]

Charlie with a pair of dragons or dragon wings which will turn into real wings in his true form

... Sometimes you scare me Oo; You haven't had anyone talk to you about these things IRL have you? <.< Because either you're a RL friend, or we're too close to being on the same wavelength to be "normal"... Then again, no one has EVER accused me of being "normal" lol

[SilverMyst]

or perhaps a tiny little dark mark tattoo on his rear that Voldemort can use to keep track of Harry's vitals and instead of burning when he wants to talk to Harry it sends something that hits Harry's prostate and arouses Harry

That... would be freaking HILARIOUS!!! But Harry could get revenge. There is something special about the bed in Syren's vault and Harry's mates are going to find out... the hard way XD lol

[Guest Dark Serpent Cat]

... Sometimes you scare me Oo; You haven't had anyone talk to you about these things IRL have you? <.< Because either you're a RL friend, or we're too close to being on the same wavelength to be "normal"... Then again, no one has EVER accused me of being "normal" lol

we must share the same wave length because I honestly don't know anyone in RI who writes fanfics...... well except me, myself and I

Oh and being normal is vastly over rated (Halloween town movie one of my favorite qoutes)

Maybe I'm psychic after all growing up I would have small insignaficent dreams that would later come true after I forgot about them until it happened, naw not likely

[Guest Dark Serpent Cat]

Actually I think the reason why I suggested it is because if you look back with fanfics that have Harry being a creature with wings or Charlie being a dragon (which by the way is one thing that is over used but I still like it) is that when they have wings it turns into tattoo's

That... would be freaking HILARIOUS!!! But Harry could get revenge. There is something special about the bed in Syren's vault and Harry's mates are going to find out... the hard way XD lol

Of course he would I would expect no less (mwhahahah)

By the way do you know what happened to Raven she hadn't been on here in awhile and I'm starting to get a tad worried

[Guest Dark Serpent Cat]

by the way have you ever thought about doing a fic that happens around the end of Harry's six year when the Death Eaters enter Hogwarts that involves Fenrir finding his three mates (It is not to uncommon for a strong wolf to have two mates but it is the first time there has been three mates for a wolf)

Remus, Bill and Harry and he bites both Bill and Harry before using his wolf abilities to have Remus help him take them away to do with them as he likes (in other word f until they can't feel anything below their waist)

The bite ends up turning Bill but if you don't want Harry being a werewolf then the bite ends up freeing any creature inheritance suppressors that Dumbledore put on Harry

this only works when the last introduction of creature blood was many generations back and Dumbledore believes he is helping Harry by doing it because of the whole Ministry issues on creature

thus forcing Harry into going into a creature inheritance then where he turns out to be a Lamia or Succubus who needs to feed off of sex but can't just be with his destined mates because of the drain

He then ends up willingly joining the Dark side for some purpose or going nuetral this could work as the plot to the Dark Slut fic you are thinking of making

I have had the pairing idea stuck in my head as my mind kept wandering towards the end of sixth book and as I began mentioning it on here it just evolved to a suggestion

Oh and maybe having Harry gain the inheritance through the whole Slytherin thing and the horcrux also made Voldemort into his soul mate and the cause for a real prophecy that says that he is the only one who can kill Voldemort but he also has to die now even though Harry has soul mates his whole creature part forces him to have sex with others but his soul mates do get some benefits that you can decide mostly like Harry taking priority in them and they have slight immunity to the energy drain mostly they don't get as drained as others

[SilverMyst]

we must share the same wave length because I honestly don't know anyone in RI who writes fanfics...... well except me, myself and I

Oh and being normal is vastly over rated (Halloween town movie one of my favorite qoutes)

Maybe I'm psychic after all growing up I would have small insignaficent dreams that would later come true after I forgot about them until it happened, naw not likely

I LOVE Halloween Town! And yes, that quote is definitely a fave <3 I can't wait until the movie comes on again, just so I can re-watch it <3 I don't watch much TV (I like books better), but when I do... I want it to be worth while <3

[SilverMyst]

Actually I think the reason why I suggested it is because if you look back with fanfics that have Harry being a creature with wings or Charlie being a dragon (which by the way is one thing that is over used but I still like it) is that when they have wings it turns into tattoo's

He's not going to be a dragon, I can tell you that but...well, you'll see XD lol He will have dragon-like wings though, and an affinity with reptiles, but that's all I'm saying...

Of course he would I would expect no less (mwhahahah)

By the way do you know what happened to Raven she hadn't been on here in awhile and I'm starting to get a tad worried

Definitely lol

I miss Raven too! I've actually been quite concerned, but didn't want to come off as overprotective/mother hen... which I am RL to my friends, so it's no surprise that it would transfer over to online ^^;; lol ... I hope our little Raven is okay *hugs pillow*

[SilverMyst]

by the way have you ever thought about doing a fic that happens around the end of Harry's six year when the Death Eaters enter Hogwarts that involves Fenrir finding his three mates (It is not to uncommon for a strong wolf to have two mates but it is the first time there has been three mates for a wolf)

Remus, Bill and Harry and he bites both Bill and Harry before using his wolf abilities to have Remus help him take them away to do with them as he likes (in other word f until they can't feel anything below their waist)

The bite ends up turning Bill but if you don't want Harry being a werewolf then the bite ends up freeing any creature inheritance suppressors that Dumbledore put on Harry

this only works when the last introduction of creature blood was many generations back and Dumbledore believes he is helping Harry by doing it because of the whole Ministry issues on creature

thus forcing Harry into going into a creature inheritance then where he turns out to be a Lamia or Succubus who needs to feed off of sex but can't just be with his destined mates because of the drain

He then ends up willingly joining the Dark side for some purpose or going nuetral this could work as the plot to the Dark Slut fic you are thinking of making

I have had the pairing idea stuck in my head as my mind kept wandering towards the end of sixth book and as I began mentioning it on here it just evolved to a suggestion

Oh and maybe having Harry gain the inheritance through the whole Slytherin thing and the horcrux also made Voldemort into his soul mate and the cause for a real prophecy that says that he is the only one who can kill Voldemort but he also has to die now even though Harry has soul mates his whole creature part forces him to have sex with others but his soul mates do get some benefits that you can decide mostly like Harry taking priority in them and they have slight immunity to the energy drain mostly they don't get as drained as others

Ooooh, that's an interesting idea <.< It's got my muse thinking, that's for sure XD lol Hmmm... Let me think on that. I might have to put this other idea on the back burner anyway since my muse doesn't like it right now.

As long as the fickle little thing keeps liking WTL, I'll be happy XD lol

I like Succubus fics, actually, and have been wanting to do one... and there are some kinky plot bunnies that wont let me be that would like to incorporate some things into a fic, and having a Succubus Harry would blend quite well...

Would it be wrong to make a fic that's mainly PWP just to get the kinky bunnies to leave WTL alone and let me keep a plot to it? XD lol

[Guest Dark Serpent Cat]

I'm fine with that for now but you should probably post the next chapter first also if you could give it at least some plot like porn with little plot I would really appreciate it

By the way a good Pwlp would be Flight of the Phoenix which is a threesome between Harry,Draco and Dudley

[Guest SilvertoolazytologinXDlol]

I'm fine with that for now but you should probably post the next chapter first also if you could give it at least some plot like porn with little plot I would really appreciate it

By the way a good Pwlp would be Flight of the Phoenix which is a threesome between Harry,Draco and Dudley

My muse wont let me do a PWP really... which is kind of sad. It always adds in some kind of plot, or twist, when I really just want to do something smexy for my entertainment. Go figure. It's all good though XD lol

And I'm halfway done with the next chapter, and apparently I have this weekend off, so yay! I hope to have it up either Saturday or Sunday... probably will be unbetaed at first, but it's all good <3 My beta is busy and currently working on this last chapter I posted, so I don't want to overload her :3 ~ tee hee

[Guest Dark Serpent Cat]

My muse wont let me do a PWP really... which is kind of sad. It always adds in some kind of plot, or twist, when I really just want to do something smexy for my entertainment. Go figure. It's all good though XD lol

And I'm halfway done with the next chapter, and apparently I have this weekend off, so yay! I hope to have it up either Saturday or Sunday... probably will be unbetaed at first, but it's all good <3 My beta is busy and currently working on this last chapter I posted, so I don't want to overload her :3 ~ tee hee

Well that is what is lovely about a Porn With Little Plot

You see like you I have the same issue however by adding plot to a Porn with little Plot I come to allow both my muse's be settled seriously it might help just reading Flight of the Phoenix to understand what I am trying to say

http://hp.adultfanfi...hp?no=600023413

by the way if you could do some Harry consensual Dursley slash I would appreciate it such as redeeming Vernon and/or Dudley or Harry uses them as his feeding source at first using his pheromones to get them to want him and then having their sexual encounters make them easier for Harry to control so that he can get away with stuff

[Guest Dark Serpent Cat]

Besides I think your present story is promising to be what I want the challenge to look like with a more even distribution of the porn/plot ration so if you could do something similar to this story but making it so when Harry does join into the Dark there are a ton of lemons but still plot I would appreciate it

[SilverMyst]

Besides I think your present story is promising to be what I want the challenge to look like with a more even distribution of the porn/plot ration so if you could do something similar to this story but making it so when Harry does join into the Dark there are a ton of lemons but still plot I would appreciate it

My muse is working on a plot, so currently the plot/porn ratio is looking like it will be rather good XD lol My muse is very some happy right now, but I'm going to make it focus on WTL so I can get chapter six (my favorite chapter number, because it rhymes with "sex" XD loL) done and then start on this project

Though be warned, if Harry is going to be a good little slut for the Dark, there are probably a few pairings you might not like... Though I have this mental picture of Voldemort giving Snape to Harry as a "pet" XD lmao And Harry Dominating the fuck out of him. Literally XD lol But Harry will remain a bottom... I can see Harry topping someone only if he's being topped in turn... But I doubt that will happen, but you never know lol

Hey! Did you see my new poll?

[Guest Dark Serpent Cat]

That's fine after all when there are whore Harry's there are always going to be pairings people don't like I just skip those

Yes I did see the poll and you forgot a few things

Costumes (and by this I mean from simple bunny ears to firemen and policemen uniforms I think I really like roleplaying oh and gladiator)

Chains and handcuffs

stripper pole (Oh come on I can't believe I am not the only one to think of Harry doing a pole dance)

Cross dressing (I'm not a big fan of this but it is alright sometimes)

All of they above (I am not the type who could just pick one)

I say just give Harry a room of requirement for his kinky needs because someone had to of created that Hogwarts room so why not just make it Syren and it would make sense if she is from a different dimension and can bend them to suite her needs though limiting it to certain sizes

this way you can make her vault even more special

However I have a feeling you already thought of that

[SilverMyst]

That's fine after all when there are whore Harry's there are always going to be pairings people don't like I just skip those

Yes I did see the poll and you forgot a few things

Costumes (and by this I mean from simple bunny ears to firemen and policemen uniforms I think I really like roleplaying oh and gladiator)

Chains and handcuffs

stripper pole (Oh come on I can't believe I am not the only one to think of Harry doing a pole dance)

Cross dressing (I'm not a big fan of this but it is alright sometimes)

All of they above (I am not the type who could just pick one)

I say just give Harry a room of requirement for his kinky needs because someone had to of created that Hogwarts room so why not just make it Syren and it would make sense if she is from a different dimension and can bend them to suite her needs though limiting it to certain sizes

this way you can make her vault even more special

However I have a feeling you already thought of that

Fixed the poll

And I have thought of something similar, yes But you'll just have to wait and see on that one XD lol

[SilverMyst]

Okay! Added some more review responses Now I'm going back to working on the next chapter. Again, I hope to have it up either tonight or tomorrow <3

[Guest Dark Serpent Cat]

okay and I choose all of the above

[SilverMyst]

I had a feeling you would XD lol

[Guest Dark Serpent Cat]

yeah well the only thing I don't like was the cross dressing though

[SilverMyst]

yeah well the only thing I don't like was the cross dressing though

Crossplaying is more fun XD lol

[Guest Dark Serpent Cat]

Crossplaying is more fun XD lol

What do you mean cross playing?

Also the only times I like Harry cross dressing are in Addams family crossover like the fic Harveste Addams and this one fic where he went as a dark fairy to a Halloween ball hosted by Kingsley who Harry had a crush on and Kingsley was going to make Harry his (also Kingsley was dressed up as Blade)

[SilverMyst]

What do you mean cross playing?

Also the only times I like Harry cross dressing are in Addams family crossover like the fic Harveste Addams and this one fic where he went as a dark fairy to a Halloween ball hosted by Kingsley who Harry had a crush on and Kingsley was going to make Harry his (also Kingsley was dressed up as Blade)

Crossplaying is what they call it when you cosplay a character of the opposite gender. Cosplay comes from combining the words Costume Roleplay, though it is more commonly used among the anime community than it would be for a more... sexual situation. They just call that Roleplaying XD lol

[Guest Dark Serpent Cat]

Oh OK

how's the chapter coming along and will you be giving more hints as to Harry's other mates soon

Also I have just thought of it but I kind of can imagine Hagrid/Harry also having a daddy/son kink

I mean if you think about Hagrid's reaction to a baby Harry still makes me think of a mating bond

However the whole father/son kink well if you think about Hagrid had been there always for Harry and sure he was goofy and foolish but I do think he would have made a good dad and he was almost fatherly with Harry

I don't know I just think I want all of the mates to call Harry son even Charlie and the twins especially if the creatures adjust to what their mate needs at the time like the wolves in Twilight

In fact I have once talked to a person and I suggested making a crossover fanfic where Harry when he is still a child probably meets a year older Jacob Black after being taken away from the Dursley's and Jacob, though not a wolf yet, still imprints on to Harry

Now after all that had happened with the Dursley's it would naturally take some time for Harry to think of who ever rescued him as the father so since he needs a father and the wolves change to what ever their mates need well Jacob changes into Harry's 'father'

And then that comes into play when they get older and start to mate

[SilverMyst]

Chapter is already at... 11 pages. And I'm not done Oo;; Ah well, I'm having fun and my muse demanded a sex scene, so pfffttttt. XD lol

Still working on it <3