JayDee

Looking through the a-z menus I am not seeing any stories showing a count of less than 1 [ie none showing (0) ]- maybe under the new software there needs to be at least one story in a sub catagory to show on the menus, but they’re there for adding a story in the drop downs? Edit: Which actually feels like a good thing in some ways, as on the old site I’d sometimes see a game and click on it, only to find any story had been deleted!

There’s a few folks been having trouble it sounds like, but there’s guidelines/workarounds supplied from the staff! I’ve found that clicking on the pop up on the main archive page – https://www.adult-fanfiction.org/ first then lets all the other direct links work ok, such as to profiles from the forum and so on. Just tried doing that, clicking it on the main page and then clicking your link above and that cleared the pop up for me on your link.

I never even heard of writing.com says here it’s been operating since 2000! Huh, I guess back then I was more fanfiction net (it was before the fictionpress split off and the adult content purges!) as well as livejournal, greyarchive and so on… Must have missed me by completely.

...well, thank you, if a link over shows up, let me know. Unless it’s a Link in a green tunic, making weird grunt noises and having a fairy shout at him to listen. Hey, thanks for the rec! This thread is so old I can’t even remember posting it, heh! I went and loaded the sample text on Amazon (boo! hiss!) to see the trigger warning list and whooo boy… “Authority/government officials” – The guys who show up but only rip Bodices that didn’t have the correct duty paid? “Candaulism” – They say some authors only list this one because the idea of people looking it up, gazing on example pictures, excites them. “Loving Spouse” – Eww! It really is depraved! “Spider Play” and, yep, a few pages into the sample on amazon, after the Evil Dead style plant life, there they are… but they’re all normal sized! Do they get giant later on? Or do the government officials stamp down on that sort of thing? Hey, thanks for the rec though! Appreciated.

I hope you have a great time! It’s been a while since anybody I knew got married. I swear I’ve had more wicker man invites lately. speaking of, this recently bumped thread from 2015 reminded me that I’d looked for sexy spider times a long time ago… Yua got me covered! The story of Eddie, and his adventures in the great wide op- wait, no,that was Tom Petty. I’m sure it’ll be worth the prep! I kinda like Shannon hearing about it and being all “Wait, we can just do that? Hey, Creator, I need a miracle… right now!” Kizzy: “...are you going to draw four cards or not?” Shannon’s suggestions were all, unfortunately, unprintable. Although even she has a soft spot for some Star Trek quotes from watching with Kizzy. Not just the one that saved her being sent back to Hell, but she’s a big fan of Commander Shelby saying “Data was available. I took him. We came.” Ah, you young folks with your modern tieflings. Back in my day we had Annah-of-the-Shadows being mean to us, and liked it. That’s pretty much it, I’ve tended to assume they’ve all had some form of either glamour or physical shapeshift. I figure some of the more outlandish demons were going for more extreme rejections of their original forms, like the snake guy from the Lupa story. Eparlegna was shown switching to a human looking form at the end of Whore of Heaven, too. But the big thing would be those fucking huge wings I continue to look forwward to it! Just had a short writing break myself due to a mixture of suddenly busy life and being gifted a game, but getting back on track now.

That user id 1296941646 was requested to be deleted in 2023 earlier in the thread, and deleted – Edit – possilbly a coincidence, but there was a new profile in the name Rivera created today!

And it makes it easier for users to quickly recognise and avoid whatever horrific crime against fiction I’ve committed! Everyone’s a winner :)

Good explanation! Just to add my tip: If users don’t want to link offsite they can load their 250x250 (or smaller) userpic direct as a forum userpic first, and then use the forum userpic link for the archive profile. It’s worked for me for years! It does mean the forum and archive userpic are the same, but I don’t mind using the same on both.

The Man on the Clapham Omnivorebus Review by @InBrightestDay February 6, 2026 at 12:00 AM Do we get any clues about what yours is about? More of that bounty hunter story? The Lake House? Spider Woman adventures? (a recent user was looking for really good insect porn...) I getcha though, I’m trying to leave time between a last draft and posting to really re-read and see things I missed first time round. I have been working on the challengestory set in the Buffy universe (on to chapter 6!), with a few more chapters to finish there, but the next thing I actually post will likely be Victims which is around 1/3 text from an old rpf story I’ve mine I’ve made changed details to be fictional, and maybe 2/3 new stuff – guy gets his dick bitten off by a “wolf” (yes her) and eaten alive. It’s a bit dark in places. Having done a few drafts I too need to leave it for a while before going back. Thank you for taking the time to review! I hugely appreciate it. I appreciate the negatives as well as the positives! Heh, I had it in my head like an action movie, bursting through the portal, kick ass music starts, heading towards the Omnivorebus, stop anybody being hurt… and then “Wow! that’s a great costume! Can I get a pic?” Sarsa might be sane again, or as close as she gets, and repentant, but she’s still Sarsa! ...and next morning it’s all on social media. The sad fact is I’d really messed his hands up in part 1, because I had the idea of him getting his hands messed up leading to a) accidentally spooging up Sarsa’s back, and b) being unable to resolve it himself. Then, for part 2 and further sexytimes, I needed a way for him to have use of his hands, and also for Sarsa to be so happy she’s like screw it, I’m giving in to the backwash spell horniness too! It kind of ties into Kizzy’s over-arching plan though, that all the demons may be capable of redemption, since meeting Shannon, being saved by Shannon, and realising she may have made one or two slightly unfortunate decisions over the billions of years. Maybe the only real difference between demons and angels is belief in what they are, to the extent that demon-targeted weapons only target demons helped by their own willpower? But it was mostly writing myself into a corner and back out again so he could fondle some demon dugs. Heh, thanks, had some fun with Sarsa brief role-playing the posh noblewoman type there. As for Kent… well, apart from pockets of poverty and deprivation I understand a lot of the southeast of England is very wealthy by comparison to a lot of the rest of the world (and much poorer than some hyper elite places!), but London has the most of both – but as a proud Londoner Dylan picked a target outside the city for gentle mockery. I’m sure Buckingham Palace’s recently received letters complaining about an individual’s sexual sins are sadly somewhat less funny… Glad the jokey bits landed though! For some folks, Biohazard tattoos have a speciifc meaning related to disease – for others, it’s just a cool symbol – I kind of liked it as an “this demon is a literal biohazard” type symbol, and the idea that Sarsa picked it herself as both self-awareness and to avoid letting Kizzy slap something too nerdy on her. Folks like a horny devil classic cartoon demon! ...plus having the eyes change meant I could have the “literally damned eyes” line that just appealed to me. It’s kind of like the Speed vs Speed 2 thing – in Speed they end up really close ‘cos of the closeness of death and so on, and Speed 2 it’s all over, new guy to meet. Sarsa saved his life AND fixed his fucked fingers so he’s especially emotionally disposed towards her! Plus, there was that horniness backwash. A bit of seperation after she goes back to America (and possibly starts double dating alongside Shannon) and getting properly into post nut clarity and he’d probably realise he was over-reacting to just having really really good sex. Or maybe he just falls in love easily. He’s young! Ok, yeah, I definitely threw some of the transformation details in for your reaction I figured nobody else would read it! But I also feel I explained it in character of how we’ve only ever seen her previously with her true form submerged and hidden, whereas when she starts forgiving herself she ends up back as more of a badass warrior angel form… with special skills for writing. Amazonians can be nerds too, even if her nerdiness is different to Kizzy’s. One likes Deep Space 9, the other’s a Babylon 5 gal. Plus once they remove the binding she can change form and get the cartoon devil selfies again :D Lupa is the most likely if it was any of the main four, but by the time Kizzy’s got her license and set up the agency it is years after the Slumber Party and even the ending of You!, so it may have been a suggestion of numerous other associates Kizzy’s built up over the years. From another unfinished story, I don’t even have a title for yet, in which Kizzy and Kate are called in to help with some weird shit by the police: ...It’s probably someone unexpected, like Janet. At least on Saturday morning they can go out and do other things! Thank you again, I genuinely don’t think it was all that great, but it was finished and I hadn’t done that for a while with a story so it did feel pretty good. And it got me back working on the Buffy Challenge, which also has been feeling good. Was pretty cool to re-connect here, too! I know I’d had the odd email with you where I was sometimes I bit slow to check in and respond, but I kind of went through a period where I was a bit slow to do anything. Hopefully better now! I am looking forward to your next story whatever it turns to be!

Chapter 5 draft finished! There’s a character called Kevin, named waaaaay back in 2016 when this thing was actually plotted out (see post with cast list earlier in this thread), so no relation to any Kevins from other stories on here. For example, here’s the legally distinct Kevin in this Buffy story – See? There’s nothing even vaguely- what? Oh, that. That’s just a reference to one of my old LA set stories. Buffy is from LA! ...am I getting sued? Also, for any passing readers wondering why Willow would be ok with a suggestion, by this stage in the story she’s, uh, embraced some of the more porntastic tropes. This thing is employing a lot good ol’ porn tropes. In one chapter Buffy penetrates two vampires at the same time. Admittedly in their hearts, with wood, but the spirit’s there. In chapter 7 there’s a pizza delivery. No fucking clue how I thought I’d do it all in 10k words. 10k words into this thing and she was barely past holding hands, never mind cheerfully engaging in the kind of activities that would make Urban Dictionary contributors go home, take a very stiff drink, and think about their life choices. Little break to take a shot at finishing off one of my old “Turning an RPF fic I wrote into something entirely fictional” efforts, with much the same cheerful lack of quality, artistic morals, or writing talent, as the folks who copy and paste over their fanfic names to become massively famous.

Quite right. I’d forgotten she was his natural mother, that’s my bad, although really it’s common sense with him being the step-brother and her being the step-mother, so perhaps less than forgotten it’s more, had lost the connection. Googled that beach too! Does looks like a pleasant place. First review I saw noted local bars, so I guess you can also get drunk and go lie on the sand Keeping us on our toes with the variety!

17 chapter or so then? They were making photo and moving picture porn in the 19th century, he could have just been an early adopter

I think I have old fashioned review reply links at the bottom of all mine anyway, so I’ll leave mine down the depths of the site where they belong! I can start updating it for any new stories though

I was having a bit of a discussion recently about feature creep with these things, how you gotta draw a line and say no, not exploring that, it’s already X words let’s just get it finished! You could always save it for a “Domme Maria Side Story” oneshot 😛 There’s something about NYC isn’t there? I went myself, years ago. Looking out from the Empire State Building viewing deck, or out over the water at the statue of liberty, or the Brooklyn Bridge, or Time’s Square, or a guy with his pants around his ankles shooting up in Washington Square Park… it’s all so much like the movies it is unreal. They’re doing a bang up job of preserving it from the pictures I saw! It’s great for a city to have some good public spaces like that. The ghost’s originally from an earlier time, right? Been a while since I read the first parts. Must have been a hell of a nice surprise to find porn didn’t have to be cheap books or woodcuts! Oh, yeah, absolutely! There’s a buncha stuff you can do in stories or even with special effects or whatever in shows that doesn’t fly in real life. Was just a random thought tbh, I probably shouldn’t even have mentioned it. Saving the best for last – a fine tradition! Will get onto the next chapter as soon as I have enough free time.

Easy to do, and hopefully was an easy fix! Unlike that time I added an extra space to some code and, long story short, there’s a piece of land nobody can walk on for millions of years until the background radiation drops.

Possibly just a firefox issue again, but I was just trying different subdomains from the menu and for some reason the “Marvel Verse” link under “books / comics / manga” doesn’t bring anything up. I noticed hovering over the others has a box at the bottom side of the screen with the domain link, but I don’t see one for marvel. Within my profile when I look at stories I see one story shows under “Xmen” but on the archive menu at the top under comics the menu drop down which doesn’t work for me says “marvel verse” instead. Everything else seems to be working! Figured I’d flag it in case either anyone else had it, or it wasn’t known about.

Could use an actual Fight Club quote! “do I give you the ass or the crotch?" heh. Ignore me. Good luck with it though, sounds like there’s potential! I’ve done a rough chapter 4 on mine and into an even rougher chapter 5. These things end up longer than expected sometimes!

...eh, haven’t had a whole lot of ‘em. One of mine was so unhappy it inspired another writer to write both a oneshot really exploring the misery and a multiparter to give the plucky heroine a more upbeat fate. How’s about you. Favor the happily ever after?

I don’t think I read that one, but a quick google suggests it was a Girls Behind Bars type story? There’s always a lot of room for new stories in that environment. I’d probably mess it up and instead end up with it all far too cheerful and non sexual. The Buffy version of 1970s British Sitcom Porridge. Naffy the Vampire Slayer. I’ll see myself out

One time I got into a really fowl mood and wrote that Naruto turned into a chicken story. I tried. They stopped me, shook their heads, said “Write what you know.”

...well, damn, that does make much more sense. In my defence poetry critical thinking is waaaaaaay down my ability scale. Also normal critical thinking. Some might even say just thinking. Makes sense. You just don’t tend to think hiring one would be a good idea until you’re turning the Earth for potatoes and whoops there’s a plague ridden femur. I liked it, but I also have a soft spot for the original Scary Movie too No worries!

Ah shucks, that kinda thing might chip away at my deep seated self loathing!

Oh, it’ll be that newfangled alt.sex.stories over on that usenet I expect. I’ll get my 56k modem out and soon be speeding down the information superhighway! JayDee, never managed to summon a dragon, but did attract a drake with a dropped sandwich by the river.

I’ve been out of fanfic so long I don’t even know what the other website is anymore It were livejournal, long ago…

I went and re-cleared all the cache and the rest of it again and that seems to have done it – originals showing now Thank you again!