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Though if you can think of something else to do with her, that could work too. With charlotte, had a thought for her character. I can see her being shy around the cook, letting her try on dresses and not looking. Tiana says it's fine but she respects her too much. Before her 'big chance' so to speak, she just likes spending time with her and relaxing. Tiana books sessions to give her time off as a favour every now and then under the name 'naveen' Also, i think tiana's covername as resistance leader should be 'naveen'

Darn.... thought it would be a good way to hint that the empire isn't as anti magic as it seems. Maybe there's a slight leak from the vat into the sewers/slave town and tiana gets exposed. A quarantine could be set up blocking her from getting to the witch granny, which stalls hiccup and forces him to get to know them and cause a distraction, leading to his starting the rebellion. Charlotte is probably very hands about the attempt on so as to save tiana quicker. And probably carrying tiana.

Yes. He's a television director famous for mixing genres or doing twists on thrm his work typically has an urban spin or uses casual conversation to geat effect, forgoing the grammar-ness to acheive a casualification of speaking. Like that Heavy pop culture influences He did buffy, the first couple of avengers movies, angel, dollhouse, doctor horrible's sing along blog and others Funny thing is whem he wrote his first script, they thought he was an idiot for trying to be scary and funny at the same time and micro-managed it so bad the actors were campaigning against a sequel even on set. Then they let him do his own thing on tv and the rest is history. Any ideas in the frog thing?

It's worth it. It was cancelled criminally short, but would have been joss whedon's magnum pus if it had kept going. Jus make sure you watch in the right order, the network idiots messed up eposode order, among.other things. Train job comes second. They showwd the pilot halfway through the season

Actually i can see the sorceresses reacying with horror at the explanation amd Queen Idunna smugly telling hiccup (in front of them) 'And that's why you always respect your staff'

I meant the series firelfy. The line vetween geisha.and prostitute has blurred even further and they've unionised. You don't want yo tick off the Intergalactic pleasure union. She's a very useful characyer for infiltration, sweet talking, high society knowledge etc. And also good with a gun Hey RED_LIGHT_ZONE. What do you think of the ideas?

So, while i stand by dark legends not giving us mich to work with, if we mix the voodoo ladybfrom princess and the frof and dorris the witch, we could have her teach tiana to make livijg gingerbread men as couriers and soldiers. They'd make great underground agents for the resistance, they're completely disposable and hiccup's reaction would be hilarious If you've seen firefly you know how much power and knowledge charlotte potentially has. Though as 'head of the union" tiana probably hears all the gossip. People ignore servants and slaves, they tend to tslk in front of them. Though with charlotte, they'd probably brag about their posisition or 'secret orders' to make themselves feel big. With tiana's gossip access confriming which is real or empty talk she could know almost everything in the empire. Once she gets started of course. I feel we should mix the frog thing in, but i'm not sure how. Maybe she's turned into a frog the first time hiccup comes by and charlotte forces him to stay until she's changed back.

do, for the big hero six story i found this image showing the height difference between honey and gogo: https://yamino.deviantart.com/art/HoneyGogo-Awkward-Hugs-495940326 we could have a bit of a running gag that honey cannot hug hiro or gogo without wither burying them in her breasts or kneeling down. and she keeps forgetting to kneel down. Hiro and Gogo have a wordless sympathy over it, even before gogo realises she like honey.

darn. well i do believe in this, so there’s that. thought if you do read this RED_LIGHT_ZONE please give feedback

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Yeah.... did i write too much? I feel a bit guilty but i really liked where this was going. I did try to invite people to join. Also, good to see you! How are you? And did you like anything you saw here?

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charlotte insists she is tiana’s wife. not hiccups, and he can only have her if they both agree

that works well. it could be used to set up the final fight, a final twost or anything, and also gives us a chance to get to know charlotte and tiana better.

okay, but not right away. we need to spread out his first and second visits to the heartland. It could also be the tower florian uses to slip in and out of, and why he;s able to follow hiccup. that could actually set up a twist, where by rescuing the rebellions florian sets up the end somewhere else.

so to revisit an idea i had. I think Charlotte should be in love with tiana. not sensual love though, she prefers her company and wants to shower her with affection. she doesn’t mind the idea physical love with her, it’s just less special to a pleasure slave. she’s also very protective as a result, even from hiccup and will adorably pout and hug her close if he tries to get a session alone with her,

I also thought of them! though how would we use them? I was going to suggest that they make a cameo in the epilouge as his kids by those women, much younger than their canon. other than that, i don;t see them adding too much.

FN. not sure about this one.

by PM ing me, i can be a Beta reader, checking chapter spelling, punctuation, and coherency and sending back notes. It’s a form of collaboration. basically i could help you with the story if you wanted. just thought i’d offer

so i think she’d be the ‘two-faced’ mother. the sweetest and most supportive, so long as it suits her and most likely to sell him out of go behind his back. An opportunist sweet-talker. a salesman, in other words.

also ‘strange idea’. I meant PM me here, but i’ll get you a link https://www.fanfiction.net/~strangeidea

out of curiousity, what kind of mother do you see ursula being?

That’s brilliant.

Do you have a fanfiction.net account? I JUST found out how to send beta reading files. PM me if you do

Formatting problem but Hiccup heard the door open behind him and sighed. All this work wasted. He turned to see which of his caretakers was gong to tell him no. Mim grinned curiously from the doorway