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Desiderius Price

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  1. The deus ex is certainly prone to abuse, but I can see its use in situations where you’re focusing on a character’s reflection, helplessness, etc, or in a comedy that’s not taking itself seriously. (Or, in a superhero story where it’s pretty much a given.) I generally avoid deus-ex’s, especially “just-in-the-nick-of-time” as the countdown reaches “one second remaining” types. My distaste grew while working on my potter fanfic ages ago because it kinda destroys realism in the odds. Sure, occasionally there’s a white knight that shows up, but not very often. Most very often, the victim perishes. And, developing a reputation to not write deus ex helps with the suspense to the reader, because they won’t know if character in distress will live or die - DP
  2. “alternative”
  3. Ceiling
  4. maintenance
  5. Diving
  6. shore
  7. Laundry
  8. Some days, when I write “Ivanka Fashion Academy”, I have to wonder, Why?

  9. If you’ve read and understand the guidelines/TOS, the mods generally won’t bite.
  10. Pumpkin. (Must resist urge to go to the kitchen and make some pumpkin muffins….)
  11. Belly
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