Desiderius Price

Half of chapter 26 was me stalling on the deed. (I didn’t want to, but had to.) And then there’s today, when I realized that chapter 28 was the best spot to end the story. Chapters 29-30 now form the starting point for a sequel, so some of the loose ends from Dale’s Game will be wrapped up there. (Not certain when I’ll start posting that, because there’s the little issue of the halloween story.) And, thank you for the review. It’s nice to know when it’s being read/enjoyed, makes my day

Thank you for the review, hopefully you’ll enjoy the rest of the chapters when you read them. I’ve enjoyed writing the characters too, most of the time, doesn’t really seem like I’m writing them, rather they’re experiencing their own lives.

The final chapter, chapter 28 is posted. Bit sudden, but I kinda realized that this was a better end than what I had originally planned. Thus, the extra material will likely form a sequel, where I’m not as rushed.

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Chapter 27 has been posted.

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23? Yikes! I’m at five (and I’ve promised myself not to start a new story until I finish Dale’s Game). That’s five posted… several others lurking on the hard drive, including the start of the sequel to Fiends.

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Title: Bones (or similarly titled) Tags: Minor2 MCD Nec Rape etc... Summary: Truth or Dare while trespassing naked on an ancient Indian burial ground; nothing can go wrong, right?

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Chapter 26, “Birthday” is available. (As I realized I’m chapters ahead, decided to do a double header weekend.) Reviews, as always, are appreciated, and will typically be responded to on the review thread.