Desiderius Price

If it’s “Butt ::slap:: sir ::slap:: the ::slap:: Pizza ::slap:: ….”, isn’t that technically two speakers? Unless this person was slapping themself, I’d say that it be broken into paragraphs. (I’m counting the slapping as speech here.

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Yeah, I had recently a good 5k toward ironing out some of my character’s flaws, but it was kinda overboard, so I killed it. So, I left them at that point where they can jump further by tripping over their shoelaces. Made a subsequent section more challenging, but I think I managed.

An allergy to oysters, but eats them anyways because they’re so delicious, that comes to mind.

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Chapter 12, “March” is now posted, enjoy. - DP

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Pay no attention to the significance of it being painted grass green, not to be confused with forest green.

PWP – porn without plot, or as I prefer, “Plot, what Plot?” I suggested that as a PWP has no plot, it would have no skeleton to seen

Dunno, it’s more fun playing with my gun. I like to strike a balance, I don’t every detail to be unimportant, but I don’t want every detail to be important either. So, a blue herring in a bunch of red herrings might be very significant, or it might just be that the packer is color blind.

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Aw, so you’re a PWP type of person …

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All of my original stories on here, including the halloween/holiday oneshots, are from the same universe, most characters are connected in some fashion. So, for me, writing down a plot bunny has a good chance of being usable, even if it’s a spinoff story. But yep, recording them helps retain them and you can go back, even with a fickle muse … may be a challenge. And sometimes, those ideas are rejected, not because they’re lousy, but because it’ll distract too much from the major thrust to the story, or simply overwhelm it. (I recently pruned what would’ve been chapter 16 from Dale’s Game because it was too much, even though the underlying premise was sound in terms of what the characters needed in skill improvements. Sad to remove 5kwords and start the chapter over….not really removed, I do save them off into a separate file, just in case.)

I’ve gotten disciplined enough to jot the idea down, or put it into my database. (Which is useful, came in handy for Dale’s game, turning the situation from food poisoning into an allergy, allowing me to create an interesting trait for his character.) Even with original, if you’re developing a universe/world-building, after a while, you’ve got the same level of constraints; again, I ran into that with Dale’s Game, where the end point of the story is fixed, very fixed, within the universe, and the story was developing fast, so it was easier to make it a year later than to completely rewrite and slow it down w/o any benefit.

The Winter Sky, Jip Van Kakerken (it’s a song from the Endreal mod to Skyrim…)

Ron/Hermione, Harry/OC-muggle (and I can’t bring the fics to AFF due to the OC… ) Warning, my portrayal of their sixth year makes canon look like a street festival.

BTW, I fixed my earlier posts.

Have you read it yet? Several stories (Dolbourne & Jefferey), I’m writing more episodic, because they’re less in terms of overall plot but in more small stories tied together by the same main character(s). So, having micro starts/ends is actually helpful in terms of practice, and tightly scoping the plot because I need it to resolve by the end of the episode. I might split up those two stories, just because they’re spanning many years. My potter fanfic (the one on more or less permanent hiatus) was over 600kwords before I went and edited it down … it’s now at a more modest 500kwords. Its prequel (complete) is almost 180k. Though, my average is lower because I’ve also got two really short ones (~200 words each).