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Welcome! Yes, there is a section for original works, I’m writing a series myself. - DP

First, thanks for the review. I loved writing the dream, though I did wonder if I had issues It seemed a good way to capture Jarred’s insecurities, because guys typically don’t express them well, if they express them at all. And yes, as I like to show rather than tell, I had to demonstrate his body reacting, that it did rattle him a bit. Susie/Clara likely did go a bit too fast, but I was focusing more on them teaching Jarred a thing or two. (That, and getting Jarred/Susie into that closet.) And Dale’s accounts are still suspended due to his grounding…. Well, glad you enjoyed it and your reviews help me appreciate the reader’s perspective. - DP

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I’ll probably find by the end of the week that I should’ve waited like I normally do. This weekend, the chapter grew and had to be split, and I finished them both, which means I have material to post this weekend and next, therefore, the chapter 7 is being released a tad early, today, two days instead of a week late, and I can post 8 next weekend. - DP

Chapter 7, “Fallout” is now posted.

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