Desiderius Price

Review for “The Repair Guy” Definitely made for a fun write after finishing my Halloween story!

I like vegetarians… properly grilled and seasoned to taste.

Author: Desiderius Price Title: The Repair Guy Summary: Alyssia opts for extended service after the repair guy shows up to fix her A/C in his underwear. Feedback: Sure, feedback with constructive criticism! Fandom: Original Pairing: N/A Warnings: Exhib, MF, Other, WIP Solo story or chaptered story: Chaptered URL (AFF): http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600108774 URL (AO3): https://archiveofourown.org/works/55313575 Review Replies: http://www2.adult-fanfiction.org/forum/topic/59549-jaimies-campfire-starrebels/ (ie, I needed to write something nice and fluffy after I finished my Halloween story...)

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Life is nature’s way of keeping meat fresh…. (to quote Doctor Who)

Funny enough, IIRC, the summer heat wave many years ago (in a house w/o AC) as a kid is how I started sleeping nude.

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I came up with a summary for my new story today (not the halloween, not yet posted)…. “Alyssia opts for extended service after the repair guy shows up to fix her A/C in his underwear.” That ought to wet the appetite, I think.

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Bob Prime goes into the jungle and becomes Amazon Prime.

What’s right? What’s wrong? It probably depends on the intended audience, to some degree. If there was a precise science to it, I’d have licked this ages ago, instead, I find it to be rather...fuzzy. (No, I do not mean a fetish there)

Like most things, requires practice, and don’t be afraid to revise it! Still not great at it, most of the time I muddle through it, because something is typically better than nothing.

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Given the time/effort/reward involved, few are in writing for the money. And those who do, they’re the lucky few that effectively won the lottery, are now screenwriters or best sellers.

So, if anti-Bob and Bob meet, it’s a big bang? (Thinking antimatter/matter)

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I hereby banish Bob to the other thread! Fred/George, things can be better in pairs.

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