Desiderius Price

You even have a review on it.

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Good, I need some bedtime reading in a couple of hours.

I’d almost suggest a more classic twist. Instead of Jake seeking his mother out, he surreptitiously sells them (based on his dick, of course). Unbeknownst to Jake, his mother, having marital issues with his father (or divorced and single), buys one and uses it. Truth comes out...over a big family Christmas dinner? Think we’ve got a holiday story for you to write, @T_B.

Aw, misunderstood there… It’s definitely a good premise for Halloween.

We can’t put stories themselves into the forums, otherwise, I’d encourage you to put in a few sentences or so as a post; trying to draw you out here, give you a bit of confidence Or, maybe somebody else takes up the challenge? We can always use more Halloween stories. [btw, my plate’s too full and I prefer to write in my original universe, which wouldn’t permit this storyline.]

We’ll encourage you! Heck, this premise could even make for a good Halloween story (going on now).

Hey @T_B, with all these very specific challenges you post, I suggest you write them. It’s much better as a writer because you’ve got to mentally picture it a whole bunch of times as you describe it; more bang for the buck, so to speak. Sure, the first story might be filled with plot holes, grammar issues, etc, but with a little practice, you can become a smut author!

Thanks. I needed that name for a discount mortuary and it works good for Halloween too

Thank you, thank you for the review! Obviously being from Adam’s point of view (and his younger brother’s), I don’t tell the full picture of what’s going through Father Jordan’s mind. And if Hope had suspected Adam’s fate, she would not have dropped him off like that, instead, picking up Oliver too and bringing them elsewhere..

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And so is my story, enjoy the misbehaving priests!

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It’s also about quality, and since I already have one story written, I’ve got less impetus to finish a second one in time.

For example, I needed a new (minor) character for my HP fanfic, a handful of scenes. “Ash”, muggleborn with black hair, blue eyes. He’s got a fear of termites, vegetables, and toads, but loves frogs (even has one named “Kermit”). He’s generally pessimistic and shy (but longs to be otherwise), merciful. He’s got two older brothers named “Colbert” and “Ian”, also being raised by a single mother that’s a law firm secretary. He thought he saw his father at King’s Cross on his way to Hogwarts; the father’s a solicitor/lawyer but also a dead beat who doesn’t even pay the child support that’s due to the mother. While it’s unlikely I’ll explore each one of these traits in depth, they can produce some unusual reactions/behaviors.