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Oh, thanks for asking about the method. It comes from an interview I heard on the radio a few months ago, about slaughtering pigs in the most humane way (that we know of) which used earmuffs with electrodes in them, the jolt of electricity is supposed to fry the brain stem and render them unconscious so the blood can be then drained -- I altered it to headphones, but still, same idea, because the father needs it to be relatively mark-free and quick. As to processing, I was thinking along the lines of plastination (google that one up) to convert the body into the final product, where fats are replaced with a flexible polymers. Oliver’s a smart kid, so while he doesn’t know the method, he sees through the BS that’s littered about him – I’ve got plans for him in other stories. And definitely, thank you for reviewing!!!!!

That’s how I’ve done it, because proofreading can be a never ending cycle, and it’s not like we’re using professional editors here, right?

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Thanks for the review. I even found myself a bit disturbed after I wrote it!

No problem, that’s the reason I put the code there, to warn the squeamish and/or are in a country where it’s illegal to view.

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When I see it posted, I’ll try to read+review.

Leave a review! (It’s like doggie treats, but for your authors.)

You even have a review on it.

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Good, I need some bedtime reading in a couple of hours.

I’d almost suggest a more classic twist. Instead of Jake seeking his mother out, he surreptitiously sells them (based on his dick, of course). Unbeknownst to Jake, his mother, having marital issues with his father (or divorced and single), buys one and uses it. Truth comes out...over a big family Christmas dinner? Think we’ve got a holiday story for you to write, @T_B.

Aw, misunderstood there… It’s definitely a good premise for Halloween.

We can’t put stories themselves into the forums, otherwise, I’d encourage you to put in a few sentences or so as a post; trying to draw you out here, give you a bit of confidence Or, maybe somebody else takes up the challenge? We can always use more Halloween stories. [btw, my plate’s too full and I prefer to write in my original universe, which wouldn’t permit this storyline.]

We’ll encourage you! Heck, this premise could even make for a good Halloween story (going on now).

Hey @T_B, with all these very specific challenges you post, I suggest you write them. It’s much better as a writer because you’ve got to mentally picture it a whole bunch of times as you describe it; more bang for the buck, so to speak. Sure, the first story might be filled with plot holes, grammar issues, etc, but with a little practice, you can become a smut author!

Thanks. I needed that name for a discount mortuary and it works good for Halloween too

Thank you, thank you for the review! Obviously being from Adam’s point of view (and his younger brother’s), I don’t tell the full picture of what’s going through Father Jordan’s mind. And if Hope had suspected Adam’s fate, she would not have dropped him off like that, instead, picking up Oliver too and bringing them elsewhere..

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And so is my story, enjoy the misbehaving priests!